Error correction 3ºe4 nov17
- 1. Correct the errors contained in the sentences below: They contain of 67% Sports enthusiasts and 33% couch potatoes whom want to change their lifestyle ______________________________________________________________________ We are making a survey in order to improve our new product ______________________________________________________________________ How often do you eat healthy in a week ______________________________________________________________________ In the end we asked them to give us a small feedback to our concept. It was predominant positive like ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Every stakeholder is able to have an overview of attendances ______________________________________________________________________ In fact, we wanted to compare both of teachers and student's opinion about how disturbing do they find attendance lists ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Would they welcome the digital improvement for attendance list to answer to our hypothesis that it consists a loss of time and the disturbing step of class proceedings ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ If it is conclusive, in a mind of growth we will diffuse the idea of Uniscan to other university or/and school of Madrid next year ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Price is also a disadvantage, following the fact that is uncomfortable to wear them and their practicality ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ More than 70% would like to find the brand in normal stores there is even though a chance the idea can be sold on the Internet or our own stores ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ With this, we create a library of video games to which any subscriber can access from his television and/or computer ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ However we also intended to create a new "gamer" culture prompting with our modest price to consumers of less usual video games. Consumers will no longer have to move from home to get their favorite games, Downstream takes you straight home. ______________________________________________________________________
- 2. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ In one hand we want to know how big the market is, so to have an average of potential players, on the other hand we want to know about their habits and if they use similar platforms... ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Another important point in our strategy was to know the price per month for Downstream. We also asked for the money people spent per year in video games in order to put a similar or lower price. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ If the person answers "no" he was done with the survey ______________________________________________________________________ Another important point in our strategy was to know the price per month for Downstream. We also asked for the money people spent per year in video games in order to put a similar or lower price ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 76.3 answered that they will be able to pay 10 euros per month, very similar price to Netflix, so we can tell that having Netflix as a reference when creating this app, people directly relate the price to the Netflix one ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ This confusion matches with the fact that 70% of the respondents consider sweet pizzas to be more suited for desserts. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ There are two types of consumers, the students that share their knowledge by uploading their notes and by getting profits of it, and the students that download these notes and get to understand what they didn't know just by paying a low amount of money ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Being ourselves students helps us to understand better their needs
- 3. ______________________________________________________________________ We will distribute flyers on front of schools, libraries, subway and other places where students spend free times and work. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ In order to do this we have to know how much time does our average target person spends on social media and in what kind of social media platform ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Actually they all like to have money. Moreover when you earn it thanks to your knowledge ______________________________________________________________________ This option will give us information about how and to who we should focus our app ______________________________________________________________________