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Feedback:
What went well:
- Colour scheme
- Fonts
- Photos
- Structure
- The circles are good
Even better if:
You should play with different fonts, to separate title from pages.
- Make the writing at the bottom more clear.
- Put the picture at the bottom in a circle.
What I done:
I changed the font for the writing at the bottom, and I also put the picture at the
bottom in a circle, and changed the image.
Contents page after feedback:
Here I changed the
image.
Here I put the picture
in a circle, and used
the same effect, to
make the picture
fade out into the
background.
Here I changed the
font for the text at
the bottom.
Here I changed the
positioning for the
text at the bottom,
to use up some of
the excess space.

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  • 2. Feedback: What went well: - Colour scheme - Fonts - Photos - Structure - The circles are good Even better if: You should play with different fonts, to separate title from pages. - Make the writing at the bottom more clear. - Put the picture at the bottom in a circle. What I done: I changed the font for the writing at the bottom, and I also put the picture at the bottom in a circle, and changed the image.
  • 3. Contents page after feedback: Here I changed the image. Here I put the picture in a circle, and used the same effect, to make the picture fade out into the background. Here I changed the font for the text at the bottom. Here I changed the positioning for the text at the bottom, to use up some of the excess space.