“I’LL GET WHAT I WANT”
By
Daisy Irwin
Parsonage Barn Lane
Ringwood BH24 1SE
irwind.student@ringwood.hants.sch.uk
2
FADE IN:
SCENE 1: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), DAY TIME
The scene starts in location 1, with LAUREN walking round
her bedroom listening to music while on her phone.
SCENE 2: EXT, BRAD’S HOUSE (LOCATION 2), DAY TIME
It then cuts to location 2, with BRAD walking into his
house with Boxes, he’s moving into his new house today.
SCENE 3: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), DAY TIME
It then cuts back to LAUREN in location 1, where she is now
laid on her bed on the phone to her best friend RUBY,
giggling and playing with her hair.
SCENE 4: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), DAY TIME
It then cuts back to BRAD who is now in his bedroom waking
around sorting the boxes. He then sits down on his bed,
picks up his phone to check if he has any messages from
anyone. He realizes he doesn’t have any messages, sighs.
SCENE 5: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME
It then cuts back to LAUREN who is still on her phone,
hours later, and has loads of messages from boys. She is
opening the snapchats and replying to them all.
SCENE 6: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME
Cuts back to BRAD who is sat up on his bed with only his
bedside light on now. He is starring at his phone which has
no new messages. He puts his phone back and flops his head
onto his pillow to go to sleep.
SCENE 7: INT, SCHOOL HALLWAY (LOCATION 4), DAY TIME
It’s now the next day and LAUREN is stood in the school
hallway leaning up against the lockers talking to her best
friend RUBY.
LAUREN
OMG! I was talking to Tom again last night
and we spoke for like ten minutes straight
before he read me off.
3
RUBY
What happened to Luke, I thought you were
getting with him, weren’t you meant to
have seen him on Saturday?
LAUREN
Oh Luke was so last week, I saw him on
Saturday, got what I wanted and tossed him
just like the rest.
RUBY
Ahh, so Tom’s your next target?
LAUREN
Target?! You say that like it’s a bad
thing?
LAUREN leans into RUBY and can’t believe that she is
accusing her.
RUBY
Well I mean, don’t you think you should
just find a guy and stick with him rather
than being a dick and messing them around.
LAUREN
Well I mean I don’t just….
As LAUREN is speaking to RUBY she pauses mid-sentence as
she realizes a guy who she’s never seen before. She stares
at him as he walks past.
RUBY
OMG! That must be the new guy everyone was
talking about. I’ve heard he’s meant to be
so awkward.
LAUREN
Well, we’ll see about that.
4
SCENE 8: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME
Lauren is sat on her bed trying to find BRAD on Instagram
so she can message him.
LAUREN reads the message out loud as she writes it.
LAUREN
“Hey! Noticed you today, just wondered if
you noticed me too, winky face emoji”.
SCENE 9: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME
BRAD sees the message pop up on his phone. He gasps and
does a double take of his phone, he’s not used to girls
messaging him. He looks down wants more and reads out the
message.
BRAD
“Hey! Noticed you today, just wondered if
you noticed me too, winky face emoji”.
BRAD looks up with a confused, awkward expression and
starts thinking about what he’s going to reply
“Ummm hey, yeah weren’t you the one in the
corridor”
SCENE 10: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME
Lauren looks down at her phone and is in shock that BRAD
actually noticed her.
LAUREN
OMG! He must have seen me talking to Ruby!
LAUREN looks down at her phone again and thinks about what
to reply.
LAUREN
“Meet me tomorrow after school?”
5
SCENE 11: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME
BRAD sits and thinks about what to say, he’s heard bad
things about LAUREN but she seems harmless enough to him.
BRAD
“Yeah alright, where”
SCENE 12: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME
LAUREN
“By the benches?”
SCENE 13: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME
BRAD sits and thinks about what to say, he’s heard bad
things about LAUREN but she seems harmless enough to him.
BRAD
“Sounds good”
SCENE 14: EXT, SCHOOL, BENCHES (LOCATION 5), DAY TIME
LAUREN
Scene description
FADE OUT:
THE END

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Script draft 1

  • 1. “I’LL GET WHAT I WANT” By Daisy Irwin Parsonage Barn Lane Ringwood BH24 1SE irwind.student@ringwood.hants.sch.uk
  • 2. 2 FADE IN: SCENE 1: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), DAY TIME The scene starts in location 1, with LAUREN walking round her bedroom listening to music while on her phone. SCENE 2: EXT, BRAD’S HOUSE (LOCATION 2), DAY TIME It then cuts to location 2, with BRAD walking into his house with Boxes, he’s moving into his new house today. SCENE 3: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), DAY TIME It then cuts back to LAUREN in location 1, where she is now laid on her bed on the phone to her best friend RUBY, giggling and playing with her hair. SCENE 4: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), DAY TIME It then cuts back to BRAD who is now in his bedroom waking around sorting the boxes. He then sits down on his bed, picks up his phone to check if he has any messages from anyone. He realizes he doesn’t have any messages, sighs. SCENE 5: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME It then cuts back to LAUREN who is still on her phone, hours later, and has loads of messages from boys. She is opening the snapchats and replying to them all. SCENE 6: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME Cuts back to BRAD who is sat up on his bed with only his bedside light on now. He is starring at his phone which has no new messages. He puts his phone back and flops his head onto his pillow to go to sleep. SCENE 7: INT, SCHOOL HALLWAY (LOCATION 4), DAY TIME It’s now the next day and LAUREN is stood in the school hallway leaning up against the lockers talking to her best friend RUBY. LAUREN OMG! I was talking to Tom again last night and we spoke for like ten minutes straight before he read me off.
  • 3. 3 RUBY What happened to Luke, I thought you were getting with him, weren’t you meant to have seen him on Saturday? LAUREN Oh Luke was so last week, I saw him on Saturday, got what I wanted and tossed him just like the rest. RUBY Ahh, so Tom’s your next target? LAUREN Target?! You say that like it’s a bad thing? LAUREN leans into RUBY and can’t believe that she is accusing her. RUBY Well I mean, don’t you think you should just find a guy and stick with him rather than being a dick and messing them around. LAUREN Well I mean I don’t just…. As LAUREN is speaking to RUBY she pauses mid-sentence as she realizes a guy who she’s never seen before. She stares at him as he walks past. RUBY OMG! That must be the new guy everyone was talking about. I’ve heard he’s meant to be so awkward. LAUREN Well, we’ll see about that.
  • 4. 4 SCENE 8: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME Lauren is sat on her bed trying to find BRAD on Instagram so she can message him. LAUREN reads the message out loud as she writes it. LAUREN “Hey! Noticed you today, just wondered if you noticed me too, winky face emoji”. SCENE 9: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME BRAD sees the message pop up on his phone. He gasps and does a double take of his phone, he’s not used to girls messaging him. He looks down wants more and reads out the message. BRAD “Hey! Noticed you today, just wondered if you noticed me too, winky face emoji”. BRAD looks up with a confused, awkward expression and starts thinking about what he’s going to reply “Ummm hey, yeah weren’t you the one in the corridor” SCENE 10: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME Lauren looks down at her phone and is in shock that BRAD actually noticed her. LAUREN OMG! He must have seen me talking to Ruby! LAUREN looks down at her phone again and thinks about what to reply. LAUREN “Meet me tomorrow after school?”
  • 5. 5 SCENE 11: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME BRAD sits and thinks about what to say, he’s heard bad things about LAUREN but she seems harmless enough to him. BRAD “Yeah alright, where” SCENE 12: INT, LAUREN’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 1), NIGHT TIME LAUREN “By the benches?” SCENE 13: INT, BRAD’S BEDROOM (LOCATION 3), NIGHT TIME BRAD sits and thinks about what to say, he’s heard bad things about LAUREN but she seems harmless enough to him. BRAD “Sounds good” SCENE 14: EXT, SCHOOL, BENCHES (LOCATION 5), DAY TIME LAUREN Scene description FADE OUT: THE END