Progress so far feedback
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This document provides feedback on a trailer for a film project. The feedback notes that the trailer showed appealing psychological elements of the protagonist but that it lacked a soundtrack and some scenes were not edited correctly. The feedback identifies negatives such as scenes being too long or slow and one scene following the next without flow. Suggested improvements include better editing of scenes, adding transitions, captions and a soundtrack to provide more flow. Overall, the content was appealing but needed work in the areas of editing and sound to be a fully conventional trailer.
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Progress so far feedback
- 1. “PROGRESS SO FAR” FEEDBACK: By Josh Davey
- 2. I have now shown multiple members of the target audience my progress so far, which is almost a rough-cut, it’s just lacking a soundtrack and some scenes are not in place correctly.
- 3. Feedback (Positives) • It’s appealing as it features multiple conventions within it • It’s a conventional trailer, just lacking some important elements • Psychological elements were present – which depicts the protagonist’s mental state well
- 4. Feedback (Negatives) • It appears to be one scene places after the next • It’s slow in places • Some scenes are long and bore the viewer slightly • Editing needs improving • Distorted audio from wind
- 5. Improvements • Improve the editing of scenes • Make it so it’s not just one scene played after the previous • Add more flow to it with less uninteresting build up • Include conventional soundtrack • Add in transitions, more captions, film information and release information
- 6. Overall Overall, the content was found very appealing by the target audience, but it is lacking certain elements that keep it from being fully conventional, mainly being within two of the four technical areas, Editing and Sound. This has given me ideas on how to improve my production as I advance into the first draft.