Draft 3 timeline
- 2. Opening Sequence Timeline Draft 3 Girl is walking into the park. She finds a bench, sits down and takes out her phone. Reads text from friend that says, ‘I’m Busy’. She puts her bag down and takes out her journal. She opens her journal and looks over her previous entries. FLASHBACK. Girl’s friend see her bruise and quickly covers it up. END OF FLASHBACK. FLASHBACK. Mother strangling her. END OF FLASHBACK. Turns the next page of the journal. Turns the next page of the journal. FLASHBACK Girl checking her bruises in the mirror. END OF FLASHBACK.
- 3. Opening Sequence Timeline Draft 3 Puts away her journal and rushes out the park. Girl gets on the bus. Hears a vibration, takes out her phone and see 9 missed calls from her mother. Running down her street. Stops running at the front door. Has voice overs in her head. Door. Girl. Door. Checks the time. 4:20 Voice over of mother telling her to be home by 4:30. Door. Girl.