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In-Text Citations & MLA 
By the end of this lesson you will 
know how to create an in-text 
citation & how to format a paper 
using MLA.
Formatting a Paper 
Times New Roman 12 point font 
Only print on one side of the paper. 
Margins: 
Your margins on all pages of your paper 
should be 1 inch. 
Use the Page Setup feature under File to 
change these.
Formatting a Paper 
Spacing: 
Double space throughout the paper. 
Use the paragraph feature that you can find 
by right clicking in the document. Under the 
line spacing drop down box, click double. 
DO NOT try to hit enter twice at the end of 
every line to double space. It’s more trouble 
than it’s worth!
Formatting a Paper 
Heading and Title: 
 You do not need a title page in MLA format. 
 You DO need to include the following… 
 Your Name 
 Teacher 
 Class/Period 
 Date 
 Header - Last 
name and 
page # 
 Title
Sources 
General Rules: 
In a perfect world, no more than 25% of 
your paper should be quotations. 
Paraphrase as much as you can. 
Use direct quotations when citing numerical 
data such as statistics. 
Use an author’s words if they capture a 
point exactly.
Sources 
When to put the source in your paper: 
A direct quote 
A statistic 
An idea that is not your own 
Someone else’s opinion 
Concrete facts, not considered “common 
knowledge” 
Knowledge not considered “common”
Paraphrasing and Summarizing 
Even if you paraphrase 
or summarize, 
YOU 
STILL MUST 
ACKNOWLEDGE 
YOUR SOURCE!!
Signal Phrases in MLA 
Model Signal Phrases: 
 “In the words of 
researchers Long and 
McKenzie…” 
 “As Paul Rudnick has 
noted…” 
 “Melinda Stuart, mother 
of a drunk driver, points 
out…” 
 “…, writes Michelle 
Moore,…” 
 VVeerrbbss iinn SSiiggnnaall 
PPhhrraasseess:: 
aacckknnoowwlleeddggeess aaddmmiittss 
aaggrreeeess aasssseerrttss 
bbeelliieevveess ccllaaiimmss 
ccoommmmeennttss ccoonnffiirrmmss 
ccoonntteennddss ddeeccllaarreess 
ddeenniieess ddiissppuutteess 
eemmpphhaassiizzeess eennddoorrsseess 
ggrraannttss iilllluussttrraatteess 
iimmpplliieess nnootteess 
oobbsseerrvveess ppooiinnttss oouutt 
rreeaassoonnss rreeffuutteess 
ssuuggggeessttss wwrriitteess 
CCoommpplleettee lliisstt:: HHaacckkeerr,, DDiiaannaa.. AA WWrriitteerr’’ss RReeffeerreennccee.. 55tthh eedd.. BBoossttoonn:: 
BBeeddffoorrdd//SStt.. MMaarrttiinn’’ss,, 22000033.. pp.. 333366..
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
What is it?? 
 A system in which you give your source in 
parenthesis immediately after you give the 
information. 
 Four Common Citations: 
 Author and page number 
 Title and page number 
 Page number only 
 Secondhand quotations 
 The first word of your citation MUST match the 
corresponding entry on your Works Cited page.
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
Author and Page Number 
(Keeling 125) 
Notice there is no “p” and no comma. 
(Keeling, p 125)  INCORRECT!!! 
The struggle for identity is common during 
puberty (Keeling 125).
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
Title and Page Number 
Her distinctive writing style adds to 
her mystique (“Plath” 19). 
 Often, articles, editorials, pamphlets, and other 
materials have no author listed; give the first 
distinctive word of the title followed by the page 
number.
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
Page Number Only 
If you have already mentioned the author’s 
name, put the page number only. 
Keeling states that Plath’s work stand in stark 
contrast to other confessional poets (58).
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
Sometimes in this class you will need to use 
citations for poetry or line numbers in a story. 
You use these in place of the page number, 
but you must still have the authors name 
somewhere as well. 
 When you are writing about a single work of fiction, 
you do not need to include the author’s name each 
time you quote from or paraphrase the work. After 
you mention the author’s name at the beginning of 
your paper, you may include just the page number 
in your parenthetical citations.
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
In Susan Glaspell’s short story “A Jury of Her Peers,” 
two women accompany their husbands and a 
county attorney to an isolated house where a 
farmer named John Wright has been choked to 
death in his bed with a rope. The chief suspect is 
Wright’s wife, Minnie, who is in jail awaiting trial. The 
sheriff’s wife, Mrs. Peters, has come along to gather 
some personal items for Minnie, and Mrs. Hale has 
joined her. Early in the story, Mrs. Hale sympathizes 
with Minnie and objects to the way the male 
investigators are “snoopin’ round and criticizin’” her 
kitchen (200). In contrast, Mrs. Peters shows respect 
for the law, saying that the men are doing “no 
more than their duty” (201). 
 Notice the use of page numbers in the parenthetical 
citation.
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
In Susan Glaspell’s short story “A Jury of Her Peers,” 
two women accompany their husbands and a county 
attorney to an isolated house where a farmer named 
John Wright has been choked to death in his bed with 
a rope. The chief suspect is Wright’s wife, Minnie, who 
is in jail awaiting trial. The sheriff’s wife, Mrs. Peters, has 
come along to gather some personal items for Minnie, 
and Mrs. Hale has joined her. Early in the story, Mrs. 
Hale sympathizes with Minnie and objects to the way 
the male investigators are “snoopin’ round and 
criticizin’” her kitchen (123-124). In contrast, Mrs. Peters 
shows respect for the law, saying that the men are 
doing “no more than their duty” (145). 
You will use line numbers mainly when citing poetry but 
also when you write short responses to a story in class.
Parenthetical Citations or 
In-Text Citations 
How Often to Give Citations 
When several facts in a row within one 
paragraph all come from the same page of 
a source. Use one citation to cover them all. 
Place the citation after the last bit of 
information.
How to Incorporate Quotes into 
Your Writing 
What is a quote?? 
Quotes are one way of adding concrete 
details to your paper. When you quote a 
text, you use the EXACT words of the writer. 
You do not change them in any way. 
What should a quote accomplish?? 
A quote is a way for you to illustrate your 
point in your writing. If it doesn’t back up 
what you are saying, don’t use it!
How to Incorporate Quotes into 
Your Writing 
Quotes should be… 
 Brief 
 Relevant to your point 
 Introduced 
 Discussed 
Reader’s need to know… 
 Who is speaking 
 When or in what situation the speaker said this 
 Why this quote is important and how it fits in with 
your argument
How to Incorporate Quotes into 
Your Writing 
We will be using the Claim – Quote - 
Commentary method when responding to 
questions in class or when using quotes in 
research papers. 
 Claim, the first sentence of the response should 
reword the question and state a personal opinion or 
direct response to the question. 
 Quote, look at what the author said and include a 
detail from the text to support your answer 
(TEXTUAL EVIDENCE!!) 
 Suggested Sentence Starters: 
 In the text… 
 The text states… 
 According to the passage… 
 One example from the text… 
 The author states…
How to Incorporate Quotes into 
Your Writing 
 commentary the response should end with you explaining or 
interpreting the significance of the evidence. One of these 
sentence starters may help: 
 This shows… 
 This demonstrates… 
 I believe… 
 Now I know… 
 This proves… 
 Closing statement reminds you that a constructed response 
requires multiple supporting details from the author. 
 In the text… 
 The text also states… 
 According to the passage… 
 A second example from the text… 
 The author also states…
How to Incorporate Quotes into 
Your Writing 
 Think of it like a sandwich. Your 
own words are the bread. The top 
piece is the introduction and the 
bottom is the conclusion. The items 
in the middle are your quoted 
information. Each piece of quoted 
information MUST have an 
introduction and an explanation.
How to Incorporate Quotes into 
Your Writing sandwich example!! 
 First, decide on the point you want to make. I want to prove 
that the residents of Maple Street are allowing fear to turn them 
into a mob. 
 Now, find a quote that illustrates your point. I am going to 
look at Les Goodman’s words when he is being threatened by his 
neighbors. 
 Next, introduce your quote. I will write: 
 As the residents of Maple Street turn on Les Goodman, he 
warns them that, “this thing you’re starting – that should 
frighten you” (77). 
 Finally, discuss your quote. My commentary might be: 
 Les Goodman makes clear that his neighbors are choosing a 
path that can only lead to chaos and the breakdown of their 
community. This point will later be echoed by the aliens.
All together now… 
As the residents of Maple Street turn on 
Les Goodman, he warns them that, “this 
thing you’re starting – that should frighten 
you” (77). With these words, Goodman 
makes clear that his neighbors are 
choosing a path that can only lead to chaos 
and the breakdown of their community. 
This point will later be echoed by the 
aliens.
Use Vivid Verbs to Introduce Quotes 
•Some alternatives to said or says… 
•All in the present tense 
describes assesses admits shows reports 
illustrates finds concedes sees complains 
notes predicts concurs thinks comments 
observes insists grants bemoans argues 
points out maintains laments condemns states 
relates suggests warns supposes speculates
In conclusion… 
ASK YOURSELF 
What is the quote really saying? 
Does my quote support my idea? 
What do I need my readers to understand? 
Have I introduced the quote…the speaker 
and the occasion? 
Have I discussed the quote?
Four W’s Exit Ticket 
What was the focus for today’s lesson? 
What is the definition for the answer to 
#1? 
What does it look like? Give two 
examples. 
Why do we use them?

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In Text Citations MLA

  • 1. In-Text Citations & MLA By the end of this lesson you will know how to create an in-text citation & how to format a paper using MLA.
  • 2. Formatting a Paper Times New Roman 12 point font Only print on one side of the paper. Margins: Your margins on all pages of your paper should be 1 inch. Use the Page Setup feature under File to change these.
  • 3. Formatting a Paper Spacing: Double space throughout the paper. Use the paragraph feature that you can find by right clicking in the document. Under the line spacing drop down box, click double. DO NOT try to hit enter twice at the end of every line to double space. It’s more trouble than it’s worth!
  • 4. Formatting a Paper Heading and Title:  You do not need a title page in MLA format.  You DO need to include the following…  Your Name  Teacher  Class/Period  Date  Header - Last name and page #  Title
  • 5. Sources General Rules: In a perfect world, no more than 25% of your paper should be quotations. Paraphrase as much as you can. Use direct quotations when citing numerical data such as statistics. Use an author’s words if they capture a point exactly.
  • 6. Sources When to put the source in your paper: A direct quote A statistic An idea that is not your own Someone else’s opinion Concrete facts, not considered “common knowledge” Knowledge not considered “common”
  • 7. Paraphrasing and Summarizing Even if you paraphrase or summarize, YOU STILL MUST ACKNOWLEDGE YOUR SOURCE!!
  • 8. Signal Phrases in MLA Model Signal Phrases:  “In the words of researchers Long and McKenzie…”  “As Paul Rudnick has noted…”  “Melinda Stuart, mother of a drunk driver, points out…”  “…, writes Michelle Moore,…”  VVeerrbbss iinn SSiiggnnaall PPhhrraasseess:: aacckknnoowwlleeddggeess aaddmmiittss aaggrreeeess aasssseerrttss bbeelliieevveess ccllaaiimmss ccoommmmeennttss ccoonnffiirrmmss ccoonntteennddss ddeeccllaarreess ddeenniieess ddiissppuutteess eemmpphhaassiizzeess eennddoorrsseess ggrraannttss iilllluussttrraatteess iimmpplliieess nnootteess oobbsseerrvveess ppooiinnttss oouutt rreeaassoonnss rreeffuutteess ssuuggggeessttss wwrriitteess CCoommpplleettee lliisstt:: HHaacckkeerr,, DDiiaannaa.. AA WWrriitteerr’’ss RReeffeerreennccee.. 55tthh eedd.. BBoossttoonn:: BBeeddffoorrdd//SStt.. MMaarrttiinn’’ss,, 22000033.. pp.. 333366..
  • 9. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations What is it??  A system in which you give your source in parenthesis immediately after you give the information.  Four Common Citations:  Author and page number  Title and page number  Page number only  Secondhand quotations  The first word of your citation MUST match the corresponding entry on your Works Cited page.
  • 10. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Author and Page Number (Keeling 125) Notice there is no “p” and no comma. (Keeling, p 125)  INCORRECT!!! The struggle for identity is common during puberty (Keeling 125).
  • 11. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Title and Page Number Her distinctive writing style adds to her mystique (“Plath” 19).  Often, articles, editorials, pamphlets, and other materials have no author listed; give the first distinctive word of the title followed by the page number.
  • 12. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Page Number Only If you have already mentioned the author’s name, put the page number only. Keeling states that Plath’s work stand in stark contrast to other confessional poets (58).
  • 13. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations Sometimes in this class you will need to use citations for poetry or line numbers in a story. You use these in place of the page number, but you must still have the authors name somewhere as well.  When you are writing about a single work of fiction, you do not need to include the author’s name each time you quote from or paraphrase the work. After you mention the author’s name at the beginning of your paper, you may include just the page number in your parenthetical citations.
  • 14. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations In Susan Glaspell’s short story “A Jury of Her Peers,” two women accompany their husbands and a county attorney to an isolated house where a farmer named John Wright has been choked to death in his bed with a rope. The chief suspect is Wright’s wife, Minnie, who is in jail awaiting trial. The sheriff’s wife, Mrs. Peters, has come along to gather some personal items for Minnie, and Mrs. Hale has joined her. Early in the story, Mrs. Hale sympathizes with Minnie and objects to the way the male investigators are “snoopin’ round and criticizin’” her kitchen (200). In contrast, Mrs. Peters shows respect for the law, saying that the men are doing “no more than their duty” (201).  Notice the use of page numbers in the parenthetical citation.
  • 15. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations In Susan Glaspell’s short story “A Jury of Her Peers,” two women accompany their husbands and a county attorney to an isolated house where a farmer named John Wright has been choked to death in his bed with a rope. The chief suspect is Wright’s wife, Minnie, who is in jail awaiting trial. The sheriff’s wife, Mrs. Peters, has come along to gather some personal items for Minnie, and Mrs. Hale has joined her. Early in the story, Mrs. Hale sympathizes with Minnie and objects to the way the male investigators are “snoopin’ round and criticizin’” her kitchen (123-124). In contrast, Mrs. Peters shows respect for the law, saying that the men are doing “no more than their duty” (145). You will use line numbers mainly when citing poetry but also when you write short responses to a story in class.
  • 16. Parenthetical Citations or In-Text Citations How Often to Give Citations When several facts in a row within one paragraph all come from the same page of a source. Use one citation to cover them all. Place the citation after the last bit of information.
  • 17. How to Incorporate Quotes into Your Writing What is a quote?? Quotes are one way of adding concrete details to your paper. When you quote a text, you use the EXACT words of the writer. You do not change them in any way. What should a quote accomplish?? A quote is a way for you to illustrate your point in your writing. If it doesn’t back up what you are saying, don’t use it!
  • 18. How to Incorporate Quotes into Your Writing Quotes should be…  Brief  Relevant to your point  Introduced  Discussed Reader’s need to know…  Who is speaking  When or in what situation the speaker said this  Why this quote is important and how it fits in with your argument
  • 19. How to Incorporate Quotes into Your Writing We will be using the Claim – Quote - Commentary method when responding to questions in class or when using quotes in research papers.  Claim, the first sentence of the response should reword the question and state a personal opinion or direct response to the question.  Quote, look at what the author said and include a detail from the text to support your answer (TEXTUAL EVIDENCE!!)  Suggested Sentence Starters:  In the text…  The text states…  According to the passage…  One example from the text…  The author states…
  • 20. How to Incorporate Quotes into Your Writing  commentary the response should end with you explaining or interpreting the significance of the evidence. One of these sentence starters may help:  This shows…  This demonstrates…  I believe…  Now I know…  This proves…  Closing statement reminds you that a constructed response requires multiple supporting details from the author.  In the text…  The text also states…  According to the passage…  A second example from the text…  The author also states…
  • 21. How to Incorporate Quotes into Your Writing  Think of it like a sandwich. Your own words are the bread. The top piece is the introduction and the bottom is the conclusion. The items in the middle are your quoted information. Each piece of quoted information MUST have an introduction and an explanation.
  • 22. How to Incorporate Quotes into Your Writing sandwich example!!  First, decide on the point you want to make. I want to prove that the residents of Maple Street are allowing fear to turn them into a mob.  Now, find a quote that illustrates your point. I am going to look at Les Goodman’s words when he is being threatened by his neighbors.  Next, introduce your quote. I will write:  As the residents of Maple Street turn on Les Goodman, he warns them that, “this thing you’re starting – that should frighten you” (77).  Finally, discuss your quote. My commentary might be:  Les Goodman makes clear that his neighbors are choosing a path that can only lead to chaos and the breakdown of their community. This point will later be echoed by the aliens.
  • 23. All together now… As the residents of Maple Street turn on Les Goodman, he warns them that, “this thing you’re starting – that should frighten you” (77). With these words, Goodman makes clear that his neighbors are choosing a path that can only lead to chaos and the breakdown of their community. This point will later be echoed by the aliens.
  • 24. Use Vivid Verbs to Introduce Quotes •Some alternatives to said or says… •All in the present tense describes assesses admits shows reports illustrates finds concedes sees complains notes predicts concurs thinks comments observes insists grants bemoans argues points out maintains laments condemns states relates suggests warns supposes speculates
  • 25. In conclusion… ASK YOURSELF What is the quote really saying? Does my quote support my idea? What do I need my readers to understand? Have I introduced the quote…the speaker and the occasion? Have I discussed the quote?
  • 26. Four W’s Exit Ticket What was the focus for today’s lesson? What is the definition for the answer to #1? What does it look like? Give two examples. Why do we use them?