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How to Write a First-Class
      Dissertation

       Vlad Mackevic

     19th February 2013
      Aston University
www.TheLectureRoom.co.uk
Objectives

   How to come up with a dissertation topic
   How to write a literature review
   How to be critical
   How to structure your dissertation
   How to research efficiently
   How to become a better writer
Dissertation


 A piece of independent research
 Contributes to the body of knowledge
 Something NEW:
   New methods with old theory
   New data with old methods
   New theory with the same dataset
What Earns You Points?
 Answering the
  Question (!)
 Structure
 Style and language
 Research and
  Analysis
 References
 Formatting and
  Presentation
The Topic
Dissertation
Research-Based vs. Library-Based
The Question


1. The Object of the Study
2. The Context of the Study
3. The Method of the Study
Keep It Simple and Narrow



The rise of the Asian Tigers
(economic power in the East)
Taiwan                      Reasons
          Impact         Singapore
   The rise of the Asian Tigers
   (economic power in the East)
  International relations        Hong Kong
South Korea               Consequences
          Economic performance
What were the reasons for the
economic miracle of South Korea
in the second half of the twentieth
century?
What were the reasons for the
 economic miracle of South Korea
 in the second half of the twentieth
 century?

• Not consequences
What were the reasons for the
 economic miracle of South Korea
 in the second half of the twentieth
 century?

• Not consequences
• Not Taiwan, Singapore or Hong Kong
What were the reasons for the
 economic miracle of South Korea
 in the second half of the twentieth
 century?

• Not consequences;
• Not Taiwan, Singapore or Hong Kong
• Not any other time
How national cultures affect
organisational cultures and the
impact of this on the performance
of   businesses     in    different
countries?
Object
How national cultures affect
organisational cultures and the
impact of this on the performance
of   businesses     in    different
countries?
Context
How national cultures affect
organisational cultures and the
impact of this on the performance
of   businesses     in    different
countries?
Method
How national cultures affect
organisational cultures and the
impact of this on the performance
of   businesses     in    different
countries?
How national cultures affect
 organisational cultures and the
 impact of this on the performance
 of   businesses     in    different
 countries?

• Which countries do you mean?
• What companies will be used as examples?
Walter Scott and the carving of
brutishness: Nationalism and
regionalism within his novels.
The role of maternal diet in early
  childhood obesity


• Focus group      =   participants?   Sociological
  profiling?
• Methods? observation, survey, etc
• Context = NOW!
Structure


Introduction (10-15%)
 Main Body (70-80%)
 Conclusion (10-15%)
Structure


1. Say what you’re going to say;
2. Say it;
3. Say what you’ve just said.
Set Topic        vs.   Free Topic
 Introduction          Introduction
 Main Body             Literature
 Conclusion             Review
 References            Methodology
                        Analysis and
                         Discussion
                        Conclusion
                        References
Abstract and Introduction
Abstract and Introduction


 Summarise your research
 Explain what you are writing
  about
 Guide your reader
 Mention the Object, the Context
  and the Method
Write Your
Introduction at the
       End
Why?
 It’s hard
 You don’t have all the information yet
     Theory
     Applications of the theory
     Arguments of the essay
     Outline and structure
 Write about your most recent actions
Main Body

 Main arguments
 Evidence
 Reading/knowledge
 References
The Funnel and the Hourglass
Broad to Narrow
The Funnel Principle
Link all your
arguments back to the
  assignment topic!
Broad to Narrow and Back to Broad
The
Hourglass
Principle
Copy from one, it’s plagiarism;
 copy from two, it’s research.

                 Wilson Mizner
   US screenwriter (1876 - 1933)
Research
Primary          Secondary
Research


 Wikipedia (ONLY for general
  knowledge)
 Not to be included in the list of
  references
 References on Wikipedia
How to write a first class disseration 19th feb 2013 aston
Research


 Textbooks and their chapters
  (theory)

 Research articles and conference
  papers (application of theory in
  practice)
http://scholar.google.com
Research


 Websites

 Serious journalism

 Email correspondence
Research Tips
 Relevant – answer the question
 Research ethics
 Make notes while you’re reading
 Carefully note down full
  references
 BACK IT UP!
Literature Review
Literature Review

  A critical summary of main
research you have found on the
             subject
Why?

  Done your reading
   Know your topic
Aware of the weaknesses
‘Passable’ Literature Review

 Main theories
 How they were applied
 Research methods used by
  others
 Research design used by others
First-Class Literature Review

 Why did you choose these theories?
 How did others obtain their
  results?
 Similarities/differences in study
  design
 Predict your results
 An original contribution
Analysis and Discussion

 What has been found?
 Why such results?
 Differences between your
  research and that of the others
 Different methods; different
  participants
Limitations
In the beginner's mind there are
many possibilities, in the expert's
there are few.
                   Shunryu Suzuki
Acknowledge Your Limitations

 Your lecturer will like it
 All researchers do it
 No theory is perfect
 No dataset is perfect
 No research method is perfect
Conclusion
 Mention the topic again
 Describe methods, data analysed etc.
 Summarise the findings
 How your findings correspond to the
  previous research
 Only write about your data and your
  research.
Speak confidently about your
        own results.

 Do not make generalisations
about the world based on your
     limited data sample.
Referencing
Why Reference?


 To avoid failing the module
 Because it’s fair
 To back up your claims
 Evidence of extensive reading
Referencing
 Who wrote it?
 What is the book/article called?
 Who published it?
 Where was it published?
 When was it published?
The Writing Process
No Perfect First Draft
Never Leave Your Sheet Blank
Good Writers Read
Always Carry a Notebook
Linking Words
Do Not Complicate Things
Paragraph
Speak to Your
 Lecturers!
Graduate Employment




 1930           2009
2007
Unfilled vacancies?
Students lack skills that employers are
               looking for




                        http://lifehacker.com/infographic/
Job Skills
1.   Communication (Written and Spoken)
2.   Analytical and Research
3.   Teamwork
4.   Self-motivation
5.   Organisational Skills
6.   IT Skills
7.   Leadership
Communication Skills
Written          Spoken




  Sources: http://www.sytelco.com and www.nightingale.norfolk.sch.uk
Communication Skills
    Written           Spoken

 Writing
  essays, research
  reports and
  dissertations
 Email
  communication
Communication Skills
    Written                Spoken

 Writing             Giving
  essays, research     presentations
  reports and         Participating in
  dissertations        discussions in
 Email                lectures and
  communication        seminars
                      Being a good
                       listener
Analytical and Research Skills




                    Source: www.actbucks.org.uk
Analytical and Research Skills
Academic writing is all about research
and analysis:
  Looking for information online and in the
   library
  Determining which information is relevant
   to your assignment question
  Collecting and analysing data
  Acknowledging its limitations
Teamwork Skills
 Group
  assignments
 Establish a study
  group – or join one
 Group work in
  lectures and
  seminars
 Participations in
  group discussions
                        Source: www.destructoid.com
Self-motivation
• Most of academic work
  is made of independent
  learning tasks
• Always deliver more:
  take initiative to make
  presentations, speak in
  group discussions
Motivation
Organisational Skills
Academic work requires
top-class organisational
skills:

– Managing multiple
  coursework deadlines
– Planning your time to
  write your essays
– Planning your time in
  exams
– Outlining and organising
  your writing
IT Skills
IT skills at university:
– Word Processing
– Spreadsheets
– PowerPoint
  presentations
– Internet-based research
– Professional social
  media (Facebook and
  LinkedIn)
Facebook Fails
Bank intern? Family emergency?




http://www.complex.com/tech/2012/05/25-facebook-posts-that-have-gotten-people-
fired/bank-intern-busted
Teacher Fired for Drinking on
                   Vacation




http://www.complex.com/tech/2012/05/25-facebook-posts-that-have-gotten-people-
fired/paynestaking
“LBG's new CEO gets £4,000 an hour.
           I get £7. That's fair.”




http://www.complex.com/tech/2012/05/25-facebook-posts-that-have-gotten-people-
fired/salary-leak
This Guy Worked for Apple!

            Fail!




                                                    Fail!
                  Fail!
http://www.complex.com/tech/2012/05/25-facebook-posts-that-have-gotten-people-
fired/apple-employee
What about this Tweet?
Leadership
Leadership
Who is a leader?
– A good communicator
– A team player
– A good researcher
– Able to analyse situations
– Motivated and ready to
  motivate others
– Organised, with a respect
  for deadlines
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