Submit peer review exercise # 4
- 1. Group F 1. The primary idea of the content in the articles is how to ban the use of cell phones in cars. In the articles, there are some ways to ban the use of cell phones. For example, to use a hands-free headset, to install an application on the cell phone that will restrict its use while driving, etc. 2. No, we don't. The articles don't represent the idea clearly. Because headings are not standing out from other sentences in the articles, we cannot understand what writer want to tell to readers. And it is difficult to find relation with step to step. These sections are independent from each section. 3. There are two types of details. First detail is about car accidents. For example, what will cause car accidents, what did they do who caused accidents, etc. Another detail is how to ban the use of cell phones in cars. There are some examples which is not danger to drive. 4. We cannot find the point that was confusing. 5. In the articles, it is good that there are many concrete proposal and example. These articles use concrete proposals and examples, which are not vagueness, but obvious. As a result, we can image various situations easily. To understand articles for reader, it is effective to use concrete proposal and example. 6. We cannot find any errors that need to be corrected. 7. First, we will improve five steps. We can understand each other, but, we cannot find relation among each steps. We will write relation in detail.
- 2. 8.