A level example
- 1. GCE Media Studies OCR GCE in Media Studies H140 Unit G322 – Exemplar Answer and Commentary – Candidate B – High Level Answer
- 15. Candidate B, Question 1 There is clear knowledge and understanding of the task although the introductory paragraph is contextual. The candidate could have started the response with the second paragraph, which starts with analysis on mise en scène. The use of mise en sc ne is excellent in describing the appearance of the young girl Amy and the possible connotations on offer: “The girl within the clip is the only character wearing normal feminine clothing. Her top is clean which has connotations with privacy and innocence. This reinforces her youth when she is juxtaposed with the older characters, therefore creating representations of age.” (P4) This is further developed in analysis of the Headmaster’s clothing and contrasted. Consideration is also given to the technical construction of representation via discussion of the shot-reverse-shot structures; which emphasise the opposition between two age groups. There is the occasional inaccuracy with the use of the term ‘crowd shot’. Editing is discussed (P5) to represent the young girl’s connotations of innocence, but it is marked with an admission symbol on the script as the examiner feels there is a gap or opportunity for analysis here. Sound in analysed on page 6, but analysis of representation is limited to speech as a mode of address, this again is contrasted between the female teenager and the elder head teacher. It is felt that sound could be more fully developed in relation to the analysis of representation, for example, the use of music. The response does cover all of the technical area, with some room for development in analysis, but nonetheless, this is a sustained discussion of the text, where the candidate has selected appropriate examples from the extract to discuss age and representation. Explanation/analysis/argument – Low Level 4 Use of examples – Low Level 4 Use of terminology – Low Level 4
- 16. Candidate B, Question 2 The media area being addressed is film, with a focus on Warp and Working title film, a subsidiary of Vivendi Universal. There is a clear introductory paragraph, which indicates the candidate’s intentions. The second paragraph really takes a hold of what the question demands: “Funding is extremely important with the production of a film” (P8) and this is exemplified by the use of Warp Film’s relationship to EM Media and national lottery funding. The candidate uses institutional knowledge and understanding to demonstrate and explain the features of the Warp Film Company using the example, This is England. The candidate also uses academic/industry argument to support this understanding and the response then proceeds to discuss the impact of digital technology on film making and illustrates points well with exemplification. (P9) “Warp X’s film are digitally produced, which is a lot cheaper than 35mm film, although the quality is less.” The candidate then contrasts this to Hollywood production practices and once again evaluation is evident at the end of this paragraph: “digital technology is a benefit to independent film companies with limited budgets” (P9) The candidate then discusses Hollywood film practice and shows how Working Title has a collaboration with Vivendi Universal which is empowering for Working Title to make larger profits for global releases, and the candidate also refers to an historical example of synergy. The response develops with a discussion of distribution in address of the question set. This is evaluated in relation to Warp Film and develops a discussion of digital technology, which is linked to facts on distribution, and the candidate uses the concept of ‘optimum releasing’ in relation to DVD releases. The candidate attempts to evaluate the implications of the relationship between film and digital technology and the issue of music piracy is briefly touched upon. In this response there is a sustained and detailed discussion of distribution and this is linked to the promotion of film: “In 2004 Working Title made a profit of 17.8 million so Vivendi Universal bought a 67% stake in the company, making it a part of the conglomerate.” (P12)
- 17. The candidate attempts to show this as beneficial to Working Title films as a British film company. Explanation/analysis/argument – High Level 3 Use of examples – High Level 3 Use of terminology – High Level 3 This candidate’s combination of levels achieved have managed to meet the raw mark for an A grade for this paper.