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Week 3
Answers
MPharmacy
  2012
Common errors


1.
a) Therefore, a study was commissioned
  on the xaffectx of low dietary intake of
  calcium.

b) Therefore, a study was commissioned
  on the effect of low dietary intake of
  calcium.


                                             2
Common errors

2.
a) There should be no significant risk to
  the health and safety of any individual
  when normal good laboratory
  xpractisex in handling chemicals is
  observed.

b) There should be no significant risk to
  the health and safety of any individual
  when normal good laboratory practice
  in handling chemicals is observed.

                                            3
Common errors

3.
a) The work of several researchers in
  New Zealand, including Danson (2005),
  Van Holpsen (2005) and Hewitt et al.
  (2006), has shown that statins reduce
  the activity of these molecules.

b) The work of several researchers in
  New Zealand, including Danson (2005),
  Van Holpsen (2005) and Hewitt et al.
  (2006), xhavex shown that statins
  reduce the activity of these molecules.
                                            4
Common errors

4.
a) Further investigation is usually needed
  to identify the specific location of the
  tumour, xsuch as a brain scanx.

b) Further investigation, such as a brain
  scan, is usually needed to identify the
  specific location of the tumour.


                                            5
Common errors

5.
a) Structurally, tooth enamel comprises
  xofx millions of enamel rods or prisms.

b) Structurally, tooth enamel is
  composed of millions of enamel rods or
  prisms.



                                            6
Common errors

6.
a) Each of the results xcorrespondx to a
   single cycle per patient.

b) Each of the results corresponds to a
  single cycle per patient.




                                           7
Using summaries and
paraphrasing in academic
writing
• to support own position on a
  current debate in community
  pharmacy
Role of community
pharmacists
• early detection and prevention of
  MOH, by monitoring self-
  medication of headache
• educating patients about the
  maximum intake frequency of
  acute treatments
Task 2
• Make summarising notes in your own
  words. Do not copy from the extracts.

• Make sure you record where each piece
  of information comes from, as you will
  have to reference any information you
  take from the extracts to support your
  arguments.

• Put (pjonline, 2012) if information comes
  from the first article, and (Mehuys et al.,
  2012) if it comes from the abstract.

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Week 3

  • 2. Common errors 1. a) Therefore, a study was commissioned on the xaffectx of low dietary intake of calcium. b) Therefore, a study was commissioned on the effect of low dietary intake of calcium. 2
  • 3. Common errors 2. a) There should be no significant risk to the health and safety of any individual when normal good laboratory xpractisex in handling chemicals is observed. b) There should be no significant risk to the health and safety of any individual when normal good laboratory practice in handling chemicals is observed. 3
  • 4. Common errors 3. a) The work of several researchers in New Zealand, including Danson (2005), Van Holpsen (2005) and Hewitt et al. (2006), has shown that statins reduce the activity of these molecules. b) The work of several researchers in New Zealand, including Danson (2005), Van Holpsen (2005) and Hewitt et al. (2006), xhavex shown that statins reduce the activity of these molecules. 4
  • 5. Common errors 4. a) Further investigation is usually needed to identify the specific location of the tumour, xsuch as a brain scanx. b) Further investigation, such as a brain scan, is usually needed to identify the specific location of the tumour. 5
  • 6. Common errors 5. a) Structurally, tooth enamel comprises xofx millions of enamel rods or prisms. b) Structurally, tooth enamel is composed of millions of enamel rods or prisms. 6
  • 7. Common errors 6. a) Each of the results xcorrespondx to a single cycle per patient. b) Each of the results corresponds to a single cycle per patient. 7
  • 8. Using summaries and paraphrasing in academic writing • to support own position on a current debate in community pharmacy
  • 9. Role of community pharmacists • early detection and prevention of MOH, by monitoring self- medication of headache • educating patients about the maximum intake frequency of acute treatments
  • 10. Task 2 • Make summarising notes in your own words. Do not copy from the extracts. • Make sure you record where each piece of information comes from, as you will have to reference any information you take from the extracts to support your arguments. • Put (pjonline, 2012) if information comes from the first article, and (Mehuys et al., 2012) if it comes from the abstract.