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1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document?
Ripping DVD from the disc onto a computer is convenient. That is the primary idea of the content in
the document. Then, we can use the video footage from the DVD in multiple computer programs. For
example, media player software to watch the video, video editor software to edit the video, and copy
software to create a duplicate of the movie.

2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments.
Yes, I do. The heading don't explain nothing but the necessity of ripping a DVD from the disc onto a
computer, and explain the necessity by concrete examples. The instructions in this document represent
how to use softwares step-by-step clearly. It is easy for us to understnad step-by-step operation more
than not step-by-step.
3. What details are included in the document?
First of all, this document explain about the necessity of ripping a DVD from the disc onto a computer.
Next, this document represents a case that we use the video footage. Next, this document represent the
software to do that. Media player, for example. Finally, this document explain how to duplicate the
movie.
4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it?
The heading and the instructions in this document are full of a character. But, there are not many
pictures on the heading and the instructions in this document. A enumeration of characters make our
comprehension to read a sentence difficult for us, and our brain confused, so we cannot understand
what to do next.
5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good?
First of all, the heading in this document represents the necessity of ripping a DVD from the disc onto
a computer clearly. Next, the heading don't explain nothing but the necessity, explain concrete
examples. Finally, the instructions in this document represent how to use softwares step-by-step
clearly. Factors in being easy to reading are these things.
6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected?
There are not many pictures on the heading and the instructions in this document, so the heading and
the instructions in this document should explain about ripping DVD and how to duplicate the movie
with some pictures about DVD and softwares. Also, the heading and the instructions in this document
should use more spaces.
7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make?
First, there are not many pictures on the heading and the instructions in this document, so the heading
and the instructions in this document should reresent about ripping DVD and how to duplicate the
movie with some pictures about DVD and softwares. Second, the heading and the instructions in this
document should use more spaces. Finally, characters should be more big.
8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how
this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
First of all, I will write about ripping DVD and how to duplicate the movie by some pictures about
DVD and softwares more this document. Second, I will insert more blanks to become easy to see.
Finally, if I will introduce softwares about DVD, I will write each homepage address besides a name of
each software.
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  • 1. 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the document? Ripping DVD from the disc onto a computer is convenient. That is the primary idea of the content in the document. Then, we can use the video footage from the DVD in multiple computer programs. For example, media player software to watch the video, video editor software to edit the video, and copy software to create a duplicate of the movie. 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. Yes, I do. The heading don't explain nothing but the necessity of ripping a DVD from the disc onto a computer, and explain the necessity by concrete examples. The instructions in this document represent how to use softwares step-by-step clearly. It is easy for us to understnad step-by-step operation more than not step-by-step. 3. What details are included in the document? First of all, this document explain about the necessity of ripping a DVD from the disc onto a computer. Next, this document represents a case that we use the video footage. Next, this document represent the software to do that. Media player, for example. Finally, this document explain how to duplicate the movie. 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? The heading and the instructions in this document are full of a character. But, there are not many pictures on the heading and the instructions in this document. A enumeration of characters make our comprehension to read a sentence difficult for us, and our brain confused, so we cannot understand what to do next. 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? First of all, the heading in this document represents the necessity of ripping a DVD from the disc onto a computer clearly. Next, the heading don't explain nothing but the necessity, explain concrete examples. Finally, the instructions in this document represent how to use softwares step-by-step clearly. Factors in being easy to reading are these things. 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? There are not many pictures on the heading and the instructions in this document, so the heading and the instructions in this document should explain about ripping DVD and how to duplicate the movie with some pictures about DVD and softwares. Also, the heading and the instructions in this document should use more spaces. 7. What specific suggestions for improving the document can you make? First, there are not many pictures on the heading and the instructions in this document, so the heading and the instructions in this document should reresent about ripping DVD and how to duplicate the movie with some pictures about DVD and softwares. Second, the heading and the instructions in this document should use more spaces. Finally, characters should be more big. 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). First of all, I will write about ripping DVD and how to duplicate the movie by some pictures about DVD and softwares more this document. Second, I will insert more blanks to become easy to see. Finally, if I will introduce softwares about DVD, I will write each homepage address besides a name of each software.