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            Online Journalism
                    Wayne MacPhail
                  wmacphail@gmail.com
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O ur   ve News
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          World
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Writing for
 Online
 Online
Overview
•   A History Lesson
•   Inverted Pyramid Revisited
•   MicroContent
•   What Eye Scans Teach Us
•   Writing for Navigation
•   Writing Links
A History Lesson
   Or, why you should
never draw a pig in clay.
From Oral to Written
Token Gestures
Early Egyptian Writing
Early Media
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Inverted Pyramid
   Most Important




    Least Important
Write Tight
Say what you want to say.
      Cut it in half.
    Cut it in half again.

         Write it.
   Cut it in half, twice.

   Write. Cut. Twice.
Microcontent

•   Heads
•   Subheads
•   Marginalia
•   Grabber Quotes
•   Captions
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Structure
Writing Microcontent
Heads and Blurbs
RSS Feeds on cellphones
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Week four   introduction to online writing copy
Writing for Twitter
  Active, concise, condensed
Writing for Twitter
  Active, concise, condensed
Writing for Twitter
    News, action, brand
I hate my Presto card. The tap on tap off
system is inconsistent, and I get constant
card errors. Plus, there are no Presto boxes
at some TTC stations. I’m going back to
using tickets.

Hate my Presto card. Tap on, tap off?
Sometimes. Card errors. No Presto boxes
in some TTC stations. Back to tickets.

Hate Presto card. Tap on, tap off? Really?
Card errors. Presto boxes in TTC stations?
Maybe. Tickets FTW.
Writing for Twitter
              140 Characters - Doing the math
Okay, I officially am in hate my
Presto card. Tap on, tap off, TTC
station with no interfaces, Card
                                        124 characters
errors. Back to tickets.

            +     @hamont               131
RT wmacphail - 10 characters             13 characters
RT wmacphail Okay, I officially am
in hate my Presto card. Tap on,
tap off, TTC station with no
interfaces, Card errors. Back to
tickets.
Questions?
Questions?
Wayne MacPhail
wmacphail@gmail.com
    wmacphail
    wmacphail
    wmacphail

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Editor's Notes

  • #13: 8,000 to 3,400 clay tokens
  • #14: 3,000 first dynasty
  • #15: 3000 B.C.
  • #17: Matthew Luke Mark in greek and aramaic
  • #21: Talmud. first written down in 500 A.D.
  • #24: 1163
  • #25: written 1831 written about 1482
  • #63: Contact me with any questions.