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Creating a Character!
Using Descriptive Writing...
Year 3 students - ACARA
‚Students create a range of
  imaginative, informative and persuasive
  types of texts including
  narratives, procedures, performances, rep
  orts, reviews, poetry and expositions.‛
Students will: (from ACARA, year 3 content
  descriptors or elaborations)
 Drawing on literary texts read, viewed and
  listened to for inspiration and ideas, approaching
  language to create mood and characterisation
  (ACLET1601)
 Participating in pair, group and class speaking and
  listening situations, including informal
  conversations, class discussions and presentations
The final products of these lessons will
  result in two pieces of assessment. The
  student’s will create their own monster
  (choosing their own
  process, pencils, paint, craft, digital) along
  with a detailed description of what it looks
  like. They will also create a descriptive
  writing piece about a destination of their
  choice.


As there are numerous resources to
  help teach descriptive writing in the
  classroom and the options are
  endless, the process of finding the
  right resources can be very time
Resources
Cackle Cook’s Monster Stew (Wolff, P.
  2001)

Song: One eyed one horned flying purple
  people eater
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwR0n8
  7v2BQ&feature=fvsr

Movie: Monsters Inc.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sED6FRX
HOW TO USE THESE RESOURCES TO TEACH
       THE CONTENT DESCRIPTORS
             EFFECTIVELY...
Teaching Strategies:
Cackle Cook’s Monster Stew:
Shared & modelled reading sessions
- Use modelled reading initially and
  then shared reading thereafter to
  continue encouraging the student’s to
  read or perform in front of an
  audience in preparation for their
  assessment and fulfilling the content
  descriptor
Cloze procedure activities – adding
  the new words to the word wall
Recipe
• An ancient ape’s short armpit hair
• A half-inch square of big brown
bear
• Six heaping cups of black-cat paws
• Two dozen dirty dragon claws
• Eleven large eel eggs
• Fourteen fresh frog legs
• A gargoyle tongue with a bump or
two
Recipe
• One hobgoblin’s knobby nose
• Nine or ten iguana toes
• Three large jars of jellyfish
  jelly
• A piece of pocket from a
  kangaroo belly
• Twelve leaping-lizard scales
• Two mangy monkey tails
• The brightest feather from a
  nightingale
• A giant ogre’s leather shoe
• Porcupine quills, quite a few
Recipe
• Two large wings from a
  spotted quail
• Four round rings of raccoon
  tail
• Sixteen shimmering spider
  webs
• Twenty-two slimy brown
  toad heads
• A pair of ghoul’s long
  underwear
• Five stringy strands of
  vampire hair
• One wide strip of werewolf
  skin
• Three sharp tips of Xiphias
  fin
• The hairy hump from the
  neck of a yak
• A dusty clump from a
Song: One eyed one horned flying
 purple people eater
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r
 wR0n87v2BQ&feature=fvsr

This song would not be used as a
 teaching strategy rather a way to get
 the student’s thought processes going
 on describing their creations.
Brainstorming activities on other
 words that could be used
Use this song to help student’s to
 write their descriptions after they
 have created their monsters.
Monsters Inc. – Movie

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v
=sED6FRXIHJc

Brainstorming activities on
describing the characters
Strategy of I do, we do & you do –
John Fleming’s Instruction model
(http://www.hbe.com.au/john-
fleming.html) – to create their own
monsters.
Create sharing time where the
  student’s can show their pictures of
  their characters and read out their
  descriptions
Giving student’s sharing time helps
  them to gain confidence when
  speaking in front of an audience.
 This will help the student’s to
  understand that even though they
  see something one way, everyone
  else may see it differently. It will
  help them understand that their
  imaginations are what helps us to
  draw pictures.
QUICK DEMONSTRATION
           Please draw!
            MY MONSTER
He has...
1. A really big head
2. A little body
3. 2 little arms
4. 2 little legs
5. A squiggly line for a mouth
6. 2 little dots for his nose
7. 1 little dot for his belly button
DID YOUR MONSTER LOOK LIKE THIS?




Hold up monsters for all to see. ‘See
 how our imaginations may make
The resources that have been used
  focus on the previously discussed
  content descriptors and
  elaborations.
I hope this has given some incite as to
  how you could use these particular
  resources to help enhance your
  teaching and lessons.

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Creating a character!

  • 1. Creating a Character! Using Descriptive Writing...
  • 2. Year 3 students - ACARA ‚Students create a range of imaginative, informative and persuasive types of texts including narratives, procedures, performances, rep orts, reviews, poetry and expositions.‛ Students will: (from ACARA, year 3 content descriptors or elaborations)  Drawing on literary texts read, viewed and listened to for inspiration and ideas, approaching language to create mood and characterisation (ACLET1601)  Participating in pair, group and class speaking and listening situations, including informal conversations, class discussions and presentations
  • 3. The final products of these lessons will result in two pieces of assessment. The student’s will create their own monster (choosing their own process, pencils, paint, craft, digital) along with a detailed description of what it looks like. They will also create a descriptive writing piece about a destination of their choice. As there are numerous resources to help teach descriptive writing in the classroom and the options are endless, the process of finding the right resources can be very time
  • 4. Resources Cackle Cook’s Monster Stew (Wolff, P. 2001) Song: One eyed one horned flying purple people eater http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rwR0n8 7v2BQ&feature=fvsr Movie: Monsters Inc. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sED6FRX
  • 5. HOW TO USE THESE RESOURCES TO TEACH THE CONTENT DESCRIPTORS EFFECTIVELY... Teaching Strategies: Cackle Cook’s Monster Stew: Shared & modelled reading sessions - Use modelled reading initially and then shared reading thereafter to continue encouraging the student’s to read or perform in front of an audience in preparation for their assessment and fulfilling the content descriptor Cloze procedure activities – adding the new words to the word wall
  • 6. Recipe • An ancient ape’s short armpit hair • A half-inch square of big brown bear • Six heaping cups of black-cat paws • Two dozen dirty dragon claws • Eleven large eel eggs • Fourteen fresh frog legs • A gargoyle tongue with a bump or two
  • 7. Recipe • One hobgoblin’s knobby nose • Nine or ten iguana toes • Three large jars of jellyfish jelly • A piece of pocket from a kangaroo belly • Twelve leaping-lizard scales • Two mangy monkey tails • The brightest feather from a nightingale • A giant ogre’s leather shoe • Porcupine quills, quite a few
  • 8. Recipe • Two large wings from a spotted quail • Four round rings of raccoon tail • Sixteen shimmering spider webs • Twenty-two slimy brown toad heads • A pair of ghoul’s long underwear • Five stringy strands of vampire hair • One wide strip of werewolf skin • Three sharp tips of Xiphias fin • The hairy hump from the neck of a yak • A dusty clump from a
  • 9. Song: One eyed one horned flying purple people eater http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r wR0n87v2BQ&feature=fvsr This song would not be used as a teaching strategy rather a way to get the student’s thought processes going on describing their creations. Brainstorming activities on other words that could be used Use this song to help student’s to write their descriptions after they have created their monsters.
  • 10. Monsters Inc. – Movie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =sED6FRXIHJc Brainstorming activities on describing the characters Strategy of I do, we do & you do – John Fleming’s Instruction model (http://www.hbe.com.au/john- fleming.html) – to create their own monsters.
  • 11. Create sharing time where the student’s can show their pictures of their characters and read out their descriptions Giving student’s sharing time helps them to gain confidence when speaking in front of an audience. This will help the student’s to understand that even though they see something one way, everyone else may see it differently. It will help them understand that their imaginations are what helps us to draw pictures.
  • 12. QUICK DEMONSTRATION Please draw! MY MONSTER He has... 1. A really big head 2. A little body 3. 2 little arms 4. 2 little legs 5. A squiggly line for a mouth 6. 2 little dots for his nose 7. 1 little dot for his belly button
  • 13. DID YOUR MONSTER LOOK LIKE THIS? Hold up monsters for all to see. ‘See how our imaginations may make
  • 14. The resources that have been used focus on the previously discussed content descriptors and elaborations. I hope this has given some incite as to how you could use these particular resources to help enhance your teaching and lessons.