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     Ian James




                     Ian James 2009 / 00
2 mistakes

I’m writting to apply the post of
executive director in your
company.




                                    Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

I’m writting to apply the post of
executive director in your company


I’m writing to apply for the post of
executive director in your
company.

                                   Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

In my opinion is very important to
have car these days.




                                 Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

In my opinion is very important to
have car these days.


In my opinion it is very important
to have car these days.


                                     Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

Most of doctors agree that eat fruit
is very important if you want to
stay healthy.




                                   Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

Most of doctors agree that eat fruit
is very important if you want to
stay healthy.


Most doctors agree that eating fruit
is very important if you want to
stay healthy.
                                   Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

My brother has a friends that they
own a house in Menorca.




                                     Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

My brother has a friends that they
own a house in Menorca.


My brother has (some) friends
that own a house in Menorca.


                                     Ian James 2009 / 01
3 mistakes

My parents are thinking to sell your
house because it’s too much big for
them.




                                  Ian James 2009 / 01
3 mistakes

My parents are thinking to sell your
house because it’s too much big for
them.


My parents are thinking about
selling their house because it’s too
big for them.
                                   Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

In this moment, I’m working like a
secretary in a textile company.




                                 Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

In this moment, I’m working like a
secretary in a textile company.


At the/this moment, I’m working as
a secretary in a textile company.


                                 Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

We decided stay at home despite it
was a beautiful sunny day.




                                 Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

We decided stay at home despite it
was a beautiful sunny day.


We decided to stay at home
although it was a beautiful sunny
day. (OR despite the fact that ...)

                                      Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

I knew Bob in Madrid about ten
years ago. I like visit him as often
as I can.




                                       Ian James 2009 / 01
2 mistakes

I knew Bob in Madrid about ten
years ago. I like visit him as often
as I can.


I met Bob in Madrid about ten
years ago. I like visiting him as
often as I can.
                                       Ian James 2009 / 01
1 mistake

He visited our company for to try
and sell us his products.




                                    Ian James 2009 / 01
1 mistake

He visited our company for to try
and sell us his products.


He visited our company (in order)
to try and sell us his products.


                                    Ian James 2009 / 01
3 mistakes

My hobbies include read, play the
guitar and collect stamps.




                                    Ian James 2009 / 01
3 mistakes

My hobbies include read, play the
guitar and collect stamps.


My hobbies include reading,
playing the guitar and collecting
stamps.

                                    Ian James 2009 / 01
1 mistake

He ran this morning along the river
slowly.




                                  Ian James 2009 / 01
1 mistake

He ran this morning along the river
slowly.


He ran slowly along the river this
morning.


                                     Ian James 2009 / 01

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Errorcorrection1

  • 1. Error Correction 1 Ian James Ian James 2009 / 00
  • 2. 2 mistakes I’m writting to apply the post of executive director in your company. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 3. 2 mistakes I’m writting to apply the post of executive director in your company I’m writing to apply for the post of executive director in your company. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 4. 2 mistakes In my opinion is very important to have car these days. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 5. 2 mistakes In my opinion is very important to have car these days. In my opinion it is very important to have car these days. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 6. 2 mistakes Most of doctors agree that eat fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 7. 2 mistakes Most of doctors agree that eat fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy. Most doctors agree that eating fruit is very important if you want to stay healthy. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 8. 2 mistakes My brother has a friends that they own a house in Menorca. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 9. 2 mistakes My brother has a friends that they own a house in Menorca. My brother has (some) friends that own a house in Menorca. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 10. 3 mistakes My parents are thinking to sell your house because it’s too much big for them. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 11. 3 mistakes My parents are thinking to sell your house because it’s too much big for them. My parents are thinking about selling their house because it’s too big for them. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 12. 2 mistakes In this moment, I’m working like a secretary in a textile company. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 13. 2 mistakes In this moment, I’m working like a secretary in a textile company. At the/this moment, I’m working as a secretary in a textile company. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 14. 2 mistakes We decided stay at home despite it was a beautiful sunny day. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 15. 2 mistakes We decided stay at home despite it was a beautiful sunny day. We decided to stay at home although it was a beautiful sunny day. (OR despite the fact that ...) Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 16. 2 mistakes I knew Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visit him as often as I can. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 17. 2 mistakes I knew Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visit him as often as I can. I met Bob in Madrid about ten years ago. I like visiting him as often as I can. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 18. 1 mistake He visited our company for to try and sell us his products. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 19. 1 mistake He visited our company for to try and sell us his products. He visited our company (in order) to try and sell us his products. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 20. 3 mistakes My hobbies include read, play the guitar and collect stamps. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 21. 3 mistakes My hobbies include read, play the guitar and collect stamps. My hobbies include reading, playing the guitar and collecting stamps. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 22. 1 mistake He ran this morning along the river slowly. Ian James 2009 / 01
  • 23. 1 mistake He ran this morning along the river slowly. He ran slowly along the river this morning. Ian James 2009 / 01