The other one
By
Mona Bostaji
FADE IN:
SHEIKH ZAYED ROAD PHONEBOX
MARIANNE and JINA try opening the door of
the phone box on a rainy day.
Romantic/sad song playing in the background.
MARIANNE- holding the door I need to call
him now
JINA- I don’t know if he will answer after
what happened.
Marianne insists on opening the door and
pulls it harder.
MARIANNE- (closes the door behind her and
whips off her tears)
Hello?
Music comes on and the audience don’t know
whether “he” answered or not
JINA- did he answer? What does he think we
should do now?
MARIANNE- let’s just shop so I forgot about
him, I don’t want to think about it today
JINA- okay girly lets just shop till we drop
MARIANNE- or what daddy says till my credit
card stops swiping
JINA- hahaha I love it!
MARIANNE- so where should we head to first?
JINA- Harvey?
MARIANNE- of course Harvey Nichols is always
the first option.
As they shop they see a man that looks like
the guy Marianne was talking to
JINA- oh my god! Is that Charlie? How did he
find us? I bet you told him we were coming
here so we could so just happen to bump into
him at the shopping mall.
MARIANNE- obviously not! Where is he I cant
see him?
JINA- come on mary don’t lie to me
MARIANNE- Jina I would never just look at
the way I look right now. Do you honestly
think I would want to see him after that
conversation I had with him?
JINA- I still don’t get what happened so you
better explain yourself over some coffee and
macaroons at lauderee after this
Marianne and Jina both try hiding behind the
rackets of clothes just in case the guy
see’s them
JINA- oh god, its not even him get out of
there.
MARIANNE- didn’t I tell you, now come on
lets get out of here their isn’t anything
that suits use here anyways.

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First draft script

  • 1. The other one By Mona Bostaji FADE IN: SHEIKH ZAYED ROAD PHONEBOX MARIANNE and JINA try opening the door of the phone box on a rainy day. Romantic/sad song playing in the background. MARIANNE- holding the door I need to call him now JINA- I don’t know if he will answer after what happened. Marianne insists on opening the door and pulls it harder. MARIANNE- (closes the door behind her and whips off her tears) Hello? Music comes on and the audience don’t know whether “he” answered or not JINA- did he answer? What does he think we should do now?
  • 2. MARIANNE- let’s just shop so I forgot about him, I don’t want to think about it today JINA- okay girly lets just shop till we drop MARIANNE- or what daddy says till my credit card stops swiping JINA- hahaha I love it! MARIANNE- so where should we head to first? JINA- Harvey? MARIANNE- of course Harvey Nichols is always the first option. As they shop they see a man that looks like the guy Marianne was talking to JINA- oh my god! Is that Charlie? How did he find us? I bet you told him we were coming here so we could so just happen to bump into him at the shopping mall. MARIANNE- obviously not! Where is he I cant see him? JINA- come on mary don’t lie to me MARIANNE- Jina I would never just look at the way I look right now. Do you honestly think I would want to see him after that conversation I had with him?
  • 3. JINA- I still don’t get what happened so you better explain yourself over some coffee and macaroons at lauderee after this Marianne and Jina both try hiding behind the rackets of clothes just in case the guy see’s them JINA- oh god, its not even him get out of there. MARIANNE- didn’t I tell you, now come on lets get out of here their isn’t anything that suits use here anyways.