Draft 3 part 1
- 2. HOW TO IMPROVE? • Don’t have too much on EBI research - too basic • Organise power points • Detail structure for all - storyboard is really episodes not done • Storyboard needs to be detailed - incomplete sides What we have done www to our idea? - re4search shows good knowledge • Our idea now focuses on topic clearly • We have subtopics • Well structured • Clear examples
- 6. Draft 1 • Our first draft was really basic • We had no clear topic in the 5 minutes • we didn’t have structure for whole topic • Very generalized
- 7. Draft 2 for draft two we had basic topic structure It was very detailed Some slides was clear and others too much Sometimes there was too much writing on slides We need to separate it in order to make it clear No subtopic
- 8. Draft 3 the ideas were clearer Subtopics were there Subtopics linked well with episodes Would better if we had its more structures and specific E.g. - music video- we should have specific genre
- 9. Draft 4 – current draft • More Precise • Subtopics link to topic • Structure is well organised • Clear topics • Examples to prove e.g.- music