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Richard Pelletier
        Copywriter

   Stories. People. Love.
One day,
a small
company got
hold of a BIG
idea.
People love stories.
Stories connect us.
Stories change lives.
Stories link our present to
our past.
  “And then he kissed me.
           Oh, my.”
And it was THAT quality
- connecting the present to
          the past -
  that really excited them.
Why?

The company founder had lost some
of his memory.

But he was an engineer.

So he developed software that
improved his memory.
Patent-pending.
One thing he remembered
        very well.
  He loved his family.
He also believed this:
So here is our memory challenged engineer’s idea.

What if memory enhancing software were used to
 help people remember key parts of their lives?

And what if you added positive psychology to the
  mix to help them remember their happiest life
 stories and it all went into this really cool book?
Positive Psychology?
Memory-enhancing software?
       Come again?
1. Imagine a guided tour through all the stages of your life.
Childhood, adolescence, marriage. Imagine that you focus
mostly on the positive.

2. Imagine that this process is powerful and life-changing.
      “I’ve never looked at my life this way before.”

3. Imagine a leather bound, preservation quality Legacy
Profile to be handed down to heirs. Like a precious
heirloom, or memoir.
Like This
Still with me?
Here’s the Legacy Profiles Team
The Legacy Profile team worked
 hard
and found clients.

1. Clients reported life-changing
   experiences.

2. One even jumped the contours
 of the initial contract --
 $15,000.00 -- to the tune of
 $100,000.00.

3. Legacy Profiles had stepped
 into a big pile of moola.
One small problem.

It turns out that the
compassionate, highly
intelligent, well-
  educated
Legacy Profiles team
couldn’t exactly say
  what
Legacy Profiles does.
We asked the founder: “What does your company do?”

Here’s his reply,

 “We utilize memory-enhancing software, you know, we do it
in a fifteen hour process, we’re trying here to go into this
process of uncovering and enhancing people’s most
formative life experiences, their happy memories if you will,
um, so their relationships, you know, with themselves and
their families can only be enhanced through this software and
the creating and reviewing of this acid-free, leather bound
legacy profiles book. You know, that they can hand down to
their loved ones.”

                Wow! 81 One sentence! 81 words!
Engineer wrestles with
 the
human heart and the
English language!

Loses!

Clamors for a rematch!
So if they couldn’t say concisely
what their company did,
wouldn’t they have one heck of
hard time getting anyone to buy
what the company sold?
Ha! A clue! Thus spoke a
client:
“Recalling my happiest
family memories gave me an
insight into how to interact
and communicate more fully
with my daughters and
grandchildren. I feel deeply
gratified.

 My daughters and
grandchildren will have
this permanent
remembrance of how much
I loved each of them.”
Can you imagine trying to find
 out
what your company does by
 asking a
customer? How crazy is that?
So they called us.
Because they didn’t know
  exactly
what they were selling, or how
  to
explain it concisely, they turned
  to us,
Lucid Content. They thought, a
company with a name like Lucid
Content ought to help us
  achieve some
clarity about what the heck
  we’re doing
here.
So we did what we
always do.
We think. And we
go poking our
heads into all kinds
of stuff. Like this-
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And then we thought for a
while longer.

We needed a value
proposition.

And a mission statement.

And a values statement.

We needed to get lucid for
one very big reason.
Lucid sells. Clarity sells.

If the whole world is
bombarded with
messages, your best chance
at getting through is to be
absolutely, clear. Lucid.

Clarity persuades, and has
been proven to be more
effective than “persuasion”.
So first came the mission
statement:

 With compassionate, professional
guidance, Legacy Profiles helps
our clients to reclaim, preserve
and share the very best parts of
their life story. For themselves,
their families and their loved
ones. Forever.
Then we tackled the values statement:

We believe in every person’s story. We
  believe in the
power of storytelling and memory as
  healing,
deeply human impulses that together
  bring greater
intimacy and meaning to every person’s
  life.
Then the value proposition.

“We help you honor your life and loved
 ones through
guided, positive memories and by elegantly
 preserving
your life story.”
Hmmm... Sounds good. Say that
 again?
“We’re Legacy Profiles. We help
 you honor your life and loved
 ones through guided, positive
 memories and by elegantly
 preserving your life story.”
So keeping in mind Lucid Content’s
key principles,

-   Beautiful, lucid copy and design.
-   A focus on the customer.
-   A human voice.
-   No hype or jargon.

we developed a new magazine ad.

Which the Legacy Profile team loved.
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Wait! I didn’t see a tagline?
Don’t they need a tagline?
Legacy Profiles,
 Inc.
Stories. People. Love.
Thank you. The end.
www.lucidcontent.com
      503.621.2215
Richard@LucidContent.com

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Copywriter Project

  • 1. Richard Pelletier Copywriter Stories. People. Love.
  • 2. One day, a small company got hold of a BIG idea.
  • 4. Stories connect us. Stories change lives. Stories link our present to our past. “And then he kissed me. Oh, my.”
  • 5. And it was THAT quality - connecting the present to the past - that really excited them.
  • 6. Why? The company founder had lost some of his memory. But he was an engineer. So he developed software that improved his memory. Patent-pending.
  • 7. One thing he remembered very well. He loved his family.
  • 9. So here is our memory challenged engineer’s idea. What if memory enhancing software were used to help people remember key parts of their lives? And what if you added positive psychology to the mix to help them remember their happiest life stories and it all went into this really cool book?
  • 11. 1. Imagine a guided tour through all the stages of your life. Childhood, adolescence, marriage. Imagine that you focus mostly on the positive. 2. Imagine that this process is powerful and life-changing. “I’ve never looked at my life this way before.” 3. Imagine a leather bound, preservation quality Legacy Profile to be handed down to heirs. Like a precious heirloom, or memoir.
  • 14. Here’s the Legacy Profiles Team
  • 15. The Legacy Profile team worked hard and found clients. 1. Clients reported life-changing experiences. 2. One even jumped the contours of the initial contract -- $15,000.00 -- to the tune of $100,000.00. 3. Legacy Profiles had stepped into a big pile of moola.
  • 16. One small problem. It turns out that the compassionate, highly intelligent, well- educated Legacy Profiles team couldn’t exactly say what Legacy Profiles does.
  • 17. We asked the founder: “What does your company do?” Here’s his reply, “We utilize memory-enhancing software, you know, we do it in a fifteen hour process, we’re trying here to go into this process of uncovering and enhancing people’s most formative life experiences, their happy memories if you will, um, so their relationships, you know, with themselves and their families can only be enhanced through this software and the creating and reviewing of this acid-free, leather bound legacy profiles book. You know, that they can hand down to their loved ones.” Wow! 81 One sentence! 81 words!
  • 18. Engineer wrestles with the human heart and the English language! Loses! Clamors for a rematch!
  • 19. So if they couldn’t say concisely what their company did, wouldn’t they have one heck of hard time getting anyone to buy what the company sold?
  • 20. Ha! A clue! Thus spoke a client: “Recalling my happiest family memories gave me an insight into how to interact and communicate more fully with my daughters and grandchildren. I feel deeply gratified. My daughters and grandchildren will have this permanent remembrance of how much I loved each of them.”
  • 21. Can you imagine trying to find out what your company does by asking a customer? How crazy is that?
  • 22. So they called us. Because they didn’t know exactly what they were selling, or how to explain it concisely, they turned to us, Lucid Content. They thought, a company with a name like Lucid Content ought to help us achieve some clarity about what the heck we’re doing here.
  • 23. So we did what we always do. We think. And we go poking our heads into all kinds of stuff. Like this-
  • 25. And then we thought for a while longer. We needed a value proposition. And a mission statement. And a values statement. We needed to get lucid for one very big reason.
  • 26. Lucid sells. Clarity sells. If the whole world is bombarded with messages, your best chance at getting through is to be absolutely, clear. Lucid. Clarity persuades, and has been proven to be more effective than “persuasion”.
  • 27. So first came the mission statement: With compassionate, professional guidance, Legacy Profiles helps our clients to reclaim, preserve and share the very best parts of their life story. For themselves, their families and their loved ones. Forever.
  • 28. Then we tackled the values statement: We believe in every person’s story. We believe in the power of storytelling and memory as healing, deeply human impulses that together bring greater intimacy and meaning to every person’s life.
  • 29. Then the value proposition. “We help you honor your life and loved ones through guided, positive memories and by elegantly preserving your life story.”
  • 30. Hmmm... Sounds good. Say that again?
  • 31. “We’re Legacy Profiles. We help you honor your life and loved ones through guided, positive memories and by elegantly preserving your life story.”
  • 32. So keeping in mind Lucid Content’s key principles, - Beautiful, lucid copy and design. - A focus on the customer. - A human voice. - No hype or jargon. we developed a new magazine ad. Which the Legacy Profile team loved.
  • 34. Wait! I didn’t see a tagline? Don’t they need a tagline?
  • 37. www.lucidcontent.com 503.621.2215 Richard@LucidContent.com