1 a class 5
AGENDA
The Hunger Games: Themes
Presentation: Frequently Misused Words
Discussion:
Wolff: “Analyzing Writing Strategies” #3: p31: Sentence length.
Reflecting on the Event's Significance pp 48-49 Thesis Statement 49-50
In-Class Writing
1. Focus on the climax of your event. Write a paragraph describing the
action using short and long sentences to control the intensity of your
narrative.
2. Answer the questions on pp 48-49
3. Formulating a Tentative Thesis Statement
THEMES TO CONSIDER
FRIENDSHIP
FAMILY
SURVIVAL
FREEDOM AND OPPRESSION
MATERIALSIM AND CLASS
Dude, the
  right                         No, you’re
  word is                     wrong. The word
affect, w                        should be
 ith an a.                    effect, with an
                                    e.




    Frequently Confused and Misused
                 Words
To, Too, Two
   • Use to as a preposition.
      Jonathan drove to the seafood shop.
   • Use to to begin an infinitive.
      He hoped to buy fresh squid.
   • Use too to show degree.
      The squid was too expensive to purchase.
   • Use too as a synonym for also.
      So too was the fresh octopus.
   • Use two when you mean the number.
      Jonathan bought two flounder filets instead.
There, Their, They’re
  • Use there as an expletive, a placeholder to
    delay the subject.
     There is a turtle in the road.
  • Use there to indicate place.
     Across the road is a lake. The turtle hopes to get
      there before a car hits him.
  • Use their as a possessive pronoun.
     Most drivers don’t see the turtle; their eyes are glued
       to their cell phones.
  • Use they’re as a contraction for they are.
     They’re also distracted by other devices, like the
       radio and navigation system.
Recognize misspelled/correctly spelled
words and phrases.
           Alright ● All right
                 Alot ● A lot
                 Rite ● Right, write
        Should of ● Should have
      Suppose to ● Supposed to



       Spelled                     Spelled
       wrong!                     correctly!
Recognize the distinctions among
related words.
   3 or more;       Among ● Between        2 only;
  Among my                                   Between
      friends                                Fred and me
   Noncount;        Amount ● Number        Count;
  Amount of                                  Number of
      butter                                 cookies
    Adjective;         Good ● Well         Adverb;
A good essay                                 He writes
                                             well.
     Evident,       Explicit ● Implicit    Implied,
 unambiguous                                 ambiguous

                 Know these
                 differences!
Know the difference that a single new
  letter can make.
    Before a word           A ● An             Before a word
  beginning with a                               beginning with a
consonant [sound]                                vowel [sound]
            Before     Already ● All ready     Completely
                                                 prepared
      A thought or       Idea ● Ideal          The concept of
       conception                                something
                                                 perfect
      To suffer the      Lose ● Loose          Free from
     deprivation of                              restraint

Verb; past tense of      Were ● Where          A place
              are
                                      More to
                                        learn!
Know the difference that an apostrophe
can make.

    Possessive          Its ● It’s        Contraction for
      pronoun;                              it is or it has
 belonging to it
    Possessive      Whose ● Who’s         Contraction for
      pronoun;                              who is or
   belonging to                             who has
        whom
    Possessive       Your ● You’re        Contraction for
      pronoun;                              you are
   belonging to
           you
        Possessive                 Contractions do
      pronouns never                 contain an
         contain an                 apostrophe.
        apostrophe.
Know the difference a change to a single
letter can make.
    Noun form          Advice ● Advise         Verb form
 Usually a verb        Affect ● Effect         Usually a noun
   City, wealth,       Capital ● Capitol       The building for
      important                                  lawmaking

      To quote           Cite ● Site           A location
        Rough          Coarse ● Course         Path, route
         Praise     Compliment ● Complement    Goes well with
   Put in place           Set ● Sit            Be seated
   Unchanging       Stationary ● Stationery    Paper
     Indicates          Than ● Then            Next
   comparison

                          Why is English so
                           complicated?
Don’t let these homonyms [sound alike
  words] confuse you.
   Agree to or receive       Accept ● Except         Leave out
  Plural present of the          Are ● Our           Possessive pronoun;
              verb be                                  belonging to us
   Past tense of pass        Passed ● Past           Gone, by
             Go before      Precede ● Proceed        Carry on
  Chief [person], main      Principal ● Principle    Truth or rule
Correct, a just claim, a       Right ● Write         Make letters with an
               direction                               instrument
 Sight, touch, hearing,       Sense ● Since          Adverb, conjunction,
           smell, taste                                or preposition
         View, glimpse         Sight ● Site          A location
 Past tense of throw          Threw ● Through        Beyond
           State of the     Weather ● Whether        Introduces an
           atmosphere                                  alternative
Quick Test
  Directions: In the items that follow, choose
  the option that corrects an error in the
  underlined portion(s). If no error exists, choose
  “No change is necessary.”




      Your                                Let’s see
       turn!                              what you
                                           can do!
Item 1
Even though we warned Jake not to eat a hole
                                                A
    Even though we warned Jake not to eat a hole  hole
pie at one sitting, he sat at the kitchen table and
                                                    A
                         B
    pie at one sitting, he sat at the kitchen table and
                           sat at the kitchen table and
proceeded to consume slice after slice.
                            B
      C
    proceeded to consume slice after slice.
    proceeded to consume slice after slice.
         C
A.whole
B.set
    A.whole
C.preceded
    B.set
D.No change is necessary.
    C.preceded
    D.No change is necessary.
Give Jerrod a compliment because his shoe
                    A
     Item 2
   Give Jerrod a compliment because his shoe
                  compliment because his shoe
laces complement the colors in his plaid shirt.
                        A
            B
   laces complement the colors in his plaid shirt.
         complement the colors in his plaid shirt.
His fashion since is gradually improving.
               B
              C
   His fashion since is gradually improving.
               since is gradually improving.
                 C
A.complement
B.compliment
   A.complement
C.sense
   B.compliment
D.No change is necessary.
   C.sense
   D.No change is necessary.
If you go by the supermarket, buy a package of
    IfItem by the supermarket, buy a package of
           A
               3 we can grill the sausage for
                               B
       you go by the supermarket, buy a package of
hotdog buns. A Than                 B
                 CThan we can grill the sausage for
    hotdog buns. Than we can grill the sausage for
dinner.             C
   dinner.
A.buy
B.by
   A.buy
C.Then
   B.by
D.No change is necessary.
   C.Then
   D.No change is necessary.
Heed my advice, and don’t loose your receipt.
     Itembookstore will not accept any excuse
    Heed my A
The college
              4               B
              advice, and don’t loose your receipt.
              advice, and don’t loose your receipt.
                 A                 B
    The college bookstore will notCaccept any excuse
                                   accept any excuse
if you need to return those books. C
    if you need to return those books.
A.advise
B.lose
    A.advise
C.except
    B.lose
D.No change is necessary.
    C.except
   D.No change is necessary.
The heard of gazelle leaped through the air as
    The heard5 gazelle leaped B
     Item of gazelle leaped through the air as
       Aheard of                  through the air as
           A                          B
the animals tried to elude the cheetah.
    the animals tried to elude the cheetah.
                        Celude the cheetah.
                           C
A.herd
    A.herd
B.threw
    B.threw
C.allude
    C.allude
D.No change is necessary.
    D.No change is necessary.
Maybe Gerald is caught in traffic, or he maybe
     A                                            B
        Item 6
flirting with Gerald is cafeteria cashier.or he maybe
      Maybe Gerald is caught in traffic, or he maybe
                the cute caught in traffic, Either way,
           A                                         B
      flirting with the cute cafeteria cashier. Either way,
don’t accept any excuse for his tardiness.
        C
   don’t accept any excuse for his tardiness.
         accept any excuse for his tardiness.
A.May be C
B.may be
C.except be
   A.May
   B.may be is necessary.
D.No change
   C.except
   D.No change is necessary.
When there are fewer students in a class, the
         A          B
      Item 7
   When there are fewer students in a class, the
           there are fewer students in a class, the
professor has less worries that everyone is
             A          B
                 C
   professor has less worries that everyone is
                   less worries that everyone is
getting individual attention.
                     C
   getting individual attention.
A. their
B. less
   A. their
C. fewer
   B. less
D. No change is necessary.
   C. fewer
   D. No change is necessary.
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Comparing Short and
Long Sentences
 What do they contribute to the
 action?
 How do their contents differ?
 What effect do the short sentences
 have on you as a reader?
Use Sentence
Length to
Control the
Tension in your
story
1. Focus on the climax
of your event. Write a
paragraph describing the
action using short and
long sentences to control
the intensity of your
narrative.
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The Goal: Indicate the Event’s
Significance
Show that the event was important
• Dramatize the event so readers can understand
  your feelings about it.
• Show scenes from your point of view so readers
  can identify with you.
Tell us that the event was important
• Tell how you felt at the time of the experience
• Tell how you feel about it now, in reflection.
The Strategy: Recall Remembered Feelings and Thoughts: Answer
These Questions:

• What were your expectations before the event?

• What was your first reaction to the event as it was happening and
  right after it ended?

• How did you show your feelings? What did you say?

• What did you want the people involved to think of you? Why did you
  care what they thought of you?

• What did you think of yourself at the time?

• How long did these initial feelings last?

• What were the immediate consequences of the event for you
  personally?

 Pause now to reread what you have written. Then write another
sentence or two about the event’s significance to you at the time it
occurred.
HOMEWORK
Read: HG through chapter 12.
SMG p 37 “Commentary: Autobiographical Significance,” and 625-
633.
Write: Post your outline and brainstorming: Long quote;
transition; intro to event, description of place(s), description of
people, a dialogue or two, the climax (with short and long
sentences working to achieve your goal), and a list of answers to
the questions on slide #26; end with framing plan.
(Remember, this is still just drafting.)
Blog Prompt #4
Study: Vocab (Chapters 1-12)
Bring: HG and SMG; draft of your outline/writing

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1 a class 5

  • 2. AGENDA The Hunger Games: Themes Presentation: Frequently Misused Words Discussion: Wolff: “Analyzing Writing Strategies” #3: p31: Sentence length. Reflecting on the Event's Significance pp 48-49 Thesis Statement 49-50 In-Class Writing 1. Focus on the climax of your event. Write a paragraph describing the action using short and long sentences to control the intensity of your narrative. 2. Answer the questions on pp 48-49 3. Formulating a Tentative Thesis Statement
  • 3. THEMES TO CONSIDER FRIENDSHIP FAMILY SURVIVAL FREEDOM AND OPPRESSION MATERIALSIM AND CLASS
  • 4. Dude, the right No, you’re word is wrong. The word affect, w should be ith an a. effect, with an e. Frequently Confused and Misused Words
  • 5. To, Too, Two • Use to as a preposition. Jonathan drove to the seafood shop. • Use to to begin an infinitive. He hoped to buy fresh squid. • Use too to show degree. The squid was too expensive to purchase. • Use too as a synonym for also. So too was the fresh octopus. • Use two when you mean the number. Jonathan bought two flounder filets instead.
  • 6. There, Their, They’re • Use there as an expletive, a placeholder to delay the subject. There is a turtle in the road. • Use there to indicate place. Across the road is a lake. The turtle hopes to get there before a car hits him. • Use their as a possessive pronoun. Most drivers don’t see the turtle; their eyes are glued to their cell phones. • Use they’re as a contraction for they are. They’re also distracted by other devices, like the radio and navigation system.
  • 7. Recognize misspelled/correctly spelled words and phrases. Alright ● All right Alot ● A lot Rite ● Right, write Should of ● Should have Suppose to ● Supposed to Spelled Spelled wrong! correctly!
  • 8. Recognize the distinctions among related words. 3 or more;  Among ● Between  2 only; Among my Between friends Fred and me Noncount;  Amount ● Number  Count; Amount of Number of butter cookies Adjective;  Good ● Well  Adverb; A good essay He writes well. Evident,  Explicit ● Implicit  Implied, unambiguous ambiguous Know these differences!
  • 9. Know the difference that a single new letter can make. Before a word  A ● An  Before a word beginning with a beginning with a consonant [sound] vowel [sound] Before  Already ● All ready  Completely prepared A thought or  Idea ● Ideal  The concept of conception something perfect To suffer the  Lose ● Loose  Free from deprivation of restraint Verb; past tense of  Were ● Where  A place are More to learn!
  • 10. Know the difference that an apostrophe can make. Possessive  Its ● It’s  Contraction for pronoun; it is or it has belonging to it Possessive  Whose ● Who’s  Contraction for pronoun; who is or belonging to who has whom Possessive  Your ● You’re  Contraction for pronoun; you are belonging to you Possessive Contractions do pronouns never contain an contain an apostrophe. apostrophe.
  • 11. Know the difference a change to a single letter can make. Noun form  Advice ● Advise  Verb form Usually a verb  Affect ● Effect  Usually a noun City, wealth,  Capital ● Capitol  The building for important lawmaking To quote  Cite ● Site  A location Rough  Coarse ● Course  Path, route Praise  Compliment ● Complement  Goes well with Put in place  Set ● Sit  Be seated Unchanging  Stationary ● Stationery  Paper Indicates  Than ● Then  Next comparison Why is English so complicated?
  • 12. Don’t let these homonyms [sound alike words] confuse you. Agree to or receive  Accept ● Except  Leave out Plural present of the  Are ● Our  Possessive pronoun; verb be belonging to us Past tense of pass  Passed ● Past  Gone, by Go before  Precede ● Proceed  Carry on Chief [person], main  Principal ● Principle  Truth or rule Correct, a just claim, a  Right ● Write  Make letters with an direction instrument Sight, touch, hearing,  Sense ● Since  Adverb, conjunction, smell, taste or preposition View, glimpse  Sight ● Site  A location Past tense of throw  Threw ● Through  Beyond State of the  Weather ● Whether  Introduces an atmosphere alternative
  • 13. Quick Test Directions: In the items that follow, choose the option that corrects an error in the underlined portion(s). If no error exists, choose “No change is necessary.” Your Let’s see turn! what you can do!
  • 14. Item 1 Even though we warned Jake not to eat a hole A Even though we warned Jake not to eat a hole hole pie at one sitting, he sat at the kitchen table and A B pie at one sitting, he sat at the kitchen table and sat at the kitchen table and proceeded to consume slice after slice. B C proceeded to consume slice after slice. proceeded to consume slice after slice. C A.whole B.set A.whole C.preceded B.set D.No change is necessary. C.preceded D.No change is necessary.
  • 15. Give Jerrod a compliment because his shoe A Item 2 Give Jerrod a compliment because his shoe compliment because his shoe laces complement the colors in his plaid shirt. A B laces complement the colors in his plaid shirt. complement the colors in his plaid shirt. His fashion since is gradually improving. B C His fashion since is gradually improving. since is gradually improving. C A.complement B.compliment A.complement C.sense B.compliment D.No change is necessary. C.sense D.No change is necessary.
  • 16. If you go by the supermarket, buy a package of IfItem by the supermarket, buy a package of A 3 we can grill the sausage for B you go by the supermarket, buy a package of hotdog buns. A Than B CThan we can grill the sausage for hotdog buns. Than we can grill the sausage for dinner. C dinner. A.buy B.by A.buy C.Then B.by D.No change is necessary. C.Then D.No change is necessary.
  • 17. Heed my advice, and don’t loose your receipt. Itembookstore will not accept any excuse Heed my A The college 4 B advice, and don’t loose your receipt. advice, and don’t loose your receipt. A B The college bookstore will notCaccept any excuse accept any excuse if you need to return those books. C if you need to return those books. A.advise B.lose A.advise C.except B.lose D.No change is necessary. C.except D.No change is necessary.
  • 18. The heard of gazelle leaped through the air as The heard5 gazelle leaped B Item of gazelle leaped through the air as Aheard of through the air as A B the animals tried to elude the cheetah. the animals tried to elude the cheetah. Celude the cheetah. C A.herd A.herd B.threw B.threw C.allude C.allude D.No change is necessary. D.No change is necessary.
  • 19. Maybe Gerald is caught in traffic, or he maybe A B Item 6 flirting with Gerald is cafeteria cashier.or he maybe Maybe Gerald is caught in traffic, or he maybe the cute caught in traffic, Either way, A B flirting with the cute cafeteria cashier. Either way, don’t accept any excuse for his tardiness. C don’t accept any excuse for his tardiness. accept any excuse for his tardiness. A.May be C B.may be C.except be A.May B.may be is necessary. D.No change C.except D.No change is necessary.
  • 20. When there are fewer students in a class, the A B Item 7 When there are fewer students in a class, the there are fewer students in a class, the professor has less worries that everyone is A B C professor has less worries that everyone is less worries that everyone is getting individual attention. C getting individual attention. A. their B. less A. their C. fewer B. less D. No change is necessary. C. fewer D. No change is necessary.
  • 22. Comparing Short and Long Sentences What do they contribute to the action? How do their contents differ? What effect do the short sentences have on you as a reader?
  • 23. Use Sentence Length to Control the Tension in your story 1. Focus on the climax of your event. Write a paragraph describing the action using short and long sentences to control the intensity of your narrative.
  • 25. The Goal: Indicate the Event’s Significance Show that the event was important • Dramatize the event so readers can understand your feelings about it. • Show scenes from your point of view so readers can identify with you. Tell us that the event was important • Tell how you felt at the time of the experience • Tell how you feel about it now, in reflection.
  • 26. The Strategy: Recall Remembered Feelings and Thoughts: Answer These Questions: • What were your expectations before the event? • What was your first reaction to the event as it was happening and right after it ended? • How did you show your feelings? What did you say? • What did you want the people involved to think of you? Why did you care what they thought of you? • What did you think of yourself at the time? • How long did these initial feelings last? • What were the immediate consequences of the event for you personally? Pause now to reread what you have written. Then write another sentence or two about the event’s significance to you at the time it occurred.
  • 27. HOMEWORK Read: HG through chapter 12. SMG p 37 “Commentary: Autobiographical Significance,” and 625- 633. Write: Post your outline and brainstorming: Long quote; transition; intro to event, description of place(s), description of people, a dialogue or two, the climax (with short and long sentences working to achieve your goal), and a list of answers to the questions on slide #26; end with framing plan. (Remember, this is still just drafting.) Blog Prompt #4 Study: Vocab (Chapters 1-12) Bring: HG and SMG; draft of your outline/writing