Draft 1 assignment

The document provides feedback on a draft music video. It notes that the costume, style, and performances were strong. However, it suggests using more locations, more planned dance variety, minor costume or prop changes, improved editing, and eliminating continuity errors. The response document outlines plans to address this feedback by incorporating more camera techniques, effects, and visual elements common to the genre, making minor costume adjustments, planning distinct dances for each song, finding alternative quieter filming locations, and addressing continuity issues and repetitive elements in the editing.