Before Improvements Storyboard
- 1. Shot No.1 Snapshotone: Walkinghandinhand. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Establishingshot Movement:Drone Angle:Birdseye view Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Foley soundof cameraclick,gentle score (continuesthroughoutthe film) Setting:Pertonpark Colour:Sepia Lighting:Dark Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy expressions,positioned=manonkneesandwoman standingwithhandovermouth. Frame duration 3 seconds Shot No.2 Snapshottwo: Man onhis kneesproposingtowoman. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Long shot Movement:None Angle:Highangle Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Foley soundof cameraclick Setting:Pertonpark Colour:Sepia Lighting:Dark Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy expressions,positioned=manonkneesandwoman standingwithhandovermouth. Frame duration 2 seconds
- 2. Editingnotes Fast cuts,filtereffects Shot No.3 Snapshotthree: Couple hugincelebration. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Mid shot Movement:None Angle:Straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Foleysoundof cameraclick Setting:Pertonpark Colour:Sepia Lighting:Dark Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy expressions,positioned=ineachother’sarms Frame duration 2 seconds Editingnotes Fast cuts,filtereffects
- 3. Shot No.4 Snapshotfour: Couple kiss Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Close-up Movement:None Angle:Straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Foleysoundof cameraclick Setting:Pertonpark Colour:Sepia Lighting:Dark Mise en scene:ordinaryclothingandmakeup,happy expressions,positioned=ineachother’sarms Frame duration 3 seconds Editingnotes Fast cuts,filtereffects Shot No.5 Establishingshotof bestfriend’shouse where carpullsup ontodrive. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Long shot Movement:None. Angle:Straighton Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Ambientsounds. Setting:Outside bestfriend’shouse. Colour:Normal,natural colours. Lighting:Dark,sepia,flashbackeffect. Mise en scene:Rule of thirds(carin middle third). Frame duration 4 seconds
- 4. Shot No.6 Woman getsoutof hercar. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Mid shot of her feet and legs. Movement:No movement. Angle:Lowangle Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Ambientsoundsandsoundsof door opening. Setting:Outside bestfriend’shouse. Colour:Normal, natural colours. Lighting:Highlighting,natural. Mise en scene:Jeans/bootsforclothing. Shot No.7 Woman closesdoor Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Overthe shoulder Movement:No movement. Angle:Mediumshot Dialogue.Sound. Setting. Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Ambientsoundsandsoundsof doorclosing. Setting:Outside bestfriend’shouse. Colour:Normal,natural colours. Lighting:Highlighting,natural. Mise en scene:Jeans/bootsforclothing.
- 5. Shot No.8 Flashback Woman hasa flashbackof herand herbestfriend together ina bedroomhavingagirlynight. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Wide shot Movement:No movement. Angle:Mediumshot Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting. Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Ambientsoundsandsoundsof doorclosing. Setting:Inside bestfriend’sbedroom. Colour:Normal,natural colours. Lighting:Dark,sepia,flashbackeffect. Mise en scene:Pyjamasandhotchocolate inmugs. Editingnotes Fast cuts,filtereffects Shot No.9 Woman lockscar, engagementringinshot. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Extreme close up Movement:No movement. Angle:Highangle Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Foleysoundof the car locking. Setting:Inside bestfriend’sbedroom. Colour:Normal,natural colours. Lighting: Mise en scene:Engagementring, carclicker Editingnotes Fast cuts,no filtereffects
- 6. Shot No.10 Flashback Woman hasa flashbackof herand herbestfriend together. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Mediumshot Movement:No movement. Angle:Straightangle Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:Ambientsoundsandsoundsof doorclosing. Setting:Inside bestfriend’sbedroom. Colour:Normal,natural colours. Lighting:Dark,sepia,flashbackeffect. Mise en scene:Pyjamasandhotchocolate inmugs. Shot No.11 Woman walksupto house Shotof engagedwoman’sfeet. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:midshot Movement:tracking Angle:straightangle Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue. Sound:footsteps,ambientsounds Setting:outside the house Colour:natural Lighting:natural,normal Mise en scene:normal,casual clothingand domesticatedsetting.Shoes=boots.
- 7. Shot No.12 Woman knocksontothe door Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:overshoulder,close up Movement:no movement Angle:straighton Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue Sound:ambientsoundsanddoorknocks Setting:outside the house andthe door Colour:natural Lighting:natural andnormal Mise en scene:normal,casual Shot No.13 Mistressopensdoor. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:longshot,over the shoulderof engaged woman Movement:no movement Angle:straightlesson Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue Sound:foleysoundof dooropening Setting:outside the doorandhouse Colour:natural Lighting:natural andnormal Mise en scene:mistressinprovocativedresswhilst engagedwoman contrastsincasual wear. Shot No.14 Mistressand engagedwomanhugondoorstep. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:longshot Movement:no movement Angle:straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue Sound:ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:outside the house,onthe doorstep Colour:natural Lighting:natural andnormal
- 8. Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing setting Shot No.15 Close upof the engagedwomansmilingwhilsthugging friend. Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:close up Movement:no movement Angle:straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue Sound:ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:outside the house,onthe doorstep Colour:natural Lighting:natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing setting Shot No.16 Close upof mistresssmilingwhichthendropstoafrown, whilsthuggingbestfriend Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:close up Movement:no movement Angle:straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue Sound:ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:outside the house,onthe doorstep Colour:natural Lighting:natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing setting
- 9. Shot No.17 Cut to kitchen Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:longshot Movement:pan movement Angle:straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. No dialogue Sound:ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:inkitchen Colour:natural Lighting:natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing Shot No.18 Engagedwomanhas a drinkinher handand sitsdownto say “so,how didhe propose then?” Type of shot,movement and angle. Shot:Long/Twoshot Movement:No movement Angle:straight Dialogue.Sound. Setting.Colour.Lighting.Mise-en- scene. Dialogue here-seescreenplay Sound:Ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:inkitchen Colour:Natural andbright Lighting:Natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing Shot No.19 Mediumshotof fiancée asshe startsto explainher engagementtoherfriend. Shot:Long/Twoshot Movement:No movement Angle:straight Dialogue here-seescreenplay Sound:Ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:inkitchen Colour:Natural andbright
- 10. Lighting:Natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing Shot No.20 Shot:Long/Twoshot Movement:No movement Angle:straight Dialogue here-seescreenplay Sound:Ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:inkitchen Colour:Natural andbright Lighting:Natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing Shot No.21 Shot:Long/Twoshot Movement:No movement Angle:straight Dialogue here-seescreenplay Sound:Ambientsoundsandcontinuedscore Setting:inkitchen Colour:Natural andbright Lighting:Natural andnormal Mise en scene:casual/provocative clothing,housing