Feed back sheet 2
- 1. Feed Back Sheet “This is our rough cut for the opening sequence of a thriller movie. How do you think we could improve it to make it more effective?” Some tense sound would make it a lot better, you would get a feel for the film In rough-cut 2 we have added lots of different types of sounds and music to create the correct tension. The whole thing could flow better As this was our first rough-cut it did not flow effectively in our second rough-cut we have created better transitions between different shots, such as the bath scene. Your production logo could move to work better with the Sony logo. With a sound over the top of it. Our production logo now zooms in, however we tend to better this is our final cut by maybe making the full logo move.
- 2. A name of the film would be helpful We are still as of yet to come up with a name for our film, however we will soon have an effective name, which will work well with our film. There is some jumpy cuts from each scene it would look a lot better if these were to be smooth We have created smoother transactions and merged some of the clips together to make the flow of the sequence better. We have also done this with the sound in our second rough- cut. It is quite long for a opening sequence We have now cut the opening sequence down, however we still need to cut it down further to make it more realistic.
- 3. Some scene’s last to long (talking on the phone) We have cut many scenes down to benefit the flow of the sequence. We did however focus of the phone scene. We have cut between two different shots to make the scene flow easier but also cut some dialogue out. There is a slight change of lighting between the scenes, which confused me a little This could unfortunately not be helped due to the location we chose. However to over come this problem we played about with the saturation and brightness of the clips which has hopefully made the change of lighting a lot better than in our first rough-cut.