The document provides an evaluation of Oliver Toone's rough edit of a music video. It discusses plans to improve the transitions between shots using video editing software. Additional scenes filmed of the characters putting up stickers and one character waking up surrounded by pills will be added. Effects may be applied to photographs taken during filming and inserted into the video. Unused footage of characters buying pills could be included if needed to fill out the length of the song. Shots may be zoomed, faded, split or rotated for the final edit.