The feedback received on the first question was positive overall. The narrative and characters were well developed and felt realistic. However, the first act was busier than the rest of the film. Improving the other two acts to make them more developed and detailed could help address this. Changing the overall theme to focus on forced marriages was suggested, but the story is meant to be about LGBT issues and family issues in the 1980s. The character Miko could be linked to a book more prominently.
Feedback on the second question was also positive. The PowerPoint presentation was well done and neatly organized. The sizzle reel helped clearly convey the story and important issues around same-sex love and societal reactions. The target