As 11 fixed draft 5 new part 2.
- 1. RAHEL
- 2. SHOTLIST K Time Scene Shot Description Location Character Art Dept/ Prop Costume Notes 1-9 Laura walking Establishing shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue to her house house Ealing Laura Props- Face jeans/pink top, coat paint, Shopping bags and black shoes holding bags 10 Laura opening Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue the door hand Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat Shopping bags and black shoes 11 Seeing her Over the shoulder shot Costumes- Wig Light blue opening the of her opening the Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat Shopping bags and black shoes door door 12 She walks in Long shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue coming in Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat Shopping bags and black shoes 14 She takes her Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue shoes off. shoes Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat Shopping bags and black shoes 16 She walks to the Long-shot of her walking to Costumes- Wig Light blue cupaboard the cupboard Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat Shopping bags and black shoes 18 She takes the Long mid- shot of her taking Costumes- Wig Light blue book out of the the book out . Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat bag. Shopping bags and black shoes 19-23 She see’s a note A close-up shot of the note Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat Shopping bags and black shoes
- 3. Time Scene Shot SHOTLIST Location Character Art Dept/ Costume K Note Description Prop s 24 She looks all Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat confused face Shopping bags and black shoes 25 She gets A extreme-close up Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat scared shot her face Shopping bags and black shoes 26 She drops A close-up shot of Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat the book on the book Shopping bags and black shoes the floor he 27-29 She walks to A long shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat the walking to the Shopping bags and black shoes cupboard cupboard 30 She is Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat looking face in fear Shopping bags and black shoes scared 31 She is about ¾ shot of her about Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat to open the to open the Shopping bags and black shoes cupboard cupboard 32-33 Her holding Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat the door holding the door Shopping bags and black shoes handle handle 34-35 She looks Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat relieved face Shopping bags and black shoes
- 4. Time Scene Shot Location Character Art Dept/ Costume K Note Description Prop s 36-37 She looks at Over the shoulder Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat herself in shot of her looking Shopping bags and black shoes the mirror in the mirror 38 She does Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat her hair face Shopping bags and black shoes 39 Still doing her Over the shoulder shot Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat hair of her looking in the Shopping bags and black shoes mirror 40-42 She see’s Over the shoulder Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat two people shot of her looking Shopping bags and black shoes behind her in the mirror 43 She gets Extreme-close up of Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat frightened her face Shopping bags and black shoes 44-45 she hides Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat underneath underneath the Shopping bags and black shoes the sheets sheet 46-47 she is Extreme-close up of Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat scared and her face Shopping bags and black shoes worried 48 She gets Close-up shot of Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat shocked face Shopping bags and black shoes
- 5. Time Scene Shot Location Character Art Dept/ Costume K Note Description Prop s 49 You see these Close-up shot of Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat two people their faces Shopping bags and black shoes again 50-52 They run to Full shot of them Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat the running to the Shopping bags and black shoes cupboard cupboard 53 The Close-up shot of the Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat cupboard is cupboard Shopping bags and black shoes closed Laura looks Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue 44-45 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top ,coat scared face Shopping bags and black shoes 46 -47 Full shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue She then Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat gets up getting up Shopping bags and black shoes 48-52 She walks to Close-up of her legs Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat the walking Shopping bags and black shoes cupboard She walks to Long shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue 53-54 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat the walking to the Shopping bags and black shoes cupboard cupboard She look Close-up of her face Costumes- Wig Light blue 55-56 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat scared Shopping bags and black shoes
- 6. SHOTLIST K Time Scene Shot Location Character Art Dept/ Costume Note Description Prop s 57 The door Full shot of the Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat opens by cupboard Shopping bags and black shoes itself 58 She is Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat terrified face Shopping bags and black shoes She sees' a Mid-shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue 59-60 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat noted and picking up a note Shopping bags and black shoes goes inside to pick it up The door Close-up shot of her Costumes- Wig Light blue 61 Ealing Laura Props- Face paint, jeans/pink top, coat closes and face and the two Shopping bags and black shoes shuts her in people behind her.
- 7. Kaya Enigma - How did they do it? L Insidious opening sequence Mysterious observer They show a point of view of someone walking around the house at night with a shadowed hint on the window Mysterious/scary reflection They show a refection of the female making the audience want to know who she is and why she is there at night watching over people Credits and shots During the credits they show shots of things for example the inside of the house making the audience watch more in why these are significant and the titles because they portray ghost like things making the audience want to see more about ghosts
- 8. Kaya Enigma L How are we creating enigma in our opening sequences… • By not telling the audience why these girls are haunting this room so their audience will want to find out more • The audience will want to watch more to see what relevance the dolls have to this closet/house and why they’re always coming back • At the ending of the opening sequence we build a climax to a sudden shock/scare getting the audience excited to watch more • Finally to see what happens to Laura in the closet and further of how the ghosts disturb her
- 9. Kaya Enigma L How have we improved from draft 1?... • Since draft one we have improved greatly on how we can create enigma. • We have gone through many ideas and various genres to create a very creative and versatile mind to what excited and interests our target audince • By creating a questionnaire for our target audience to see what they find interesting and what they don’t • Researching type of films and themes or concept grabs the audiences attention to watch more • Watching many different genre of films opening sequences to understand what makes enigma and realising what does not
- 10. Sanel Target Audience M Age – 15 – 17 Gender – Female and Male Ethnicity – British Location – United Kingdom Interests/Hobbies – local groups, precious memories Lifestyle – Social, attends college/school, quite open minded Why would our target audience be interested in our idea/plot? • Its based on real life, in London, so it will be familiar with the audience • Our target audience will be interested to learn about how spirits can play with our mind throughout the film and interested of being scared. • The film is based in modern time and youth culture, use of slang in a closed narrative so they can connect and relate to what they see in the film and leave thinking about the consequences
- 11. Sanel Target Audience M Why would our target audience be interested in our film because of its form? • The use of editing in building up tension will interest the target audience, they may find interesting when something is about to occur. • The use of suspension type music will keep the audience at the edge of their seat imagining themselves in certain situations Why would your target audience be interested in your film because of genre/conventions? • The target audience would be interested in how different spirits can act and play with your mind so hopefully it would be interest them. • The thrill of watching it would constantly keep the target audience interested at the edge of their seats • The target audience could hopefully relate to the character while being interested imaging themselves in them kind of situations
- 12. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Zoe
- 13. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Sinead
- 14. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Xheni
- 15. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Sayana
- 16. Sanel and Kaya Slide not improved M Feedback we received from our target audience Susan
- 17. Sanel and Kaya M Feedback we received from our target audience Marcin
- 18. Summary of what our target audience said M Overall most of them do enjoy watching thriller films as they like the thought of being scared. Also they find it interesting to see what the spirits will do next to the character in while film. Also none of our audience thought that our opening sequence was complicated and they liked our theme concept. However some said that would like us to film in the dark.
- 19. Kaya Characters N How have you developed your characters since draft 1? • We developed our character to be less dark and a lot more relatable to a wider range of our target audience • We made the character one age rather than a variety so its less confusing • The clown and doll have been developed into a spiritual characters who rather than look like the dolls to 2 girls with a doll and clown toys.
- 20. Kaya Characters N Actor 1: Character 1: Sanel Homer Laura Hibbitt Age: Age: 17 19
- 21. Kaya Characters N Costume and props Mascara Blush Ghost book Blue jeans Pink top
- 22. Slide not improved Kaya Characters N Mise –en-scene Name – Laura Hibbit Gender – Female Age – 19 Costume –jeans, top Props – None Make-up – Mascara, tired eyes, blush Stereotype – Normal smart girl, average Facial expression – Scared, shock Body language – Gentle, awkward Representation – Typical teenage youth. A smart girl who’s abit popular around her area
- 23. Kaya Characters N Actor 2: Character 2: Gia Alveranga Cilia Elizabeth Carter Age: Age: 17 73
- 24. Kaya Characters N Inspirational pictures Maids dress Pale white face with black circles around eyes
- 25. Kaya Characters N Costume and props £3.19 £1.99 - White Maid dress
- 26. Kaya Characters N Mise –en-scene Name – Cilia Elizabeth Carter Gender – Female Age – 73 Costume – White dress Props – None Make-up – Pale black eyes Stereotype – Little girl Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face Representation – A dead woman from the 1800’s
- 27. Kaya Characters N Actor 3: Character 3: Mary Elizabeth Carter Rahel Fasil Age: Age: 16 52
- 28. Kaya Characters N Inspirational pictures Maids dress Pale white face with black circles around eyes
- 29. Kaya Characters N Costume and props Maids dress £3.19 £1.99 - White
- 30. Kaya Characters N Mise –en-scene Name – Mary Elizabeth Carter Gender – Female Age – 52 Costume – White dress Props – None Make-up – Pale black eyes Stereotype – Little girl Facial expression – face doesn't move much, giggling Body language – Very, very, fast body movement, straight face Representation – A dead woman from the 1800’s
- 31. Kaya Location O
- 32. Kaya O What is this location? This is where the whole opening sequence will be filmed Is it always accessible? This location is always accessible as its one of the group members home and will always be open for filming Health and safely. • Getting to bus to the house • Road safety when crossing roads • Walking to the house • Getting run over • Bus crash