Cover Drafts feedback 2
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This draft feedback discusses a design submission for a Little White Lies magazine cover. The feedback praises the design for being unique and not using obvious fire imagery like other submissions. It fits well as a LWL cover and the white stars and cold color scheme tie in nicely with the LWL logo. The use of constellations is seen as a clever way to include more film imagery and make the design look detailed. However, one submission is strongly rejected for being too obvious and simple by only focusing on the fire in the title without much development potential.
Cover Drafts feedback 2
- 1. Draft Feedback 2 Very strong and different. It doesnʼt use the obvious fire imagery and so really stands out as unique. It fits in very well as a Little White Lies cover, stylish and a bit different. The white stars and cold colour scheme would also tie in with the LWL logo to make it look nicely designed. The constellations are a clever way to include more imagery from the film and really makes the design look detailed and intricate. A strong rejection on this one. Itʼs too obvious and simple, only playing off the “fire” in the title. It has not a lot of scope to develop it.