Enrique's Year 6 Speech Assessment
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This document provides feedback on a writing assignment. It suggests that the writer start with a quality opening instead of immediately presenting arguments. It also advises using paragraphs more effectively and including more detail in the writing. The feedback recommends setting out arguments and drawing them to an effective conclusion.
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Enrique's Year 6 Speech Assessment
- 2. Target Mark Comment Write with appropriate structure and organisation. 1 2 3 4 5 I think I did well but I kind of messed up in the opening. Use quality openings 1 2 3 4 5 A t the beginning I started writing arguments in the opening. Use paragraphs effectively 1 2 3 4 5 Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5 I don’t think I had stuff to put detail on to. Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively 1 2 3 4 5