Assignment 16 group 1
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This document provides feedback on two film pitches for different genres. For the first Voodoo/Occult pitch, the feedback indicates that while good research was presented on the genre, more details needed to be provided on the plot, reasons for using a non-linear structure, and unique selling point. For the second Killer/psychological pitch, the feedback praises the detailed plot but suggests providing more details on conventions and choosing a more original plot. Overall, the feedback focuses on strengthening plot details and justifications for creative choices.
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Assignment 16 group 1
- 1. Assignment 16 - Pitch Audience Feedback
- 2. Voodoo/Occult sub-genre (pitch 1) • Good research into the sub-genre. • Wide variety of films have been analysed. • Wide variety of research into setting, camera work, sound and editing. • The plot of our pitch wasn’t very detailed. • We need to develop our plot by being more specific. • We need to give more information to why we have chosen to use a non-linear OTS. • We need to go into more detail about out USP (unique selling point).
- 3. Killer/psychological sub-genre (pitch 2) • Good amount of research went into the conventions of this sub-genre. • Our plot was a lot more detailed and specific in comparison to our first pitch. • Good detail into why we chose to use a non-linear OTS. • We could have put more detail into the conventions of the plot. • More detail was needed when we were stating wether we were going to challenge or reinforce the conventions. • We need to choose a more original plot for our second pitch.