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                            Sanel Homer
Draft 1 Opening Sequence Feedback
Name of Person   Details of the person                     Method of Feedback   Summary of their feedback.
                 (age, gender, ethnicity ,interest etc.)                        (WWW/EBI)




1.Belinda        Age-15                                    Facebook             Loved the costumes and props
                 Gender-Female                                                  but she wasn’t scared and
                 Ethnicity- British                                             thought the music didn’t quite
                 Interest- Football, basketball,                                suited well.
                 Art and thriller films.
2. Tolga         Age-14                                    Facebook             Didn’t understand that the main
                 Gender-Male                                                    character had schizophrenia
                 Ethnicity-British
                 Interest- Football and science

3. Mark          Age- 46                                   Facebook             Likes the costumes but didn’t
                 Gender-Male                                                    understand that the character
                 Interest- Reggae music                                         has schizophrenia


4. Nurten        Age- 40                                   Facebook             Didn’t understand anything but
                 Gender-Female                                                  thought the costume was well
                 Ethnicity- Turkish                                             presented.
                 Interest- Dancing

5. Mirella       Age-17                                    Facebook             The sound wasn’t good and
                 Gender- Female                                                 needed the sequence to be
                 Ethnicity- Philipino                                           more scary if it’s a thriller film.
                 Interest- Rnb music, hip hop
                 dance
6. Jade          Age-15                                    Facebook             Was scared and loved the
                 Gender-Female                                                  costumes and props but didn’t
                 Ethnicity- British                                             understand the flashback
                 Interest- pop and rnb music                                    scenes.
Draft 2 Opening Sequence Feedback
Name of Person   Details of the person                     Method of Feedback    Summary of their feedback.
                 (age, gender, ethnicity ,interest etc.)                         (WWW/EBI)




1. Zoey          Age-17                                    Paper questionnaire   Editing was good and liked the
                 Gender-Female                                                   sound and the scary characters
                 Ethnicity- British                                              costumes but thought it needed
                 Interest- music and business                                    to be more scary.

2. Sinead        Age-17                                    Paper questionnaire   Found some parts funny but
                 Gender-Female                                                   says it needs to be a bit more
                 Ethnicity-British                                               scarier.
                 Interest- music and going to the
                 cinema
3. Xhensila      Age- 16                                   Paper questionnaire   Doesn’t like the titles and said
                 Gender-Male                                                     the acting needs to be more
                 Interest- music and shopping                                    convincing also thought it
                                                                                 needs to be more scarier.

4. Belinda       Age-15                                    Paper questionnaire   The sound was improved but
                 Gender-Female                                                   doesn’t like the titles or credit
                 Ethnicity- British                                              as it was to disturbing and
                 Interest- Football, basketball,                                 couldn’t focus on what the
                 Art and thriller films.                                         person was doing.


5. Laura         Age-17                                    Facebook              Needs to be more scary and
                 Gender- Female                                                  again doesn’t like the title or
                 Ethnicity- Philipino                                            credits. Also said we should
                 Interest- Rnb music, hip hop                                    add some effect into it.
                 dance
6. Katerina      Age-15                                    Paper Questionaire    Was scared and loved the
                 Gender-Female                                                   costumes but the acting needs
                 Ethnicity- British                                              to be convincing and the main
                 Interest- music, shopping and                                   character should be more
                 R:e                                                             scared then calm.
Draft 3 Opening Sequence Feedback
Name of Person   Details of the person                     Method of Feedback    Summary of their feedback.
                 (age, gender, ethnicity ,interest etc.)                         (WWW/EBI)


1. Abigail       Age-17                                    Facebook              Liked the costumes and props
                 Gender-Female                                                   but doesn’t like the title name
                 Ethnicity- British                                              and credits.
                 Interest- music and business

2. Katerina      Age-15                                    Paper questionnaire   Liked the sound in the
                 Gender-Female                                                   background and though the
                 Ethnicity- British                                              timing in all the scary area was
                 Interest- music, shopping and                                   perfect.
                 R:e


3.Rosemary       Age-                                      Facebook              Liked the music, costumes and
                 Gender-                                                         props but thought some areas
                 Interest- music and shopping                                    were to quick to understand
                                                                                 what's going on and didn’t
                                                                                 understand what it said on the
                                                                                 note.
4. Belinda       Age-15                                    Interviewed           Thought our title names need
                 Gender-Female                                                   changing and the main
                 Ethnicity- British                                              character clothing.
                 Interest- Football, basketball,
                 Art and thriller films.


5. Natasha       Age-17                                    Facebook              Loved the music and the blue
                 Gender- Female                                                  effect in the background and
                 Ethnicity- Indian                                               thought the scary characters
                 Interest- Rnb music, chemistry                                  costume was good.
                 and hanging out.
6. Seren         Age-15                                    Facebook              Really liked the scary characters and
                 Gender-Female                                                   make-up and thought the sound was
                 Ethnicity- British                                              good and scary.
                 Interest- music, shopping and
                 hanging out

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Audience Feedback from our opening sequence draft 1-3 zss

  • 1. Audience Feedback from our opening sequence Draft 1 - 3 Sanel Homer
  • 2. Draft 1 Opening Sequence Feedback Name of Person Details of the person Method of Feedback Summary of their feedback. (age, gender, ethnicity ,interest etc.) (WWW/EBI) 1.Belinda Age-15 Facebook Loved the costumes and props Gender-Female but she wasn’t scared and Ethnicity- British thought the music didn’t quite Interest- Football, basketball, suited well. Art and thriller films. 2. Tolga Age-14 Facebook Didn’t understand that the main Gender-Male character had schizophrenia Ethnicity-British Interest- Football and science 3. Mark Age- 46 Facebook Likes the costumes but didn’t Gender-Male understand that the character Interest- Reggae music has schizophrenia 4. Nurten Age- 40 Facebook Didn’t understand anything but Gender-Female thought the costume was well Ethnicity- Turkish presented. Interest- Dancing 5. Mirella Age-17 Facebook The sound wasn’t good and Gender- Female needed the sequence to be Ethnicity- Philipino more scary if it’s a thriller film. Interest- Rnb music, hip hop dance 6. Jade Age-15 Facebook Was scared and loved the Gender-Female costumes and props but didn’t Ethnicity- British understand the flashback Interest- pop and rnb music scenes.
  • 3. Draft 2 Opening Sequence Feedback Name of Person Details of the person Method of Feedback Summary of their feedback. (age, gender, ethnicity ,interest etc.) (WWW/EBI) 1. Zoey Age-17 Paper questionnaire Editing was good and liked the Gender-Female sound and the scary characters Ethnicity- British costumes but thought it needed Interest- music and business to be more scary. 2. Sinead Age-17 Paper questionnaire Found some parts funny but Gender-Female says it needs to be a bit more Ethnicity-British scarier. Interest- music and going to the cinema 3. Xhensila Age- 16 Paper questionnaire Doesn’t like the titles and said Gender-Male the acting needs to be more Interest- music and shopping convincing also thought it needs to be more scarier. 4. Belinda Age-15 Paper questionnaire The sound was improved but Gender-Female doesn’t like the titles or credit Ethnicity- British as it was to disturbing and Interest- Football, basketball, couldn’t focus on what the Art and thriller films. person was doing. 5. Laura Age-17 Facebook Needs to be more scary and Gender- Female again doesn’t like the title or Ethnicity- Philipino credits. Also said we should Interest- Rnb music, hip hop add some effect into it. dance 6. Katerina Age-15 Paper Questionaire Was scared and loved the Gender-Female costumes but the acting needs Ethnicity- British to be convincing and the main Interest- music, shopping and character should be more R:e scared then calm.
  • 4. Draft 3 Opening Sequence Feedback Name of Person Details of the person Method of Feedback Summary of their feedback. (age, gender, ethnicity ,interest etc.) (WWW/EBI) 1. Abigail Age-17 Facebook Liked the costumes and props Gender-Female but doesn’t like the title name Ethnicity- British and credits. Interest- music and business 2. Katerina Age-15 Paper questionnaire Liked the sound in the Gender-Female background and though the Ethnicity- British timing in all the scary area was Interest- music, shopping and perfect. R:e 3.Rosemary Age- Facebook Liked the music, costumes and Gender- props but thought some areas Interest- music and shopping were to quick to understand what's going on and didn’t understand what it said on the note. 4. Belinda Age-15 Interviewed Thought our title names need Gender-Female changing and the main Ethnicity- British character clothing. Interest- Football, basketball, Art and thriller films. 5. Natasha Age-17 Facebook Loved the music and the blue Gender- Female effect in the background and Ethnicity- Indian thought the scary characters Interest- Rnb music, chemistry costume was good. and hanging out. 6. Seren Age-15 Facebook Really liked the scary characters and Gender-Female make-up and thought the sound was Ethnicity- British good and scary. Interest- music, shopping and hanging out