C level example
- 1. GCE Media Studies OCR GCE in Media Studies H140 Unit G322 – Exemplar Answer and Commentary – Candidate C – Low Level Answer
- 9. Candidate C, Question 1 The introduction to this candidate response is descriptive of what happens in the extract (P3) and the continued prose on Page 1 lacks technical detail and is a descriptive commentary of the extract. There is attention to technical details, though there is an attempt to discuss verisimilitude. On page two there is a minimal engagement with the concept of sound: “Non-diegetic music in the extract gives a feel of vintage Scottish music, which is played whilst the older males are shown working in the extract. It is also very lively and active. So the music is relating to the older working males in the clip” (P4) There is some basic language and understanding in explanation and analysis used by the candidate. This point is developed further on page 4 showing some competence. There are hefty omissions in the technical considerations given in the answer. The response is basic with some competence in the understanding of sound and the construction of age representation. A full range of examples has not been used. Explanation/analysis/argument – Low Level 2 Use of examples – High Level 1 Use of terminology – Low Level 2 Candidate C, Question 2 The choice of text in the candidate’s response does not allow the opportunity for the candidate to fully respond to the question set. There is some very assumptive points being made, which demonstrates basic knowledge and understanding: “In recent years technology has grown and newspapers have been deemed a dying breed.’’ (P5) There is an attempt to describe the contents and there is minimal argument, without substantiated exemplification: “The newspaper in order to survive has had to adapt and one of the medias (reference to the internet) thought to be killing newspapers is actually working to its advantage” (P5) On page 6, there is some basic knowledge and understanding of the newspaper industry, rather than any attempt to focus on detailed examples the candidate may have chosen to study.
- 10. There is also little comment on newspapers in an on-line age, which is a requirement of the rubric of the question set. This answer is basic and in places shows minimal understanding of the media area studied. Explanation/analysis/argument – Low Level 2 Use of examples – Low Level 2 Use of terminology – Low Level 2 This candidate’s combination of levels achieved have managed to meet the raw mark for an E grade for this paper.