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Digital Graphic Narrative
Development
name

Evaluation
What did you like about your image?
What would you improve if you did it again?

Evaluation
If I was to do it again I would take more time on the hair trying to get every
strand correct because different parts of the hair where different colours. I
would also improve the face features like the nose as it looks like the nose has
been stuck on. I would also like to improve the light and dark parts and make
them stand out more so that if a part of the picture is lighter than another I
would like to show that clearly.

Evaluation
I liked how it went from a just my name into turning my name into something
weird. I liked getting use the different tools and changing the text in new
ways. I liked that you could input images into the text and have a type of
camo to go other the words. I liked the fact you could put the words really
close or really far away. What I also liked about my text based image was
I would use other aspects of the new tools that I didn’t get to use when doing
the text type.

Evaluation
What I enjoyed about my image is that it was simplistic to do. I think that the images
show clearly what is happening in the story and you can tell at each stage what is
going on. I also liked the facial expressions on the face of the person in the images it
captured exactly what I wanted. I also liked the detail within the image it captures
every aspect of what I wanted. I also liked hat the image shows what I wanted it to
show. I also liked the image with the black background as it shows he is falling to
nowhere which is what I wanted.
I would improve the pictures that were taking for the photo story. I would try to take
the photo from different angles to get a better image, Also take a mixture of short and
long photo to mix it up as images at the same distance can get boring. Make sure all
the images are at the best quality they can be because one of the images came out
really blurry. I would plan what I want the final product to be better. I would add more
to the images and make a background for each of the images. I would also try and add
some prompts so that I do not have to get images off the internet and add them in.

Mind Map
Source of the story
Fairy tale
Style The pages could be landscape
because most books are
landscape. But I might use
portrait to be different.
I will be using standard font and
will be making the font big and
clear to read.
The style of the book will be set in
small paragraphs. One per page on
the other page there will be an
image showing what is going on.
The colors of the book will
be bright and the story will
be colorful.
Characters
The main characters would be
modern day people. There would
be a teenager, mother, rich father
and his daughter.
The characters will be happy
with what they have. Jack
will be lazy at the start and
then later on in the story
become active.
Jack will be lifeless and boring
but his journey will change that
and he will become full of life
and enjoy his life.
They will be
cartoonish
characters
I could use a
wood as a
background
setting
because he
could work for
a
woodchopper
in the woods.
The background settings
I could also use a desert and
show him working towards a
town to find his job.
The background setting
is going to be in a city or
a town. The town or city
will be very modern. It
will be set in modern
time.
I am going to have different
types of weather. Like one day
it will be raining and the next it
is sun shining.
Story
The story is going to be
about a teenager called jack.
He is very lazy and gets told
by his parents that if he
doesn’t get a job she will
kick him out. So for seven
days he goes out and does a
job and gets a reward but he
never brings it home as it
breaks. The final day he gets
a donkey and walks past a
house where a girl laughs for
the first time and her father
ends up getting the pair
married.
I could have dark colour
when bad things happen
and bright colors for when
good things are happening. I
could also change the story
and have a darker feel to
the story, which would be
good for dark colors.
Maybe some bad things occur
that don’t happen in the story.
Like jack disappearing for
example. And maybe jack will
be sad even after he gets
married to a rich man
daughter.
Visual style
Photographs
It’s going to look modern with a cartoon feel to it.
Illustrating Rotoscoping

He gets rewarded
with a cat that he
tries to carry
home.
This is going to be one
of the backgrounds as
one day it will be raining
when jack is coming
back with his reward.
The butcher
which jack
works for.
The coin in which
was jacks first
reward for working.
Lazy jack is taking in the
sun relaxing because he
has nothing else to do
with himself.
Jack get
rewarded with
cheese and is
told by his
mother that he
should keep is
reward on his
head.
Jack being lazy with his
mother telling him that
he got to find a job or will
have to buy in own
porridge.
This is when jack get his
final prize being a donkey
and is walking past the
house of a rich man and his
daughter and his daughter
sees jack and starts to burst
into laughter.
This is the rich father
who jack passes his
house with the
donkey and makes his
daughter laugh for the
very first time.
Jack
carrying
the
donkey
home
around his
shoulders.
This is like the
city/town that
jack will be
looking for his
jobs.
The rich man
daughter who
ends up
getting
married to
lazy jack.
The neighbor
farmer that jack
works for.
This is the
baker that
jack works
for.

This shows the city street in which jack
will have to travel through to get to his
job and then get home.
This picture shows jack getting an
reward for working
The rich guys house
Jack telling his mother what
had happened with the cat he
got.
Black and white image of jack
with the donkey on his
shoulders
His peace of meat for working
with the butcher. Dragging it to
his house.

Proposal
Dimensions
The number of pages I will use in my book is 8 pages. I will be using a A5 size for my children book.
Export Format
The export format I am going to use is going to be a JPEG file.
Advantages: the advantages of using a JPEG file is high controlled degree of compression. The user independently selects the ratio
quality file size
small file size.
format is compatible and it is displayed correctly in any browsers, text and graphics programs, on all computers, tablets and mobile
devices.
suitable for full-color realistic images with a lot of color and contrast transitions
picture quality is high with small degree of compression.
Disadvantages: image may fall apart into individual squares – 8×8 pixel blocks when you squeeze it. This occurs because
compression algorithm involves analysis of neighboring pixels, due to this smooth color – transitions may become harsh or just
disappear.
JPEG is less suitable for working with text or monochrome graphics with clear boundaries
format does not support transparency and In case of drawing templates, logos, buttons it’s necessary;
every next step of compressing the image degrades its quality .

Story Overview
A outline of the story would be that lazy jack is a person how is very lazy and doesn’t
plan on doing anything except siting in the sun. jack gets told by his mother that he
needs to go and find work. So everyday of the next week he goes out and finds a job
and gets rewarded everytime he does a new job. The rewards he gets he ends up not
getting them home and his mother each time will tell him to try a different method of
bringing it home. The last day of the week he gets a donkey and carries over his
shoulders. He walks past a rich man house where his daughter sees jack and for the
first time in her life she laughs. So the rich man decides that jack and his daughter are
to get married and live in a big house with his mother.

Deadline
The deadline is going to be the 6th of November.
Audience
The target audience that will be aiming my children book at is going to be 5 to 8 year olds. The
gender would be mostly aimed at males because the book is about a male character but
females could also read the book for entertainment reasons and also there is a female
character within the book. The location where the book will be released would probably the
entire world as there are no problems with what the story tells and nobody should take it
offensive. It could be aimed at people who lack motivation to try and motivate them to do
something because they don’t know how there future is going to play out just like the main
character in the book. The book will be aimed at middle class people. People how enjoy
comedy may read this book as it has a comedy feel to it.
Production Methods
To produce the pages I am going to use Photoshop. I will use rotoscoping to create the images,
I will do this because I find it easier to do than the other methods. Also using this makes it
faster. But I might use photographs because it is simple to do and you can capture exactly what
you want. I will use Photoshop because you can use it for every aspect that you need within a
book. I would use rotoscoping because it is easy to access. There will be more pictures than
text within the book because picture can say more words from just the image. The images are
going to be bright colours and the text is going to be big and readable for the reader to read.

What are the strengths of the proposal? What areas of the proposal need further work?
A strength of this proposal is that the story is clear
and easy to understand, also there are lots of
reasoning behind the production techniques.
If it was to be improved it could a have more detail
about he audience.
What are the strengths of the idea generation? What areas of idea generation could have been
further developed?
A strength of the idea generation is that the mind
map is very clear and shows that the ideas have
been thought out and have considered lots of
options
Something that could be improved could be the
mood board, it could have more options of the
illustration styles.

Detailed points about the advantages and
disadvantages of the export format.
In terms of the dimensions it doesn’t say how big
the page sizes will be.
further developed?
Explained thoroughly for each point and also used
picture annotations for each one. Used multiple
points for each heading and again is explained in
detail.
Be more clear for which line/arrow it is pointing at.
Also possibly use less writing on the mood board.

You explained the advantages and disadvantages
in lots of detail, so the person knows why JPEG
may be suitable/unsuitable for task.
You explained clearly why photoshop and
photographs would be best for you. This shows
your understanding of this story.
In the audience category, you explained the aim of
the story which helps to show what the reader
should gain from it.
Explain why middle class people.
further developed?

Feedback Summary
Sum up your feedback.
The sum up of my feedback is that it is generally positive from the people that reviewed.
My proposal got better feedback than the mood board and mind map. People say that I
have put detailed descriptions of the story and the format type. There were some
negatives to do with the mood board and the mind map.
Which parts of your feedback do you agree with and why?
The parts of the feedback I agree with is that I put a detailed description of the format
and that I put plenty of detail for each point. I agree with parts of my mind map not be
very clear as there is a lack of arrows pointing to the information. I agree with the
explanation I did on the Photoshop and the photographs. I could have more variations of
pictures on my mood board.
Which parts of your feedback do you disagree with and why?
The parts on which I disagree on are the detail in which was put in the audience section I
feel like I covered all aspects of the audience.

1. Lazy Jack is a boy who lives at home with his mother. He enjoys siting in the sun and doing nothing
all day long. while he is not having to do any work his mother does all the work for him. Jack and his
mother are very poor and struggle to have the money to do any think so his mother decides it is time for
Jack to get a job and start earning for the family.
2. Jacks mother tells Jack “you have to find a job tomorrow or I will kick you out”. So Jack decided that
he would get a job to help his mother out.
3. The next day Jack goes out to find a job. Jack hired himself to a neighbour farmer. The farmer would
offer a coin for his work. But he loses the coin as he drop the coin. When he gets home he tells his
mother that he dropped it and so she calls him a silly boy and “that he should carry it in his pocket”.
4. The next day Jack hired himself to a cow keeper. The cattle-keeper offer him a jar of milk for his work.
Jack put the jar of milk in his pocket but by the time he got home the jar of milk had spilled in his pocket.
When he got home his mother told him “he should of carried it on your head”.
5. The next day Jack hired himself to a farmer. The farmer would offer him some cream cheese for his
work. So on the way back he carried the cream cheese on his head. By the time he got home the
cheese was spoilt and some got stuck in his hair. His mother told him “that he should of carried it in his
hands”.
6. The next day Jack hired himself to a baker. The baker would offer jack a large cat for his work. So
jack took the cat and carried it in his arms. The cat scratched jack until jack could not hold on any longer.
When jack gets home his mother tells him “he should of tied a lead around the cat and dragged it home”.
7. The next day Jack hired himself to a butcher. The butcher would offer him a piece of meat for his
work. So jack took the meat and put a lead around the meat and dragged it home. When he got home
the meat was completely spoilt. His mother told him “he should of carried it on his shoulders”.
8. The next day Jack hired himself to another farmer. The farmer would offer him a donkey for his work.
Jack found it hard to carry the donkey on his shoulders, but he managed to do it. On his journey back to
his house he went past the house of a rich man. The rich man and his daughter were looking at jack
carrying the donkey. The daughter of the rich man started to laugh for the first time in her life.
9. Her father was so delighted that she laughs for the first time that he married his daughter to lazy Jack.
Who because of this became a rich man and would live in a big house with his mother.

1. Lazy Jack was a boy who lives at home with his mother. Jack enjoyed siting in the sun and doing nothing
all day long. while he was not having to do any work his mother would do all the work for him. Jack and his
mother were very poor and struggle to have the money to do any think so his mother decides it is time for
Jack to get a job and start earning for the family.
2. Jacks mother tells Jack “you have to find a job tomorrow or I will kick you out”. So Jack decided that he
would get a job to help his mother out.
3. The next day Jack went out to find a job. Jack got himself a job with the neighbour farmer. The farmer
would give Jack a coin for his work. But Jack loses the coin as he dropped the coin. When he got home he
told his mother “I dropped the coin I got given” so she calls him a “silly boy” and that “he should carry it in
his pocket”.
4. The next day Jack got himself a job with the cattle-keeper. The cattle-keeper would offer him a jar of milk
for his work. Jack put the jar of milk in his pocket but by the time he got home the jar of milk had spilled in
his pocket. When he got home his mother told him “he should of carried it on your head”.
5. The next day Jack got himself a job with the farmer. The farmer would offer him some cream cheese for
his work. So on the way back he carried the cream cheese on his head. By the time he got home the
cheese was spoilt and some got stuck in his hair. His mother told him that “he should carry it in his hands”.
6. The next day Jack got himself a job with the baker. The baker would offer jack a large cat for his work. So
jack took the cat and carried it in his arms. The cat scratched jack until jack could not hold on any longer.
When jack gets home his mother tells him “he should of tied a lead around the cat and dragged it home”.
7. The next day Jack got himself a job with the butcher. The butcher would offer him a piece of meat for his
work. So jack took the meat and put a lead around the meat and dragged it home. When he got home the
meat was completely spoilt. His mother told him “he should of carried it on his shoulders”.
8. The next day Jack got himself a job with another farmer. The farmer would offer him a donkey for his work.
Jack found it hard to carry the donkey on his shoulders, but he managed to do it. On his journey back to
his house he went past the house of a rich man. The rich man and his daughter were looking at jack
carrying the donkey. The daughter of the rich man started to laugh for the first time in her life.
9. Her father was so delighted that she laughs for the first time that he married his daughter to lazy Jack.
Who because of this became a rich man and would live in a big house with his mother.

Original Script
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Final Script
Final script goes here.

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