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THEIDEATORA MONASH GENERATOR EVENT
MONASH.EDU/ENTREPRENEURSHIP
How
to
Pitch
Just because someone tells you to jump
off a cliff doesn’t always mean you
should do it.
This presentation will inform you about
improving your pitch message, style
and delivery.
However – listen to your gut
and what you think is important. No
one knows your story better than you
do.
What is an Elevator Pitch?
A	short,	simple	description of	your	
business	idea	that	anyone	could	
understand	by	the	time	you	ride	
up	three	floors	in	a	typical	
elevator.
You have
to be more
interesting
than angry
birds
MAKE A
If	your	audience	doesn’t	understand	what	you’re	offering,	you’ve	
failed.	Every	word	you	speak	should	work	to	explain	and	clarify	that	
purpose	— that’s	why	your	audience	is	there	in	the	first	place.
LESSIS MORE
[More or Less]
Hook
A	question	or	a	statement	that	
really	entices	the	audience	to	
stay	with	you	for	the	full	pitch
The Opportunity
•What	problem	or	opportunity	have	you	
identified?
•What	is	your	solution	to	this	problem	or	how	
do	you	plan	to	capture	the	opportunity?
•Which	customer	pain	will	you	alleviate?
•What	is	your	vision	of	the	business	and	why	
do	you	care?
Core Structure
1
The Market
•Which	group	of	customers	will	you	target?
•How	big	is	the	potential	market	and	how	fast	
is	it	growing?
•Who	is	your	competition	and	why	will	your	
start-up	prevail?
Core Structure
2
The Business Model (How
will you make money?
• How	much	will	you	charge	customers	for	your	
product	and	why	will	they	pay	the	price?
• What	are	the	variable	and	fixed	costs	of	your	start-
up	and	how	much	profit	will	it	generate?
• How	many	customers	can	you	win	over	time	and	
why	do	you	think	they	will	come	on	board?
Core Structure
3
3 key talking points
•What	is	it	that	you’re	doing	&	why	does	it	
matter?	
•How	is	it	better?	
•Why	are	you	doing	what	you’re	doing?
What people
should be thinking
I didn’t know that
I’m glad I do now
I’d like to know more
Don’t be salesy
How to Say It
“No word was ever as effective
as a rightly timed pause”“
Mark Twain
Interesting	story	with		a	compelling	call	to	action
Strong,	succinct	problem-solution	statement
Clear	description	of	how	your	solution	is	innovative
Tips for your Pitch
Don’t	cram	in	buzz	words	– focus	on	what	matters
Know	your	market	and	how	you’ll	tap	into	it
Why	is	your	solution	urgent?	What	impact	will	it	
have?
Know	your	customers	&	your	users
Who	are	your	competitors?	What	is	your	competitive	
differentiation	and	how	will	you	get	market	share?
Don’t	bash	your	competition.
What	traction	do	you	already	have	(trials,	users)?
Let	your	passion	shine	through		
Remember	the	“A-Ha”	moment
What	technical	steps	need	to	be	achieved?
How	much	money	do	you	need	to	make	this	work?	
What	will	you	do	with	this	money?
Management	team	and/or	advisors	with	relevant	
experience?
IP	&	other	forms	of	defensibility	for	your	business	
(patents,	licenses,	exclusive	relationships,	etc.)
1. A Minute is Too LongIn	the	real	world,	you	basically	have	20	seconds	to	get	someone	
engaged	or	you	might	as	well	go	home
2. Don’t Linger on the ObviousRehashing	facts	seasoned	investors	have	seen	hundreds	of	times	is	
wasted	oxygen
3. Create a Story Around Your InnovationEven	friendly	audiences	need	to	be	won	over
Don’t	expect	everyone	to	get	it
3. Templates are BoringStarting	point	– but	modify	because	it	won’t	be	perfectly	suited
(Boring but Useful)
Template
Hook
Brief	product/service	description
Brief	target	market	description
Competitive	landscape
How	you	will	make	money
Resources	needed	(e.g.	$,	expertise)
Returns/payback	to	investors
Memorable	tagline/pitch	closing
Do Not Get Bogged Down
Present	a	(nagging)	problem	
&	(massive	potential	for	
success)	solution
Keep	it	clean	&	simple,	make	
sure	they	understand	the	
value	proposition
Highlight	customer	benefits,	
not	technical	benefits
The KISS of Death
INEFFECTIVE
Our	medical	technology	is	the	first	automatic	anesthetic gas	scavenging	system	
that	will	scan	patients	using	an	anesthetic vaporizer	thus	providing	analytical,	
diagnostic	and	therapeutic	techniques	similar	to	those	used	by	National	
Laboratories	in	2007,	but	that	were	updated	in	2011	to	include	the	new	
immunology	reports
EFFECTIVE
We	provide	the	most	accurate	medical	diagnostic	equipment	available	on	the	
market.
too much detail
Geek Speak
INEFFECTIVE
We	provide	non-penetrable	debridement	medical	
equipment	technologies	for	lymph	node	excision	by	
integrating	with	our	485I-bit	encryption	algorithm	
that	is	integrated	with	the	newest	245-bit	Dorland	
operators.
EFFECTIVE
We	allow	medical	professionals	to	operate	on	
cancer	patients	using	the	least	invasive	equipment	
on	the	market.
listeners tune out what they
don’t understand
You	need	to	get	into	the	nitty gritty	
for	key	things	like	
• business	model
• how	your	product	works	and	why	
it	is	unique
• competitive	landscape
• the	makeup	of	your	management	
team
• key	metrics
Dive In
Identify	problem	solved	or	need	addressed	in	
1-2	sentences
We	allow	x-ray	free	real-time	imaging	for	
surgical	guidance
If	possible,	mention	a	customer	who	uses	your	
product	or	that	has	expressed	interest
Australian	Immigration	has	determined	
that	we	are	the	only	system	that	can	
quickly	screen	people	at	security	
checkpoints	for	highly	communicable	
diseases
Target Market Description
relate to a need
Acknowledge Competition
Don’t	competitor	bash
Identify	landscape	&	where	you	fit
& neutralize it
When	discussing	your	business	
model,	the	most	important	thing	
to	get	across	to	your	audience	is	
how	you’re	going	to	make	money
If	you	have	a	revolutionary	
business	model,	make	sure	it	
doesn’t	sound	scary
Revenue Model
Be Concrete
Don’t	be	vague	– have	
concrete	details	(but	don’t	
make	them	up
Show	you	have	thought	
about	the	details	of	your	
opportunity	and	you	
understand	what	you	are	
asking	for
Too	many	entrepreneurs	cross	over	the	line	between	
passionate	enthusiasm	&	fraudulent	misrepresentation
Common	lies:
• “Our	projections	are	conservative”
• “Boeing	will	sign	our	contract	next	week”
• “Key	employees	will	join	us	as	soon	as	we	get	funded”
• “Gartner	says	our	market	will	be	$50B	by	2020”
• “No	one	else	is	doing	what	we	do”
• “Several	firms	are	doing	due	diligence”
• “Patents	make	our	business	defensible”
• “All	we	have	to	do	is	get	1%	of	the	market”
Don’t Lie (You would think this
goes without saying)
Tell a Story
Stories	connect	with	an	audience	on	a	much	deeper	level	
than	facts
Even	if	you're	presenting	on	something	technical,	try	to	
weave	personal	stories	into	your	entire	speech	to	relate	
back	to	the	audience	and	keep	them	engaged
Let the	story	show	your	passion
Don’t Get Sidetracked
Don’t	confuse	the	
audience	with	
superfluous	
comments
theIDEATOR - How to Pitch
End with a Memory Cue
You	are	up	against	lots	of	competitors	in	a	short	timeframe	
It	can	be	almost	impossible	for	judges	to	remember	the	
details	about	everyone	who	pitched
Offer	some	type	of	memory	cue	to	make	your	
presentation	stand	out
theIDEATOR - How to Pitch
pitch	to	people	outside	of	your	team	
and	get	a	fresh	pair	of	ears
o Reality	Check	station
o Rapid	Fire	Round
o Other	teams
Practice, Practice, Practice
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