Script group 1 redone
- 1. St. Andrew’s Catholic School Unit G324: Advanced Portfolio in Media Script Name of Production:- ‘The Wells’ Group Members: Hannah Hughes – Director Asuka Young - Director Chris Jacobs - Producer Esme Quantrill - Producer (Mum = Gloria, dad = Alex, girl = Holly)
- 2. Scene: Number 1 Character name: child (Holly) Shot type/Camera Angle: MLS, angle: eye-level, static. THEN: LS, angle: eye-level, tracking shot (after a cut). Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non- Diegetic Music* - ring a ring o’ roses. OR can be diegetic, by the child singing it? Diegetic Sound: swing noise Action: The child skipping forward with a cuddly toy End Scene: Number 2 Character name: child (Holly) & murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: POV shot of the gun to the child, close-up, pull focus, angle: eye-level. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non- Diegetic Music* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown): -coming in after the ring’ o roses faded out. Diegetic sound: Heavy Breathing of the murderer Action: Black clad man, hipshot of weapon POV. Focus shift from weapon to girl. Female character powerless to what the male character is doing to her. End Scene: Number 3 Character name: child (Holly) & Cuddly Toy Shot type/Camera Angle: Close-up, static, angle: eye-line/high angle.
- 3. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound: a thump on the ground as the doll falls. *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) Action: Girl drops toy to floor in slow motion, hits ground with thud. This is what the girl reacts like by dropping her toy its shows her being shocked, to see what she’s seen End *CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘PRIDE’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 4 Character name: child (Holly) & murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: High angle, Long Shot. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & sons (Broken Crown) Action: : bad guy looking down at the woman he’s just wounded, medium long shot to give perspective of what has just happened End *CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘HATE’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 5 Character name: Mum (Gloria) & Dad (Alex) Shot type/Camera Angle: In eye-level, a two in shot, (hand held?) Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & sons (Broken Crown), Gloria: “I don’t love you anymore!” Action: Mum screaming at Dad,
- 4. Dad listening furiously. Eye level/ over two in shot to express the tension and portrayal of emotions between the two characters. End CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘LUST’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 6 Character name: Mum (Gloria) Shot type/Camera Angle: OSS, Eye-level, Close-up to the mirror’s reflection Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) Action: Mum putting on red lipstick. Focus on reflection of mum putting lipstick expresses that she could be having an affair. End *CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘SLOTH’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 7 Character name: Dad (Alex) Shot type/Camera Angle: Long shot, high angle, pan, (slow zoom?) Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & sons (Broken Crown) Action: Dad giving up and falling down to floor. Full shot showing the reaction of the dad finding out his daughters been kidnapped End
- 5. *CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘GREED’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 8 Character name: Dad (Alex) Shot type/Camera Angle: OSS, High angle, zoom in on note. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) Action: Dad receives ransom note. Focusing on the dad getting the ransom note with OSS shot of male character End *CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘GLUTTONY’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 9 Character name: murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: Birds eye / high angle Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & sons (Broken Crown) Action: bad guy scoops money into arms. Focus on the money with an over the shoulder shot of the male character still hidden by hood End *CUT TO SCREEN WITH WORD ‘ENVY’ –CU (a sound effect?) + Mumford & sons soundtrack Scene: Number 10 Character name: Dad (Alex)
- 6. Shot type/Camera Angle: ECU of eyes reflecting to the mirror inside the car. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:*Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & sons (Broken Crown) Action: dad watching his wife go to the bad guy because she knows him. Focus on an eyeline match in the reflection of the car mirror End Scene: Number 11 Character name: Mum (Gloria) & murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: Establishing shot, low angle (This is just a small cut) Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* -Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) Action: Mum (Gloria) going into the murderer’s house (but never see his face)to let the audience know what the dad is looking at End Scene: Number 12 Character name: Dad (Alex) & Murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: Medium shot, eye-level. After a cut: close- up of dad’s reaction to the man without hoodie. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue:*Non-Diegetic Music:* - Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) AND/OR *diegetic sound effects of two men interacting? Action: Man grabbing another man. Dad getting bad guy. Unmask bad guy. Focusing on the pull off the hood of villain with over the shoulder shot exposing Dad’s reaction
- 7. End Scene: Number 13 Character name: Murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: A long shot, panning from left to right. Angle: eye-level – TO: medium shot from a low angle. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound effect of the swing swinging, *Non-Diegetic Music:* -Mumford & sons (Broken Crown) Action: Swing and man walking away Focus on the swing creepily slowly swinging with a medium shot from a low angle End Scene: Number 14 Character name: Murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: Medium long shot, panning from left to right centering the murderer Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: Diegetic sound effect of the wind, *Non-diegetic soundtrack faded away / ended* Action: Man sitting on ‘The Wells’ street sign, the bad guy disguising his image from public with hood using a medium long shot. End *A voice over*: “The Wells - brand new soap coming soon Thursday 8:30, only on BBC Two” .
- 8. Scene: Number: (between other scenes) Character name: Holly, Alex, Gloria, Murderer Shot type/Camera Angle: High angle with Over the shoulder shot, Medium Close-up. Voiceover/Non-Diegetic Music/Diegetic Dialogue: *Non-Diegetic Music:* -Mumford & Sons (Broken Crown) Action: Shots of the girl being pushed by other characters: Static, focusing on the hands that pushes. End