SECOND DRAFTING SCRIPT FOR ENIGMA
- 1. “ENIGMA” By Lucy Clayton RINGWOOD SCHOOL ACADEMY HAMPSHIRE BH24 1SE 01425 481273 sixthform.admin@ringwood.hants.sch.uk
- 2. 2 FADE IN: SCENE 1: EXT. LOCATION #1- THE LAKE- MORNING A quiet, isolated but captivating lake. The water is slightly off coloured, the ground is dirty and the sky is slightly grey as the birds chirp terrifyingly. The lake is eerie, where GEORGE is lying unconscious on the ground, cuts and bruising over his face. His eyes move suddenly, followed by a blank screen. SCENE 2: INT. LOCATION #2- GEORGE’S HOME- MORNING An early morning in GEORGE’S home, a modern and spacious setting, where GEORGE’S WIFE is watching a news report that is being shown on the television in the lounge, whilst sitting drinking a cup of coffee on the leather sofa. The camera moves into the scene of the crime that is being shown on the news. TV NEWS REPORTER Hello, what events occurred this morning? CUT TO: SCENE 3: EXT. LOCATION #1- THE LAKE- MORNING An early morning by the quiet, isolated lake. Forensics are seen dressed in white suits with police tape surrounding the scene of the crime. A POLICE OFFICER is answering questions to a news team, reporting on the crime. GEORGE is still lying unconscious on the ground, cuts and bruising over his face.
- 3. 3 POLICE OFFICER A dangerous incident happened here at the lake resulted in an adult male, who cannot be named right now, seriously injured when fishing. TV NEWS REPORTER Is there any more information you could give us? POLICE OFFICER At this current time, there is nothing more I can report until further information is given. TV NEWS REPORTER Ok, thank you very much for your time. POLICE OFFICER turns and continues investigating the crime scene. SCENE 4: INT. LOCATION #2- GEORGE’S HOME- MORNING GEORGE’S WIFE places her coffee on the side. TRANSITION TO: GEORGE making a coffee early in the morning. GEORGE gets ready for his day at the lake, fishing. He makes himself breakfast, puts his fisherman outfit on, gets together his equipment, before entering his car to drive towards the lake.
- 4. 4 SCENE 5: INT. LOCATION #3- GEORGE’S CAR- MORNING GEORGE drives towards the lake whilst in the dark interior of his car, the equipment placed in the back, he has a firm look on his face. SCENE 6: EXT. LOCATION #1- THE LAKE- MORNING The lake has a cold and isolated feel as GEORGE arrives, carrying his equipment. He places it down on the floor, setting it up beside the lake. He sits down on his chair, before putting some bait on his rod, and casting his line into the water. He sits for some period of time, waiting for some action. GEORGE (EXCITABLE) It’s going to be a good day today! GEORGE laughs to himself, as he feels a slight tug on his rod. GEORGE (EXCITABLE) Here we go! GEORGE’s face turns as the tug on his rod gets more aggressive, pulling him closer to the lake. Suddenly, the rod is thrown into the lake as GEORGE lets go, before an attack, hauling GEORGE into the water as he screams. GEORGE (IN TERROR) AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
- 5. 5 GEORGE splashes around in the water, wriggling and screaming, trying to grab air. GEORGE (IN TERROR) AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! GEORGE’s head goes under water, silence fills the lake, followed by a blank screen. FADE IN: GEORGE is lying unconscious on the ground, cuts and bruising over his face. His eyes move suddenly, followed by a blank screen. SCENE 7: INT. LOCATION #2- GEORGE’S HOME- MORNING An early morning in GEORGE’S home, a modern and spacious setting, where GEORGE’S WIFE and now GEORGE, are watching a news report that is being shown on the television in the lounge, whilst sitting drinking a cup of coffee on the leather sofa. The camera moves into the scene of the crime that is being shown on the news. TV NEWS REPORTER Hello, what events occurred this morning? CUT TO: SCENE 8: EXT. LOCATION #1- THE LAKE- MORNING An early morning by the quiet, isolated lake. Forensics are seen dressed in white suits with police tape surrounding the scene of the crime. A POLICE OFFICER is answering questions to a news team, reporting on the crime. GEORGE is still lying unconscious on the ground, cuts and bruising over his face.
- 6. 6 POLICE OFFICER A dangerous incident happened here at the lake resulted in an adult male, who cannot be named right now, seriously injured when fishing. TV NEWS REPORTER Is there any more information you could give us? POLICE OFFICER At this current time, there is nothing more I can report until further information is given. TV NEWS REPORTER Ok, thank you very much for your time. POLICE OFFICER turns and continues investigating the crime scene. SCENE 9: INT. LOCATION #2- GEORGE’S HOME- MORNING GEORGE’S WIFE turns her head to look at GEORGE. GEORGE’S WIFE (CONCERNED) Isn’t that where you were going today?
- 7. 7 GEORGE turns his head uncomfortably and moves his hand to his neck, where his visible cut and bruising is. His face turns to a sudden shock as his eyes widen, when he realises that the man that has been injured at the lake, may be him. He turns to his wife, looking worried, before looking towards the camera. FADE OUT: THE END
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