This article provides a critique of the paper "Connectivism and Dimensions of Individual Experience" by Carmen Tschofen and Jenny Mackness. It summarizes the key themes of connectivism explored in their paper, such as autonomy, connectedness, diversity and openness. It also discusses some of the tensions identified between these connectivist ideals and the realities of individual experience in MOOCs. However, the critique finds the original paper difficult to understand for those unfamiliar with MOOCs and connectivism concepts due to its use of jargon and limited research scope.