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- 1. Indeed, as this will be my third internship in my career, I am greatly motivated... Indeed, as this will be my third internship in my studies, I am greatly motivated... These skills include my strong commitment to the planning and organization of tasks as well as possessing the necessary people skills needed to form strong working relationships. These skills include my strong commitment to the planning and organization of tasks as well as the people skills needed to form strong working relationships. It is from experiences such as these which gives me the confidence and belief to succeed in this role. It is from experiences such as these that I draw the confidence and belief to succeed in this role. I worked as part of a successful team which collaborated in a number of successful investment projects... I worked as part of a dynamic team which carried out a number of successful investment projects... I would greatly appreciate if you could inform me of any further stages in the recruitment process. I would greatly appreciate it if you could inform me of any further stages in the recruitment process.
- 2. Now I would like to go a bit deeper in my understanding and develop my technical skills with an internship in a relevant and prestigious company as yours Now I would like to delve deeper into this field and develop my technical skills through an internship in a relevant and prestigious company such as yours. This double degree program enhances intercultural experience while working and studying in two different countries and languages, thus gaining relevant skills to thrive in the current globalised world of business. This double degree program enhances exposure to interculturalism through international job experiences and studies in two different countries and languages, which in turn helped me gain relevant skills to thrive in the current globalised world of business. I conducted researches to profile multinationals (oil, mining, chemical) impact on environment and to assess (through a rating) its compliance with legal requirements. I conducted / carried out research to profile energy- related multinationals’ impact on the environment and to rate its compliance with legal requirements I am a self- starter and active person who can’t stand inactivity I am a self- starter and an active person who cannot stand inactivity
- 3. I am poised in networking and teamworks I am versed in networking and teamwork Looking forward to acquire all the necessary skills to become de project chief of web marketing I am available to start working for your company in the end of June which coincide with the period requested. Looking forward to acquiring all the necessary skills to become the web marketing project manager, I am available to start working for your company at the end of June which coincides with the period requested. Throughout my practical experiences I learned how to manage with different projects with diplomacy and precision in order to answer all of my client's demands and needs in a complete autonomy. I had my own clients, and had to recommend them in all marketing strategies to adopt. Throughout my practical job experiences, I learned how to handle different projects with diplomacy and precision in order to answer all of my clients’ demands and needs autonomously. I had my own clients, and had to advise them as to which marketing strategies to adopt. I'm actually studying in Madrid but would welcome the opportunity... I am currently / presently studying in Madrid but would welcome the opportunity...
- 4. Having always considered to work in the sports industry and especially skiing and surfing, your worldwide known company would be the best to put in practice my skills in... Since working in the sports industry and especially skiing and surfing has always been my goal, your world famous company would be the best to put in practice my skills in... I have strong managing experience in my prior position in this area and I have extensive skill in communication as I worked with clients for a long period I have strong managing experience gained in my prior position in this area and I have extensive skills in communication as I worked with clients for a long period of time