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“10 Tips for Writing
  Better Emails”
  Adrienne Bartlett, Client Concierge
Is email dead?
Nope.
But it has changed.
Reasons
 Content
Mom & Dad
Social technologies
 like text messaging
relegated to friends.
“Remember,
  you’re not
their friend.”
        -Karlyn Morissette
Not a catch-all
   solution
“Glue”
Less Search
More Yield?
“Top 10”
1
Know your role.
When to use
  email?
Event invites/reminders
    Confirmations
        Surveys
     Notifications
   Process Updates
Promote new
(valuable) content
   on your site
2
Get to the point.
Throw
Shakespeare
  out the
  window.
Skip the intro
Keep it short
 Say it once
No blocks of text
 Design to skim
Bold key words?
Exercise:
What’s the point
 of this email?
Make that your
 1st sentence.
“You’re invited to
attend our Open House
   on October 24th.”
Mind the
scroll line.
Which
words can
you delete?
3
Make the call.
Call to
action?!
Set it off
 Bold
  Link
Center?
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4
Inform your subjects.
Descriptive
  Clever
“Hook and label”
 Key words first
    A/B test
No spammy words
    DON’T SCREAM
Don’t repeat school name
 Don’t merge first name
“Don’t Miss Out”
 “Last Chance”
“We’re Waiting”
“Check this out”
“Open House Invitation”
     “Chat with us today”
     “Missing transcript”
“Take our campus visit survey”
5
Don’t trust the media;)
Prospects
(especially parents)
 often have images
      disabled.
Proceed as if the
 images aren’t
   rendering.
Does the message
still make sense?
Is it readable?
How to do
 video...
“Video Message from Brian Niles”
6
Easy on the html.
Too much html :
Screams“marketing”
         +
 Hurts deliverability
K.I.S.S.
(keep it simple stupid)
Keep the focus on
the call to action
We’re past the
point of “html for
  its own sake”
How we doin’
  so far?
7
Test. Test. Test.
Links
Multiple Browsers
   A/B Split
 Subject Lines
The best way to
    determine
frequency & timing
Know your audience.
8
No magic day or time.
Have a plan.
Date         Message                 Audience
5/21 1st Email                          All
5/27   Plain-text followup    Did not view/interact
6/9   2nd Email                         All
6/16 Plain-text followup      Did not view/interact
6/16   Link and Instructions       Registrants
6/19   “Day-of reminder”           Registrants
6/22 Link to video and slides      Registrants
The followup
should be part of
    the plan.
Flexibility
How much is
too much?
What stage?
 WIIFM?
9
Court the ‘rents.
Grad Schools:
  Listen Up!
Are you
collecting
  email
addresses?
Inquiry Cards
    Application
Campus Visits/Events
      Website
Lots for “current”
Why not prospect?
http://www.scu.edu/family/parent-email.cfm
Parent Content:
Address Cost   Process
Personalize Notifications
10
Segment and personalize.
One size does NOT fit all
Increase # of
 campaigns, but
decrease their size
Consider Plans For:
        Parents
  Guidance Counselors
        “Local”
Alums (for Grad Schools)
Another Plan to Consider:


YIELD
Bonus tips:
(Link to)
 stories
Be a tease.
Use the
 “P.S.”
Feedback &
Measurement
Focus on testing --
They can’t argue
  with results.
It’s all about
building trust.
The future...
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You can bet
we’ll be there;)
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What will you
do differently?
Thanks!
bartlett@targetx.com
  targetxconcierge

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