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   The feedback I received was to re-design the
    first draft of the double page spread. This
    included changing the main image as it was
    too small and didn’t take up the whole page,
    to split the text into separate columns and
    use the original family image somewhere else
    on the page.
   Upon acting on this feedback, I had to re-
    shoot the model, re-edit the image and
    change parts of the layout.
Although I had to re-design my
  double page spread, I wasn’t totally
 starting from scratch as I still had my
   original spread (as seen in the top
right hand corner) to use as reference.

The biggest change I had to work with
    was the image alteration as this
 picture would now take up the whole
 page, limiting the amount of space I
  had to work with on the left page.

Using the original spread as a guide,
 the majority of change would be the
layout, as the components within the
     spread would stay the same.
Somehow during the
  photo shoot, both the
model and I managed to
miss the fact the model’s
    flies were undone.
    Having noticed this
  whilst completing my
    spread, the image
underwent some editing
  with the Clone Stamp
 Tool. I used this tool to
 essentially colour in the
    parts that weren’t
 supposed to be ‘open’.
  The trousers now look
normal and will not draw
any negative attention to
         the reader.
Having already had
  the article title,
 leading text, the
  slug, the actual
article, the anchor
   and the extra
   details at the
   bottom of the
   page, I played
  around with the
positions of where
they all should be.
 The image to the
left is an example
   of one of the
 possible layouts I
came across when
  experimenting.
After arranging the components of my spread onto the pages in an
 appropriate way, I then opened four more family-orientated photos onto
Photoshop. I had to resize them and cut them down to an appropriate size
  and to do this I used the Crop Tool. This tool enabled me to choose the
 section of the image that I wanted to appear on my spread. Choosing the
size was rather important as I needed to think about the sizing in relation
                   to the amount of space I had available.
After cropping the images down to an appropriate size, the next step
  was to add the frame around them. This step took slightly longer as I
  needed to use the get the photos onto PowerPoint in order to use the
   frame effect it has. After applying the frame onto the images, I then
copied and pasted them onto my page on Photoshop and arranged them
                               around the text.
This was the original main double page spread image, however from
receiving my feedback, it has now become yet another component that is
 part of the whole spread. However, because it is the image that is most
 relevant to the article, I put it separate to the other, on top of the main
              image on the left page to draw attention to it.
I added the sellotape in order to give the
  spread a creative sense. The sellotape along
with the slant of the pictures gives the effect as
 if a person has pasted these pictures onto the
                      page.

I got this effect from using
  the Brush Tool and then
  loading the brushes that
are available on my school
  system. The one I chose
 was ‘Tape Tizzape’ which
    gave me a variety of
sellotape effects to choose
            from.
Slug




Image




        Anchor
   As demonstrated in the previous slide, the
    layout of my spread follow the classic ‘C’
    shape magazine arrangement. The slug seen
    in the top right corner, the image on the left
    page and the anchor at the bottom right hand
    corner of the page are all situated in
    positions which correlate with the reader’s
    typical eye flow.
   I decided to go with this convention as I
    broke the usual front cover convention with
    the gaze of the model looking down.
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Double page spread improvements pdf

  • 2. The feedback I received was to re-design the first draft of the double page spread. This included changing the main image as it was too small and didn’t take up the whole page, to split the text into separate columns and use the original family image somewhere else on the page.  Upon acting on this feedback, I had to re- shoot the model, re-edit the image and change parts of the layout.
  • 3. Although I had to re-design my double page spread, I wasn’t totally starting from scratch as I still had my original spread (as seen in the top right hand corner) to use as reference. The biggest change I had to work with was the image alteration as this picture would now take up the whole page, limiting the amount of space I had to work with on the left page. Using the original spread as a guide, the majority of change would be the layout, as the components within the spread would stay the same.
  • 4. Somehow during the photo shoot, both the model and I managed to miss the fact the model’s flies were undone. Having noticed this whilst completing my spread, the image underwent some editing with the Clone Stamp Tool. I used this tool to essentially colour in the parts that weren’t supposed to be ‘open’. The trousers now look normal and will not draw any negative attention to the reader.
  • 5. Having already had the article title, leading text, the slug, the actual article, the anchor and the extra details at the bottom of the page, I played around with the positions of where they all should be. The image to the left is an example of one of the possible layouts I came across when experimenting.
  • 6. After arranging the components of my spread onto the pages in an appropriate way, I then opened four more family-orientated photos onto Photoshop. I had to resize them and cut them down to an appropriate size and to do this I used the Crop Tool. This tool enabled me to choose the section of the image that I wanted to appear on my spread. Choosing the size was rather important as I needed to think about the sizing in relation to the amount of space I had available.
  • 7. After cropping the images down to an appropriate size, the next step was to add the frame around them. This step took slightly longer as I needed to use the get the photos onto PowerPoint in order to use the frame effect it has. After applying the frame onto the images, I then copied and pasted them onto my page on Photoshop and arranged them around the text.
  • 8. This was the original main double page spread image, however from receiving my feedback, it has now become yet another component that is part of the whole spread. However, because it is the image that is most relevant to the article, I put it separate to the other, on top of the main image on the left page to draw attention to it.
  • 9. I added the sellotape in order to give the spread a creative sense. The sellotape along with the slant of the pictures gives the effect as if a person has pasted these pictures onto the page. I got this effect from using the Brush Tool and then loading the brushes that are available on my school system. The one I chose was ‘Tape Tizzape’ which gave me a variety of sellotape effects to choose from.
  • 10. Slug Image Anchor
  • 11. As demonstrated in the previous slide, the layout of my spread follow the classic ‘C’ shape magazine arrangement. The slug seen in the top right corner, the image on the left page and the anchor at the bottom right hand corner of the page are all situated in positions which correlate with the reader’s typical eye flow.  I decided to go with this convention as I broke the usual front cover convention with the gaze of the model looking down.