Preliminary Task Feedback
Download as PPTX, PDF0 likes19 views
The document provides strengths and weaknesses for a practice advert. The strengths included an appropriate soundtrack, variety of camera shots, and range of mis-en-scene. Weaknesses were jump cuts that weren't always smooth, lack of showing different times of day, missing a concluding pack shot, inappropriate font, editing could be tighter, some low quality shots, and direct address to the camera was not suitable. The document concluded with lessons learned about editing, camera work, importance of planning, tight timelines, and improvements for future adverts.
1 of 4
Download to read offline
More Related Content
What's hot (20)
Ad
Similar to Preliminary Task Feedback (20)
Ad
More from Ellie Watson (6)
Recently uploaded (20)
Preliminary Task Feedback
- 1. Strengths and Weaknesses of Practice Advert
- 2. Strengths • The sound track chosen was appropriate to the story line and theme of the advert. • There was a large variety of camera shots. • There was a range of mis-en-scene These screen shots show the range of shot types with close up and then mid shot as well as the change of mis- en-scene between the classroom and the gym.
- 3. Weaknesses • The jump cuts aren’t always smooth. • There could have been more times of the day shown (maybe via a clock) to show the day passing. • No pack shot at the end of the advert. • Font used was not appropriate for the audience. • Editing could have been tighter • Not all shots were the best quality. • Direct address to the camera was not appropriate. This screen shot shows the direct address. This screen shot shows the inappropriate font.
- 4. What I have learnt… • How to edit. • How to work the camera. • That planning is essential. • That time and deadlines are very short. • What I need to do to produce a better advert.