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A COUPLE’S CATASTROPHE
BY
KASHMIRE HAWKER
FADE IN:
EXT. Public Park – MID-AFTERNOON (5PM)
We zoom into the centre of Heath Town Park to under a
tree, which is within the Heath Town area of the city of
Wolverhampton.
Nicole Kelly (seventeen) and Mark Francos (eighteen) are
holding hands and sitting under a tree in the centre of
the park. Mark then move to his bag, opens it and pulls
out a box. Nicole instantly puts her hands over her mouth
in shock realising what the item is.
Mark then stands up and kneels on to his right knee, after
a moment of hesitation.
A Wide Shot on Camera
Mark
Nicole-would you do the greatest honour of marrying me?
Will you marry me?
Car horn beeps for 1-½ seconds
Nicole
Yes Mark!!
Mark
I love you forever and ever
Nicole
Stop it. You’re making me cry!
Both share a hug 10 seconds long and share two kisses on
the lips.
The couple stands up, holding hands and walk very happily
down the park path sharing one more kiss along the way.
This lasts for around 8 seconds with the kiss half way
through.
Turns to black for 2 seconds
Fades in to next scene with high tempo music & footage of
living room showing people looking shocked.
INT. LIVING ROOM – LATE MORNING (11AM)
Low Angle Camera Shot, showing the post drop through the
letterbox on to the floor. Connor Hill (fifteen) runs to
the front door, picks up the correspondence and comes
back into the living run-all very quietly.
Ciara O’Dounaghue (sixteen), Connor’s closest friend who
is at his house at the same time, places some of the post
on to a table.
One of the pieces is addressed to Connor
Ciara’s left hand is placed on Connor’s shoulder
Ciara
What’s this for you?
Connor
I have not an idea. Let’s see shall we…
Connor opens the envelope and displays a very shocked
face
Ciara
What’s up babe? You don’t seem very happy
Connor
Look at this-it’s an invite for us both to attend
Nicole’s and Mark’s wedding in 3 months’ time at Himley
Hall
Ciara
You’ve got to be kidding me?!
Connor
It certainly isn’t I’m afraid-they broke both our hearts;
why can’t we break there’s??
Both stomp to the front room wall and Connor pins the
invite to the wall in anger
Fades to black-high pitch music plays at same time
INT: BEDROOM – EARLY MORNING (2AM)
FLASHBACK
The way Connor broke up, through an argument with Nicole
and Ciara split with Mark, being down to her hitting him
over the head will be shown back and forth whiles they
both toss and turn a huge amount, on both sides of the
bed.
Ciara
ARHHHH!!
Ciara is awoken from flashback and screams considerably;
she hits the bed with her hand in frustration
Ciara
Why did this have to happen?
Falls back on to pillow and slowly back to sleep-takes 15
seconds
Connor
Don’t worry; we’ll come out as winners…
Connor whispers this across the room, in a tired sounding
voice
INT: LIVING ROOM’s – MID MORNING (10AM)
Switch between both the couple and close friends planning
the wedding and a possible plan to ruin it. Across 40
seconds, we will see switching every 5 seconds and see
Mark & Nicole look at things such as pictures of possible
venues, dresses and the final few invites.
Connor & Ciara will be seen discussing what they may say
to say to everybody in objection, if they objected. The
suggestion shown is a plan to puncture the tyres of the
wedding vehicle.
Nicole uploads a Facebook post about trip to a Suit shop
for Mark, ahead of the ceremony in 4 day’s time, which is
seen by Connor.
Plays Dance of the Knights by Prokofiev in the background
throughout this scene.
EXT: NICOLE’S HOME – MID AFTERNOON (2PM)
Nicole’s wedding car is picking Nicole up outside her
home and the chuffer heads inside. Connor then runs and
punctures the rear left tyre, without anyone seeing him
do it.
Connor heads to the Church, when it’s realised that the
car has a problem; that being tyre is down. Luckily for
Nicole, a spare tyre in the boot of the car and therefore
replaces the flattened tyre.
EXT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (2:20PM)
Connor is breathless after running from the car and
outside the church meets Ciara.
Connor
Job done – she won’t get here now…
EXT: NICOLE’S HOME – MID AFTERNOON (2:30PM)
The tyre has been replaced, Nicole heads to the Church
and arrives just in time for the service to begin.
INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:00PM)
The end of the marriage ceremony is nearing. The Vicar
stands and declares:
Vicar
Before I proceed and legally declare them husband and
wife, I ask that any person present objecting to this,
please stand now and make your reasons known.
INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:01PM)
Connor and Ciara are seen for a brief moment intending to
raise their hands in objection.
INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:02PM)
They both look at one and other and it is realised that
they are holding hands.
INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:03PM)
Connor and Ciara then share a brief kiss in the
foreground, whilst the Vicar concludes the ceremony.
Vicar
Okay - I can therefore declare you Nicole & Mark husband
and wife. You may now kiss the bride!
INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:04PM)
The congregation cheer as newly wed kiss in the
background, and Connor and Ciara share a kiss, at the
same time.
Camera then zooms out going upward for 3 seconds.
Fades to black.

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Unit 11 LO4: FINAL SCRIPT

  • 2. FADE IN: EXT. Public Park – MID-AFTERNOON (5PM) We zoom into the centre of Heath Town Park to under a tree, which is within the Heath Town area of the city of Wolverhampton. Nicole Kelly (seventeen) and Mark Francos (eighteen) are holding hands and sitting under a tree in the centre of the park. Mark then move to his bag, opens it and pulls out a box. Nicole instantly puts her hands over her mouth in shock realising what the item is. Mark then stands up and kneels on to his right knee, after a moment of hesitation. A Wide Shot on Camera Mark Nicole-would you do the greatest honour of marrying me? Will you marry me? Car horn beeps for 1-½ seconds Nicole Yes Mark!! Mark I love you forever and ever Nicole Stop it. You’re making me cry! Both share a hug 10 seconds long and share two kisses on the lips. The couple stands up, holding hands and walk very happily down the park path sharing one more kiss along the way. This lasts for around 8 seconds with the kiss half way through. Turns to black for 2 seconds Fades in to next scene with high tempo music & footage of living room showing people looking shocked.
  • 3. INT. LIVING ROOM – LATE MORNING (11AM) Low Angle Camera Shot, showing the post drop through the letterbox on to the floor. Connor Hill (fifteen) runs to the front door, picks up the correspondence and comes back into the living run-all very quietly. Ciara O’Dounaghue (sixteen), Connor’s closest friend who is at his house at the same time, places some of the post on to a table. One of the pieces is addressed to Connor Ciara’s left hand is placed on Connor’s shoulder Ciara What’s this for you? Connor I have not an idea. Let’s see shall we… Connor opens the envelope and displays a very shocked face Ciara What’s up babe? You don’t seem very happy Connor Look at this-it’s an invite for us both to attend Nicole’s and Mark’s wedding in 3 months’ time at Himley Hall Ciara You’ve got to be kidding me?! Connor It certainly isn’t I’m afraid-they broke both our hearts; why can’t we break there’s?? Both stomp to the front room wall and Connor pins the invite to the wall in anger Fades to black-high pitch music plays at same time
  • 4. INT: BEDROOM – EARLY MORNING (2AM) FLASHBACK The way Connor broke up, through an argument with Nicole and Ciara split with Mark, being down to her hitting him over the head will be shown back and forth whiles they both toss and turn a huge amount, on both sides of the bed. Ciara ARHHHH!! Ciara is awoken from flashback and screams considerably; she hits the bed with her hand in frustration Ciara Why did this have to happen? Falls back on to pillow and slowly back to sleep-takes 15 seconds Connor Don’t worry; we’ll come out as winners… Connor whispers this across the room, in a tired sounding voice INT: LIVING ROOM’s – MID MORNING (10AM) Switch between both the couple and close friends planning the wedding and a possible plan to ruin it. Across 40 seconds, we will see switching every 5 seconds and see Mark & Nicole look at things such as pictures of possible venues, dresses and the final few invites. Connor & Ciara will be seen discussing what they may say to say to everybody in objection, if they objected. The suggestion shown is a plan to puncture the tyres of the wedding vehicle. Nicole uploads a Facebook post about trip to a Suit shop for Mark, ahead of the ceremony in 4 day’s time, which is seen by Connor. Plays Dance of the Knights by Prokofiev in the background
  • 5. throughout this scene. EXT: NICOLE’S HOME – MID AFTERNOON (2PM) Nicole’s wedding car is picking Nicole up outside her home and the chuffer heads inside. Connor then runs and punctures the rear left tyre, without anyone seeing him do it. Connor heads to the Church, when it’s realised that the car has a problem; that being tyre is down. Luckily for Nicole, a spare tyre in the boot of the car and therefore replaces the flattened tyre. EXT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (2:20PM) Connor is breathless after running from the car and outside the church meets Ciara. Connor Job done – she won’t get here now… EXT: NICOLE’S HOME – MID AFTERNOON (2:30PM) The tyre has been replaced, Nicole heads to the Church and arrives just in time for the service to begin. INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:00PM) The end of the marriage ceremony is nearing. The Vicar stands and declares: Vicar Before I proceed and legally declare them husband and wife, I ask that any person present objecting to this, please stand now and make your reasons known. INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:01PM) Connor and Ciara are seen for a brief moment intending to raise their hands in objection.
  • 6. INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:02PM) They both look at one and other and it is realised that they are holding hands. INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:03PM) Connor and Ciara then share a brief kiss in the foreground, whilst the Vicar concludes the ceremony. Vicar Okay - I can therefore declare you Nicole & Mark husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride! INT: CHURCH – MID AFTERNOON (3:04PM) The congregation cheer as newly wed kiss in the background, and Connor and Ciara share a kiss, at the same time. Camera then zooms out going upward for 3 seconds. Fades to black.