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The document appears to be a collection of student writing samples with errors that were corrected by Ian James in 2009. Each sample is presented along with the number of errors and the corrected version. The writing covers various topics such as parents' desires for their children's education, travel experiences, music preferences of friends, housing and parking issues, and weekend plans.

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Ian James 2009 / 00 Error Correction 3 Ian James
Most parents want that their childrens go to the university. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 01
Most parents want that their childrens go to the university. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Most parents want their children to go to university . Ian James 2009 / 01
The travel was really funny. We enjoyed a lot. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 02
The travel was really funny. We enjoyed a lot. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 The trip / holiday was really (good) fun . We enjoyed ourselves a lot. Ian James 2009 / 02
My friend likes listen the same music than me. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 03
My friend likes listen the same music than me. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 My friend likes listening to the same music as me. Ian James 2009 / 03
The new house of my sister is very nice, but she has a lot of problems to park. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 04
The new house of my sister is very nice, but she has a lot of problems to park. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 My sister ’s new house is very nice, but she has a lot of problems parking . Ian James 2009 / 04
We stayed in a hotel near of the beach during two weeks. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 05
We stayed in a hotel near of the beach during two weeks. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 We stayed in a hotel near the beach for two weeks. Ian James 2009 / 05
Bill passed four days sightseeing in Barcelona before going to visit another cities. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 06
Bill passed four days sightseeing in Barcelona before going to visit another cities. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Bill spent four days sightseeing in Barcelona before going to visit other cities. Ian James 2009 / 06
I’m interested to know what is the problem’s cause. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 07
I’m interested to know what is the problem’s cause. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 I’m interested in knowing what the cause of the problem is . Ian James 2009 / 07
Tomorrow night, I’ll see a film named Llareggub with one friend of me. 4 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 08
Tomorrow night, I’ll see a film named Llareggub with one friend of me. 4 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Tomorrow night, I’ m going to see a film called Llareggub with a friend of mine . Ian James 2009 / 08
I don’t have nothing special to do this weekend. It’s probable I’ll stay at home. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 09
I don’t have nothing special to do this weekend. It’s probable I’ll stay at home. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 I don’t have anything special to do this weekend. I’ ll probably stay at home. Ian James 2009 / 09
The young man said me that he was searching a part-time work in a shop of books. 4 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 10
The young man said me that he was searching a part-time work in a shop of books. 4 mistake Ian James 2009 / 01 The young man told me that he was looking for a part-time job in a book shop . Ian James 2009 / 10

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Error Correction 3

  • 1. Ian James 2009 / 00 Error Correction 3 Ian James
  • 2. Most parents want that their childrens go to the university. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 3. Most parents want that their childrens go to the university. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Most parents want their children to go to university . Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 4. The travel was really funny. We enjoyed a lot. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 02
  • 5. The travel was really funny. We enjoyed a lot. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 The trip / holiday was really (good) fun . We enjoyed ourselves a lot. Ian James 2009 / 02
  • 6. My friend likes listen the same music than me. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 03
  • 7. My friend likes listen the same music than me. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 My friend likes listening to the same music as me. Ian James 2009 / 03
  • 8. The new house of my sister is very nice, but she has a lot of problems to park. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 04
  • 9. The new house of my sister is very nice, but she has a lot of problems to park. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 My sister ’s new house is very nice, but she has a lot of problems parking . Ian James 2009 / 04
  • 10. We stayed in a hotel near of the beach during two weeks. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 05
  • 11. We stayed in a hotel near of the beach during two weeks. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 We stayed in a hotel near the beach for two weeks. Ian James 2009 / 05
  • 12. Bill passed four days sightseeing in Barcelona before going to visit another cities. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 06
  • 13. Bill passed four days sightseeing in Barcelona before going to visit another cities. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Bill spent four days sightseeing in Barcelona before going to visit other cities. Ian James 2009 / 06
  • 14. I’m interested to know what is the problem’s cause. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 07
  • 15. I’m interested to know what is the problem’s cause. 3 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 I’m interested in knowing what the cause of the problem is . Ian James 2009 / 07
  • 16. Tomorrow night, I’ll see a film named Llareggub with one friend of me. 4 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 08
  • 17. Tomorrow night, I’ll see a film named Llareggub with one friend of me. 4 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Tomorrow night, I’ m going to see a film called Llareggub with a friend of mine . Ian James 2009 / 08
  • 18. I don’t have nothing special to do this weekend. It’s probable I’ll stay at home. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 09
  • 19. I don’t have nothing special to do this weekend. It’s probable I’ll stay at home. 2 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 I don’t have anything special to do this weekend. I’ ll probably stay at home. Ian James 2009 / 09
  • 20. The young man said me that he was searching a part-time work in a shop of books. 4 mistakes Ian James 2009 / 01 Ian James 2009 / 10
  • 21. The young man said me that he was searching a part-time work in a shop of books. 4 mistake Ian James 2009 / 01 The young man told me that he was looking for a part-time job in a book shop . Ian James 2009 / 10