The document summarizes revisions made to the design of a double-page spread intended for a younger audience. Feedback on an original draft suggested making the title stand out more and moving the text box. The finished left-hand page replaces the text box with a tagline to pull readers in, uses 3D text to make it pop more, and applies effects to the label front to make it more readable while conveying club and drug culture through neon colors. It also highlights a face at the bottom to imply the noise of teens.