3
Most read
4
Most read
7
Most read
Year 9
Home Learning Project
Dystopian Fiction
Name:................................
Year Group:......................
Teacher:...........................
Due Date:..........................
Levels 5-7
Home Learning Project
Year 9
Dystopian Fiction
Name:
Class:
Digital Studies Teacher:
Teacher’s Comment (WWW):
Level for writing:
To improve (EBI):
Level for reading:
The Hunger Games
This home learning project is about exploring dystopian fiction using comparisons
to real-life situations in the world today.
Start looking in newspapers, on the internet or watch the news to find out
information about conflicts around the world
How to complete this booklet
You should complete each activity in order to build up your skills and knowledge.
Altogether the assignments should take about six hours to complete.
If you do not have access to a computer at home, remember you can use the
homework club at JHNCC, the library in your breaks or the Digital Studies rooms
if they are available.
Remember, you must always ask your teacher and your parents if you need
help or want something to be explained differently.
Read the following article taken from: 20 mins
http://www.faze.ca/issue06/child_soldiers.html
More than 300,000 child soldiers are fighting in armed conflicts in more than thirty countries
worldwide.
According to one group commander in the Democratic Republic of Congo, "[children] make good
fighters because they're young and want to show off. They think it's all a game, so they're
fearless."
A large number come from disrupted family backgrounds, economically or socially deprived
families or are children who come from conflict zones themselves.
Widely perceived to be a cheap and expendable
commodity, child soldiers tend to receive little
or no training before being thrust into the
front line. In the early 1980s, during the Iran-
Iraq war, thousands of Iranian children, many
straight from school, were sent with popular
militias to the frontline, often given a symbolic
key to the paradise promised them as martyrs.
Most prevalent are child soldiers in Africa and
Asia, but across the globe it is a growing
phenomenon. One of the reasons behind its
growth is the shortage of male recruits in
countries at war. And with the technological development of smaller more lightweight weapons
children are able to load, carry and fire deadly arms.
One former child soldier from Burundi stated that, "My first role was to carry a torch for
grown-up rebels. Later I was shown how to use hand grenades. Barely within a month or so, I
was carrying an AK-47 rifle or even a G3."
Once recruited, the children are often treated brutally and punishments for mistakes or
desertion are severe.
Not all child soldiers are forced to kill, yet the horrors they suffer will continue to haunt them
for the rest of their lives. One Peruvian woman recruited by The Shining Path at the age of 11
recalls, "They beat all the people there, old and young, they killed them all, nearly 10 people...
like dogs they killed them... I didn't kill anyone, but I saw them killing... the children who were
with them killed too... with weapons... they made us drink the blood of people…"
Besides the risk of death or injury in combat, child soldiers suffer disproportionately from the
rigours of military life. Younger children collapse under heavy loads, malnutrition, respiratory
and skin infections and other ailments are frequent.
Reading Skills: Key Word Definitions Task
Key Word Definition Synonyms
(similar
words)
Can you use it in a
sentence?
Dystopia
Utopia
Shortage
Deprivation
Expendable
Punished
Tribute
District
Death
Propaganda
1) Using a dictionary, research the meaning of
the key words for this topic.
40 mins
Reading Skills: Understanding the writer’s viewpoint and language choices.
(AF5 and AF6)
How did the article make you feel? Use your emotions to describe what you have
read. Pick one piece of information from the text to help explain your answer.
Find three sentences (or parts of sentences) in the text you have read that
describe the backgrounds of the children who become child soldiers.
Backgrounds = what the children’s lives were like before they became soldiers.
1.
2.
3.
Look at the image. Describe what you see.
Use adjectives, similes (comparisons using like or as) and onomatopoeia (words
that imitate sounds) to aid your description.
2) Now you have read the online article, answer
the questions in the boxes provided.
KEY WORDS to use to help you: fighting, cheap,
shortage, commodity, expendable, punished,
illness, malnutrition, death.
40 mins
How do these three things make the reader feel? Can you explain why?
1. There are over 300,000 child soldiers in the world.
2. Children’s lives are seen as cheap and expendable,
3. Girls are recruited as soldiers and have to fight as well.
How does this relate to what you already know about The Hunger Games?
Digital Literacy
3) Research the following website and answer the
following questions. Answer in full sentences.
1 hour
Go to:
http://www.historyonthenet.com/Romans/gladiators.htm
1. Who fought at the colosseum?
2. What type of people were gladiators?
3. What type of weapons were the gladiators allowed to use?
4. What else would you find in the arena?
5. Who did gladiators fight?
6. How did the fights end?
Using this website and additional websites find out five unusual facts about
gladiatorial combat. Record them here.
•
•
•
•
•
4) Read the introduction to becoming a Tribute in The
Hunger Games on the following page. Continue the story
as if you are the Tribute whose life is about to change.
Before you write it you must plan and include the
following:
• Your feelings – what do you hear, see, smell?
• How do you feel – scared, honoured, unsure?
• How are you treated – good, bad?
• Are you fed and given water?
• Are you handcuffed or tied up?
• Do you go on a long journey away from your family?
30 mins
Notes
5) 1 hour
You're lying in your bed and slowly drift off to sleep. Effie Trinket puts her hand into ther
glass bowl and pulls out a name.
‘And the female/male Tribute from John Henry Newman District is...’
You hear your name called out. You are filled with emotion. You know you are going to have to
fight for survival. You have become a Tribute.
Your answer must be no less than 500 words and must include adjectives, simple,
complex and compound sentences. It should also use punctuation for effect. For
example, exclamation marks to show feeling, horror etc.
When you have planned your answer it needs to written up digitally using the
computer. You need to use Word for this exercise and ensure your grammar,
punctuation and spelling is checked. REMEMBER: if a red dotted line appears
under the text, then it is incorrect and needs changing.
Use this space for any additional planning.
Year 9 Hunger Games Home Learning Project
Digital Studies: AF1 (Planning, Developing and Evaluating) Level Ladder
Level Success Criteria
5 You can demonstrate that you can:
 Use a range of ICT tools and techniques to organise
solutions to a problem
 Judge how successful your work has been in
achieving your goal, and identify ways in which you
could improve it
 Identify the advantages and disadvantages of using
ICT both inside and outside school
6 You can demonstrate that you can:
 Plan and develop ways to solve problems using
different ICT tools and techniques efficiently
 Use success criteria and feedback to improve the
effectiveness of your solution
 Explore the impacts of the use of ICT in work,
leisure and home
7 You can demonstrate that you can:
 Design and plan an ICT-based system by:
 Selecting which information is relevant to your
query, and ensuring that it is useful and efficient
 devising and applying success criteria to ensure a
quality solution, refining work as it progresses
 identifying the advantages and limitations of the
system
 Identify the impact of ICT on people, communities
and cultures
Digital Literacy: Developing
What to include:
1. Title of the movie.
2. Dystopian Images
3. Blurb – a summary of the film
Once you’re happy with your HLP, complete the self-assessment below. After
you’ve done it, you might want a parent or adult to have a look – they may think
you’ve done better than you think you have or inspire you to redraft.
6) Now you have completed your extended piece
of writing, produce a DVD cover for a new
Dystopian movie.
1 hour
Self-Assessment: How have I done?
Give yourself a tick if you think you’ve shown the following writing. If you’ve tried
– but aren’t sure you’ve mastered it – put a question mark in the box and if you
haven’t done it put a cross.
Have I… √? X
Used commas and full stops accurately
Used speech marks and colons and semi-colons
Used varied and interesting words to describe
Developed ideas
Used simple and compound sentences
Used complex sentences
Used connectives, such as meanwhile, although,
Used paragraphs which link together
Given a clear view point
Used my imagination
Used words which suit my audience
Spelt the most commonly used words correctly
Spelt most words correctly, including more unusual choices
Used colour and pictures to appeal to my reader
WRITING Pupil name _____________________________ English Class ________________ Date
AF6 – write accurately, using correct
sentences and punctuation
AF3 – organise and present texts
effectively
AF2 – Produce texts suitable for your purpose and
audience
Level 7 • I write with a variety of sentence
types which I can use judiciously
across the text to achieve my purpose
and overall effect, with rare loss of
control.
• I use a range of features to
shape/craft sentences that have
individual merit and contribute to the
overall development of the text.
• My writing uses information, ideas and events
which are skilfully managed and shaped to
achieve my intended purpose and effect, e.g.
development of character, plot, event, or
sides of an argument, are paced across the
text.
• I also use a variety of devices to position the
reader.
• I can make imaginative and generally successful
adaptations of a wide range of forms and conventions
to suit a variety of purposes and audiences.
• I write with a well judged, distinctive individual voice
and point of view which is established and sustained
throughout my writing.
• I can vary the level of formality and choose to use
other stylistic devices within my writing for effect.
Level 6 • My sentences use the full range of
punctuation and are consistently
accurate.
• There is variety in my sentence
structure with only occasional errors
in ambitious structures, e.g. only
occasional comma splices, some use of
semi-colons, not always accurate.
• My writing is clearly controlled and
sequenced, taking account of the reader’s
likely reaction, e.g. differing length
paragraphs, use of flashback in narrative,
anticipating reader’s questions.
• I use a range of features to clearly signal the
overall direction of the text for the reader.
• My writing is imaginative and I am familiar with
different writing conventions, which I try to use.
• I can establish a point of view and try to sustain it
throughout.
• I try to change my formality and use stylistic devices
to suit my audience and purpose, for example I can
use literary devices as easily as I can use
conversational style.
Level 5 • You use a full range of punctuation
correctly most of the time
• You use punctuation within sentences
correctly and structure your
sentences carefully
• Your ideas are structured clearly
• Your closing paragraph refers back to your
opening paragraph
• You link your paragraphs clearly
• You clearly write to inform, explain and describe,
using appropriate devices
• You use the right style and keep your reader
interested
Look at the writing grid above. Tick what you think you have done really well. What level do you think you have achieved for your child soldier piece of
writing?
My level is _________________________________________________________________________________________________.
I need to improve on _________________________________________________________________________________________
STAR

More Related Content

PPTX
Kepler-452b.pptx
PPTX
Evolution std 12th neet
PPTX
Chapter 6 Ecology: Preserve the Animal Kingdom
PPTX
Animalia kingdom modified
DOCX
Skellig reading assessment
DOCX
MA Assignment 1
DOC
Y8 Home Learning Project: Project Africa - levels 5-7
ODP
Presentació definitiu
Kepler-452b.pptx
Evolution std 12th neet
Chapter 6 Ecology: Preserve the Animal Kingdom
Animalia kingdom modified
Skellig reading assessment
MA Assignment 1
Y8 Home Learning Project: Project Africa - levels 5-7
Presentació definitiu

Viewers also liked (19)

PPT
Lesson 4 shakespeares language
DOC
ODP
Presentació v8 sònia
PPTX
Warwick rp 2
DOC
Macbeth Medium Term Plan - KS4
DOCX
Top 100 teen books
PPTX
Assessment for learning at jhncc
DOC
Subject knowledge audit 2
PPTX
Approaching the iGCSE Core Paper
PPT
Alfabetização luiza
PDF
The Risks, Benefits and Media Portrayal of Fad Dieting
DOC
Subject knowledge audit 3
PPTX
20140923 sapa ewc
PPTX
How to Generate Revenue with your Ecommerce Store?
DOC
English target criteria_(reading)
PPTX
Examples of starters
PPTX
Beowulf 27th march
PDF
How to Generate Revenue with your Ecommerce Store
ODP
Presentació
Lesson 4 shakespeares language
Presentació v8 sònia
Warwick rp 2
Macbeth Medium Term Plan - KS4
Top 100 teen books
Assessment for learning at jhncc
Subject knowledge audit 2
Approaching the iGCSE Core Paper
Alfabetização luiza
The Risks, Benefits and Media Portrayal of Fad Dieting
Subject knowledge audit 3
20140923 sapa ewc
How to Generate Revenue with your Ecommerce Store?
English target criteria_(reading)
Examples of starters
Beowulf 27th march
How to Generate Revenue with your Ecommerce Store
Presentació
Ad

Similar to Year 9 Hunger Games Home Learning Project (20)

DOCX
Y8 hlp project africa - levels 5-7
DOC
Hunger Games Home Learning Project
DOCX
Y8 hlp project africa - levels 4-6
DOCX
Y8 hlp project africa - levels 3-5
PDF
CRITICAL THINKING SKILLS.pdf
DOCX
PPTX
Story academic vocabulary
PPTX
Hunger Games PPT
PPTX
MARCH ,2025 COT Empowerment Technology Quarter 4.pptx
PPTX
ME Eng 7 Q1 0603_PS_Sentences.pptx
PPTX
Module 4-grade-10
PDF
Learming module english
PDF
English 8 Learning Module.pdf
PDF
English MODULE GRADE 8
PDF
Module 5 what if ok
PDF
Lit Circles: Rebooted for CCSS and the 4Cs
PPTX
Hackensack strat
PPT
NCV 2 Language Hands-On Support Slide Show - Module 4
PDF
Teach Learn
PDF
Teach Learn: EnglishCentral
Y8 hlp project africa - levels 5-7
Hunger Games Home Learning Project
Y8 hlp project africa - levels 4-6
Y8 hlp project africa - levels 3-5
CRITICAL THINKING SKILLS.pdf
Story academic vocabulary
Hunger Games PPT
MARCH ,2025 COT Empowerment Technology Quarter 4.pptx
ME Eng 7 Q1 0603_PS_Sentences.pptx
Module 4-grade-10
Learming module english
English 8 Learning Module.pdf
English MODULE GRADE 8
Module 5 what if ok
Lit Circles: Rebooted for CCSS and the 4Cs
Hackensack strat
NCV 2 Language Hands-On Support Slide Show - Module 4
Teach Learn
Teach Learn: EnglishCentral
Ad

More from julier3846 (17)

DOCX
E-safety cover lesson
DOC
English target criteria_(writing)
PPTX
Classroom rules
DOC
Shakespeare insults dictionary
DOC
Shakespeare wordsearch
DOC
Subject knowledge audit 1
DOC
Lesson plan 13th february pti
DOCX
Masters Assignment 2
DOC
Ma1 a4 plan
DOCX
Whitsun homework
PPTX
Transition from KS3 to KS4
DOC
The implications of current theories of cognitive development in terms of the...
DOC
Reflective Practice 3
PPT
Shakespeare insults
PPTX
The Hunger Games - Context
PPTX
The Hunger Games - Context
DOC
Year 7 Digital Studies Gothic SOW
E-safety cover lesson
English target criteria_(writing)
Classroom rules
Shakespeare insults dictionary
Shakespeare wordsearch
Subject knowledge audit 1
Lesson plan 13th february pti
Masters Assignment 2
Ma1 a4 plan
Whitsun homework
Transition from KS3 to KS4
The implications of current theories of cognitive development in terms of the...
Reflective Practice 3
Shakespeare insults
The Hunger Games - Context
The Hunger Games - Context
Year 7 Digital Studies Gothic SOW

Recently uploaded (20)

PPTX
Share_Module_2_Power_conflict_and_negotiation.pptx
PDF
Skin Care and Cosmetic Ingredients Dictionary ( PDFDrive ).pdf
PDF
Hazard Identification & Risk Assessment .pdf
PDF
MBA _Common_ 2nd year Syllabus _2021-22_.pdf
PDF
LIFE & LIVING TRILOGY - PART - (2) THE PURPOSE OF LIFE.pdf
PPTX
A powerpoint presentation on the Revised K-10 Science Shaping Paper
PDF
CISA (Certified Information Systems Auditor) Domain-Wise Summary.pdf
PDF
Environmental Education MCQ BD2EE - Share Source.pdf
PDF
BP 704 T. NOVEL DRUG DELIVERY SYSTEMS (UNIT 2).pdf
PDF
Uderstanding digital marketing and marketing stratergie for engaging the digi...
PPTX
Introduction to pro and eukaryotes and differences.pptx
PDF
FORM 1 BIOLOGY MIND MAPS and their schemes
PDF
English Textual Question & Ans (12th Class).pdf
PPTX
Core Concepts of Personalized Learning and Virtual Learning Environments
PDF
Mucosal Drug Delivery system_NDDS_BPHARMACY__SEM VII_PCI.pdf
PPTX
B.Sc. DS Unit 2 Software Engineering.pptx
PDF
HVAC Specification 2024 according to central public works department
PDF
Complications of Minimal Access-Surgery.pdf
PPTX
Education and Perspectives of Education.pptx
PDF
BP 505 T. PHARMACEUTICAL JURISPRUDENCE (UNIT 1).pdf
Share_Module_2_Power_conflict_and_negotiation.pptx
Skin Care and Cosmetic Ingredients Dictionary ( PDFDrive ).pdf
Hazard Identification & Risk Assessment .pdf
MBA _Common_ 2nd year Syllabus _2021-22_.pdf
LIFE & LIVING TRILOGY - PART - (2) THE PURPOSE OF LIFE.pdf
A powerpoint presentation on the Revised K-10 Science Shaping Paper
CISA (Certified Information Systems Auditor) Domain-Wise Summary.pdf
Environmental Education MCQ BD2EE - Share Source.pdf
BP 704 T. NOVEL DRUG DELIVERY SYSTEMS (UNIT 2).pdf
Uderstanding digital marketing and marketing stratergie for engaging the digi...
Introduction to pro and eukaryotes and differences.pptx
FORM 1 BIOLOGY MIND MAPS and their schemes
English Textual Question & Ans (12th Class).pdf
Core Concepts of Personalized Learning and Virtual Learning Environments
Mucosal Drug Delivery system_NDDS_BPHARMACY__SEM VII_PCI.pdf
B.Sc. DS Unit 2 Software Engineering.pptx
HVAC Specification 2024 according to central public works department
Complications of Minimal Access-Surgery.pdf
Education and Perspectives of Education.pptx
BP 505 T. PHARMACEUTICAL JURISPRUDENCE (UNIT 1).pdf

Year 9 Hunger Games Home Learning Project

  • 1. Year 9 Home Learning Project Dystopian Fiction Name:................................ Year Group:...................... Teacher:........................... Due Date:.......................... Levels 5-7
  • 2. Home Learning Project Year 9 Dystopian Fiction Name: Class: Digital Studies Teacher: Teacher’s Comment (WWW): Level for writing: To improve (EBI): Level for reading:
  • 3. The Hunger Games This home learning project is about exploring dystopian fiction using comparisons to real-life situations in the world today. Start looking in newspapers, on the internet or watch the news to find out information about conflicts around the world How to complete this booklet You should complete each activity in order to build up your skills and knowledge. Altogether the assignments should take about six hours to complete. If you do not have access to a computer at home, remember you can use the homework club at JHNCC, the library in your breaks or the Digital Studies rooms if they are available. Remember, you must always ask your teacher and your parents if you need help or want something to be explained differently.
  • 4. Read the following article taken from: 20 mins http://www.faze.ca/issue06/child_soldiers.html More than 300,000 child soldiers are fighting in armed conflicts in more than thirty countries worldwide. According to one group commander in the Democratic Republic of Congo, "[children] make good fighters because they're young and want to show off. They think it's all a game, so they're fearless." A large number come from disrupted family backgrounds, economically or socially deprived families or are children who come from conflict zones themselves. Widely perceived to be a cheap and expendable commodity, child soldiers tend to receive little or no training before being thrust into the front line. In the early 1980s, during the Iran- Iraq war, thousands of Iranian children, many straight from school, were sent with popular militias to the frontline, often given a symbolic key to the paradise promised them as martyrs. Most prevalent are child soldiers in Africa and Asia, but across the globe it is a growing phenomenon. One of the reasons behind its growth is the shortage of male recruits in countries at war. And with the technological development of smaller more lightweight weapons children are able to load, carry and fire deadly arms. One former child soldier from Burundi stated that, "My first role was to carry a torch for grown-up rebels. Later I was shown how to use hand grenades. Barely within a month or so, I was carrying an AK-47 rifle or even a G3." Once recruited, the children are often treated brutally and punishments for mistakes or desertion are severe. Not all child soldiers are forced to kill, yet the horrors they suffer will continue to haunt them for the rest of their lives. One Peruvian woman recruited by The Shining Path at the age of 11 recalls, "They beat all the people there, old and young, they killed them all, nearly 10 people... like dogs they killed them... I didn't kill anyone, but I saw them killing... the children who were with them killed too... with weapons... they made us drink the blood of people…" Besides the risk of death or injury in combat, child soldiers suffer disproportionately from the rigours of military life. Younger children collapse under heavy loads, malnutrition, respiratory and skin infections and other ailments are frequent.
  • 5. Reading Skills: Key Word Definitions Task Key Word Definition Synonyms (similar words) Can you use it in a sentence? Dystopia Utopia Shortage Deprivation Expendable Punished Tribute District Death Propaganda 1) Using a dictionary, research the meaning of the key words for this topic. 40 mins
  • 6. Reading Skills: Understanding the writer’s viewpoint and language choices. (AF5 and AF6) How did the article make you feel? Use your emotions to describe what you have read. Pick one piece of information from the text to help explain your answer. Find three sentences (or parts of sentences) in the text you have read that describe the backgrounds of the children who become child soldiers. Backgrounds = what the children’s lives were like before they became soldiers. 1. 2. 3. Look at the image. Describe what you see. Use adjectives, similes (comparisons using like or as) and onomatopoeia (words that imitate sounds) to aid your description. 2) Now you have read the online article, answer the questions in the boxes provided. KEY WORDS to use to help you: fighting, cheap, shortage, commodity, expendable, punished, illness, malnutrition, death. 40 mins
  • 7. How do these three things make the reader feel? Can you explain why? 1. There are over 300,000 child soldiers in the world. 2. Children’s lives are seen as cheap and expendable, 3. Girls are recruited as soldiers and have to fight as well. How does this relate to what you already know about The Hunger Games?
  • 8. Digital Literacy 3) Research the following website and answer the following questions. Answer in full sentences. 1 hour Go to: http://www.historyonthenet.com/Romans/gladiators.htm 1. Who fought at the colosseum? 2. What type of people were gladiators? 3. What type of weapons were the gladiators allowed to use? 4. What else would you find in the arena? 5. Who did gladiators fight? 6. How did the fights end? Using this website and additional websites find out five unusual facts about gladiatorial combat. Record them here. • • • • •
  • 9. 4) Read the introduction to becoming a Tribute in The Hunger Games on the following page. Continue the story as if you are the Tribute whose life is about to change. Before you write it you must plan and include the following: • Your feelings – what do you hear, see, smell? • How do you feel – scared, honoured, unsure? • How are you treated – good, bad? • Are you fed and given water? • Are you handcuffed or tied up? • Do you go on a long journey away from your family? 30 mins Notes
  • 10. 5) 1 hour You're lying in your bed and slowly drift off to sleep. Effie Trinket puts her hand into ther glass bowl and pulls out a name. ‘And the female/male Tribute from John Henry Newman District is...’ You hear your name called out. You are filled with emotion. You know you are going to have to fight for survival. You have become a Tribute. Your answer must be no less than 500 words and must include adjectives, simple, complex and compound sentences. It should also use punctuation for effect. For example, exclamation marks to show feeling, horror etc. When you have planned your answer it needs to written up digitally using the computer. You need to use Word for this exercise and ensure your grammar, punctuation and spelling is checked. REMEMBER: if a red dotted line appears under the text, then it is incorrect and needs changing. Use this space for any additional planning.
  • 12. Digital Studies: AF1 (Planning, Developing and Evaluating) Level Ladder Level Success Criteria 5 You can demonstrate that you can:  Use a range of ICT tools and techniques to organise solutions to a problem  Judge how successful your work has been in achieving your goal, and identify ways in which you could improve it  Identify the advantages and disadvantages of using ICT both inside and outside school 6 You can demonstrate that you can:  Plan and develop ways to solve problems using different ICT tools and techniques efficiently  Use success criteria and feedback to improve the effectiveness of your solution  Explore the impacts of the use of ICT in work, leisure and home 7 You can demonstrate that you can:  Design and plan an ICT-based system by:  Selecting which information is relevant to your query, and ensuring that it is useful and efficient  devising and applying success criteria to ensure a quality solution, refining work as it progresses  identifying the advantages and limitations of the system  Identify the impact of ICT on people, communities and cultures
  • 13. Digital Literacy: Developing What to include: 1. Title of the movie. 2. Dystopian Images 3. Blurb – a summary of the film Once you’re happy with your HLP, complete the self-assessment below. After you’ve done it, you might want a parent or adult to have a look – they may think you’ve done better than you think you have or inspire you to redraft. 6) Now you have completed your extended piece of writing, produce a DVD cover for a new Dystopian movie. 1 hour
  • 14. Self-Assessment: How have I done? Give yourself a tick if you think you’ve shown the following writing. If you’ve tried – but aren’t sure you’ve mastered it – put a question mark in the box and if you haven’t done it put a cross. Have I… √? X Used commas and full stops accurately Used speech marks and colons and semi-colons Used varied and interesting words to describe Developed ideas Used simple and compound sentences Used complex sentences Used connectives, such as meanwhile, although, Used paragraphs which link together Given a clear view point Used my imagination Used words which suit my audience Spelt the most commonly used words correctly Spelt most words correctly, including more unusual choices Used colour and pictures to appeal to my reader
  • 15. WRITING Pupil name _____________________________ English Class ________________ Date AF6 – write accurately, using correct sentences and punctuation AF3 – organise and present texts effectively AF2 – Produce texts suitable for your purpose and audience Level 7 • I write with a variety of sentence types which I can use judiciously across the text to achieve my purpose and overall effect, with rare loss of control. • I use a range of features to shape/craft sentences that have individual merit and contribute to the overall development of the text. • My writing uses information, ideas and events which are skilfully managed and shaped to achieve my intended purpose and effect, e.g. development of character, plot, event, or sides of an argument, are paced across the text. • I also use a variety of devices to position the reader. • I can make imaginative and generally successful adaptations of a wide range of forms and conventions to suit a variety of purposes and audiences. • I write with a well judged, distinctive individual voice and point of view which is established and sustained throughout my writing. • I can vary the level of formality and choose to use other stylistic devices within my writing for effect. Level 6 • My sentences use the full range of punctuation and are consistently accurate. • There is variety in my sentence structure with only occasional errors in ambitious structures, e.g. only occasional comma splices, some use of semi-colons, not always accurate. • My writing is clearly controlled and sequenced, taking account of the reader’s likely reaction, e.g. differing length paragraphs, use of flashback in narrative, anticipating reader’s questions. • I use a range of features to clearly signal the overall direction of the text for the reader. • My writing is imaginative and I am familiar with different writing conventions, which I try to use. • I can establish a point of view and try to sustain it throughout. • I try to change my formality and use stylistic devices to suit my audience and purpose, for example I can use literary devices as easily as I can use conversational style. Level 5 • You use a full range of punctuation correctly most of the time • You use punctuation within sentences correctly and structure your sentences carefully • Your ideas are structured clearly • Your closing paragraph refers back to your opening paragraph • You link your paragraphs clearly • You clearly write to inform, explain and describe, using appropriate devices • You use the right style and keep your reader interested Look at the writing grid above. Tick what you think you have done really well. What level do you think you have achieved for your child soldier piece of writing? My level is _________________________________________________________________________________________________. I need to improve on _________________________________________________________________________________________ STAR