2. Success Criteria
I can identify
language techniques.
I can describe the
effect of language
techniques.
3. Definition: A metaphor is when you compare
two things by saying one thing is another.
Effect: You will use a metaphor when you want
the reader to draw similarities to something so
that they can relate to it.
Example:
“He walked around like a warden, guarding us
in the classroom as we took our tests.”
What does this mean?
The teacher is compared to a prison warden,
making us relate the experience of tests to
being trapped.
Metaphor
4. Simile
Definition: A simile is when you compare
two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’.
Effect: You will use a simile when you want
the reader to relate to the concept you are
comparing it with.
Example:
“The grief washed over me like constant
waves crashing against a cliff.”
What does this mean?
The individual’s grief is being explained as
waves to suggest that it comes in and out.
5. Hyperbole
Definition: A hyperbole is an exaggeration.
Effect: You will use this when you want the
audience to relate to how ridiculous or
extreme something is.
Example:
“I was so hungry that I could’ve eaten a
horse.”
What does this mean?
This exaggerates the intense hunger the
individual feels as horses are next to
impossible for someone to eat alone.
6. Personification
Definition: This is when you give human
attributes to non-living things.
Effect: This helps us to imagine how the
subject matter performs.
Example:
“The pen wrote tirelessly, running around
the page, trying to read the finish line.”
What does this mean?
This highlights the speed and endless
amount of writing that is happening.
7. Imagery
Definition: Imagery is when you use
descriptive language to create an image in
the reader’s head.
Effect: This is used to help the reader
imagine what is happening.
Example:
“The luscious green fields were filled with
vivid flowers blooming for the first time. The
hypnotising scent filled my lungs as I imagine
lying amongst the beauty.”
What does this mean?
This highlights the natural beauty of spring.
9. Compare the descriptions
I waited at the empty train station. It
felt a little lonely and scary to be all
alone for the first time. To ease my
nerves, I took a deep breath and
thought about what I would eat for
lunch.
I waited at the eerily quiet train station.
Not a single soul passed and the
longer I stood there, I felt the platform
expand until I was just a tiny ant
standing all alone. I felt my hands
sweat, growing tiny puddles in my
palms as I tried to imagine the
tantilising scent of freshly baked bread
that was waiting for me at lunch.
10. Language techniques enhance the descriptions you try to create.
They add spice and more ways for the reader to relate to the
information and imagine it! This will help to transport them to the new
worlds in your writing and also make your work sound more
interesting.
This does not mean that every sentence needs to have a language
technique. Think about it, when you have too much of the same thing,
you get sick of it. The same concept applies here, you should have
enough to make your work sound amazing but not too much where it
is hard to read and understand.
What do we learn?
12. Which one is better?
Read the following examples and decide which one shows a greater depth of love.
My Mum loved me.
I could feel the branches of my mum’s
efforts extend over me, creating a
canopy that always protected me.
13. Whilst both of the quotes showcase
love for their mum, the second quote
uses a metaphor to highlight how much
effort and protection has been provided
to make the individual feel a deep sense
of connection and love.
Both examples mean the same thing but
just by using a language technique, you
can show more emotion and depth in
your writing.
What do we learn?