Dontrepeat

You’ve got my attention.
Please, don’t repeat yourself!
Austin, Texas, April 17-2004

Why am I going
to talk about text?
• “Content on the Web is still driven by text
narratives”.
» The State of the News Media 2004, an Annual
Report on American Journalism’, Project for
Excellence in Journalism, Columbia University
Graduate School of Journalism).
• “Text will remain the key component of
human-computer interaction…”.
» “Ideal Web design: No one knows what it looks
like”, Jay Small, 2002. American Press Institute.

Fundamental statement
• The bad use of print design resources to present
text on the Internet is negatively affecting usability of
many homepages, particularly those of newspapers,
thus making information delivery inefficient.
When I say print design resources I refer, in the
first place, to using the subhead, headline, summary
and decks -as they were designed for print
publications- along with texts that make use of the
inverted pyramid structure. Usability is a term that
refers to easiness and efficiency of use.

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• Subhead: THEY HAD TWO BOMB
LETTERS READY TO BE SENT
• Headline: ETA militants arrested in
France kept material to assemble 20
car bombs.

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• Lead or deck: Alleged ETA militants
arrested this morning in French area of
Cahors stored, in the facilities they had
rented, 448 kilos of sodium chlorate to
make chloratite plus different
substances with which they could have
prepared 20 car bombs. They also had
two bomb letters ready to make
attempts with, according to sources of
the antiterrorist forces.

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• Even though there are new elements,
the repetition of others is obvious:
– They had two car bombs ready
to be sent.
– The alleged terrorists had been
arrested in France.
– They could have prepared 20
car bombs.

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• Given the way information elements are
distributed throughout the subhead, the
headline and the lead within the
homepage, it is clear the editors of
elmundo.es presume users read word
by word and, in that order, each one of
those elements to eventually obtain an
overall picture of what the information is
about.

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• Subhead: THEY HAD TWO BOMB
LETTERS READY TO BE SENT
• Headline: ETA militants arrested in
France kept material to assemble 20
bomb cars

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• Lead or deck: Alleged ETA militants
arrested this morning in French area of
Cahors stored, in the facilities they had
rented, 448 kilos of sodium chlorate to
make chloratite plus different
substances with which they could have
prepared 20 bomb cars. They also had
two bomb letters ready to make
attempts with, according to sources of
the antiterrorist forces.con la
tecnología”.

Spanish Model:
Case 1. elmundo.es
• “…users tend not to read streams of text fully.
Instead, users scan text and pick out
keywords, sentences, and paragraphs of
interest while skipping over those parts of the
text they care less about. In a study by John
Morkes and myself, we found that 79 percent
of our test users always scanned any new
page they came across; only very few users
would read word-by-word –16 percent-.”
(Book: ‘Designing Web Usability’, Jakob
Nielsen).

Spanish Model:
Case 2, el pais.es

Spanish Model:
Case 2, el pais.es
• Subhead: POSTWAR IN IRAQ
• Headline: The Pentagon claims their soldiers killed
Couso in “self defense”.
• Lead or deck: The investigation carried out by the
Pentagon regarding the decease in Bagdad of
Spanish cameraman José Couso ended up in that
the tank which opened fire against Hotel Palestina,
where Couso was staying, did it in “self defense”. The
soldiers had reasons to believe they were being
attacked by snipers from the hotel.

Spanish Model:
Case 2, el pais.es
• In this case, the text following the
headline solves the lack of context
encountered in the headline.
– It would have been possible to
rewrite the headline to give it a
minimum indispensable amount of
context.

• washingtonpost.com manages the
concept of headline and deck in their
homepage better than anyone else. It
almost never repeats information, which
makes it very efficient.
More efficient homepages,
case 3: washingtonpost.com

• Headline: U.S. Military Requests
Additional Forces for Iraq
• Deck: Top officers express
disappointment with Iraqi security
forces; 2 U.S. soldiers, 7 contractors
missing.

• Problems with the
washingtonpost.com approach
– The editors presume the reader has
a minimum context to understand
the headlines. This is not always
true, especially when we think in
international readers. You can see
this by the use of last names in its
headlines.

• Let me remember one example of
elpais.es, that is writing in
washingtonpost.com’ style:
– Headline: The Pentagon claims
their soldiers killed Couso in
“self defense”.

• When the user reaches the inside page he
finds the text as if it were going to appear in
its printed form, bearing a different headline
and summary. Likewise, one finds streams of
text written with the inverted pyramid
structure (Also, linear blocks-of-text layouts,
no hyperlinks, no scannability –that may use
techniques breaking the text uniformity:
subtitles, lists, and so on).

• One finds streams of text written with
the inverted pyramid structure (Also,
linear blocks-of-text layouts, no
hyperlinks, no scannability –that may
use techniques breaking the text
uniformity: subtitles, lists, and so on).

• Headline: U.S. Military Seeks
Additional Forces for Iraq
• Deck: Commanders Disappointed With
Performance of Iraqi Forces; 2 U.S. Soldiers,
7 Contractors Missing After Convoy Attacked

• Text: BAGHDAD, April 12 -- Top U.S.
military commanders expressed
disappointment Monday with the performance
of Iraqi security forces in countering an
intensifying insurgency and said they were
requesting thousands of additional U.S.
forces to meet the threat.

• Obviously, in the inside page there is
also reiteration due to the utilization
of these print structures. But you can
think that problem is of minimum
importance if compared to the benefit of
having such an efficient homepage at
presenting information. Additionally, we
presume that when a user gets to this
level, he or she is ready to put up with
such reiteration.

• Headline: Former Dictator Amin Dies
• Deck: Idi Amin, who ruled Uganda for
much of the 1970s, died Saturday.

• Headline: Former Dictator Amin Dies
• Deck: Idi Amin, who ruled Uganda for
much of the 1970s, died Saturday.
Rewrite
• Headline: Former Dictator Idi Amin
Dies
• Deck: Ruled Uganda for much of the
1970s.

• Headline: Wireless Growth Impedes
Emergency Radio Signals
• Deck: The nation’s airwaves are so
crowded that wireless signals clog
frequencies used by police and firefighters

case 4: lanacion.com.ar

• By the amount of news it exhibits in the
first screen and for not repeating the
information in both headlines and
decks, lanacion.com.ar could be
categorized as very effective. However,
it has elements that still tie them to the
print way of presenting text, which
somewhat limits such lofty
effectiveness.

• lanacion.com.ar intensively uses
subheads in its homepage. It is
probably the most remarkable legacy of
the print design and allows us to deduct
that the editors of lanacion.com.ar
take for granted their users read each
news unit in their homepage word-by-
word. This is, and in that order, the
subhead, the headline and the deck.

• Another fact that reinforces this conclusion is
the sole referential or expository nature of
many of the subheads, which identify the
topics that will be dealt with.
– “The intellectuals and today’s country”.
– “24 hours to elections in Buenos Aires”.
– “In a world ranking”.
– “The pre-olympics”.
• To offer clarity, the opposite of a subhead that
acts as a simple reference is one that works
as a full unit of information or, in other words,
a sentence with full sense.

More efficient homepages, case
5: eltiempo.com, an experiment
• Eltiempo.com creates one sole version of each news, written
according to the principle of the inverted pyramid and typographically
differentiates the first sentence of the first paragraph, thus turning it
into the headline. If the news is properly written, according to the
inverted pyramid principle, the second sentence will never reiterate
information of the first one; it will only be a complement of it. In the
home page, this second sentence acts as a deck.

• In reality, this means eliminating the headline
and the deck or summary, as they are
conceived in printed media. Likewise, it
means that it repurposes the first and second
sentences in the first paragraph of the whole
article.

• The first sentence of the lead works as a headline:
– Colombia’s aggressive request package to U.S.
Secretary of Defense Ronald Rumsfeld
• Second sentence of the lead works in the home
page as deck:
– It consist of immediate satellite intelligence-related data
on the location of armed groups as well as training for
the soldiers in the jungle.

A hybrid or transition
model, case 6: nytimes.com
• Some months ago, its homepage
systematically repeated the information
contained in the headline and in the first
paragraph or deck. Now, there are coexisting
articles that repeat information, along with
others that don’t.

• Headline: U.S. Soldier and Iraqi Interpreter
Killed in Baghdad Attack.
• Deck: An American soldier and an Iraqi
interpreter were killed today, when vehicle hit
an explosive and came under fire.

• Headline 1: Head of New York Stock Exchange
Resigns
• Headline 2: Grasso Leaves After Furor Over Pay
• Deck: Richard A. Grasso resigned this evening
after three weeks of mounting criticism of his $140
million compensation package.

• Even though there are new elements, the
repetition of other ones are obvious. You can
read twice that he (Richard Grasso: Head of the
New York Stock Exchange) resigned. Also, you
can read twice the reaction that there was
“mounting criticism of his $140 million
compensation package” or “furor over pay”.

model, case 6:
nytimes.com

Some advices to create
more friendly inner pages
• “You can make text short without sacrificing depth of content
by splitting the information into multiple nodes connected by
hypertext links. Each page can be brief and yet the full
hyperspace can contain much more information than would
be feasible in a printed article. Long and detailed background
information can be relegated to secondary pages”

• “Hypertext should not be used to
segment a long linear story into multiples
pages… Proper hypertext structure is not
a single flow ‘continued on page 2’;

• Instead, split the information into
coherent chunks that each focus on a
certain topic. The guiding principle should
be to allow readers to select those topics
they care about and only download those
pages”. (Jakob Nielsen).

Why does this happen?
• In the first decade of its existence the World
Wide Web has been used primarily as a new
content distribution channel.
» ‘Five elements of the storytelling’, Nora Paul and
Christina Fiebich.
• “As the newspaper industry redirects its content to the Web, the print
resources to present content that made the paper model effective are
killing the usability of the Web model and limiting the potential of online
journalism”.
» ‘Tradition Kills Usability’, Dan Willis, American Press Institute.

How big is the text
problem?
• “(…) Internet journalism is still largely a
medium made up of second-hand material,
usually from the old media”.
• “A larger percentage of lead pieces, 42
percent, were stories posted without any
editing and produced by other sources,
particularly The Associated Press and
Reuters”.
» “‘The State of the News Media 2004, an Annual
Report on American Journalism’, Project for
Excellence in Journalism, Columbia University
Graduate School of Journalism).

The challenge
• We have to create new ways to present text
online.

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