Draft 4 1
- 1. Draft 4 planning By Debbie Marques, Maria Younes and Milka Erko
- 2. Shot list Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 1 Mid shot of exterior / / / address 2 Closeup shot of exterior / / / rain falling on puddle 3 Establishing shot Ecterior / / / of house 4 Mid shot of girl Interior, living Debbie as Revision books, Pyjamas studying room sophie folders 5 Closeup shot of ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ girl reading revision book 6 Mid shot of girl ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ revising on sofa 7 Closeup shot of ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ girl’s face
- 3. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 8 mid shot of girl Interior, living Debbie as Books/ revision Pyjamas studying room Sophie folders 9 Mid shot of girl ‘’ ‘’ Phone ‘’ looking at phone 10 Closeup shot of ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ phone 11 Closeup of facial ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ expression 12 Closeup of text ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ 13 Closeup of ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ putting phone on table 14 Mid shot of girl ‘’ ‘’ Books, revision ‘’ studying folders
- 4. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 15 Over the interior, living Debbie as Papers, books, Pyjamas shoulder shot of room sophie folders girl reading 16 Closeup of ‘’ ‘’ Phone ‘’ phone and girl getting it 17 Closeup of ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ phone 18 Mid shot of girl’s ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ facial expression 19 Closeup of NHS ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ text 20 Mid shot of girl ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ rushing to front door 21 Long shot of girl ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ going to check the post
- 5. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 21 Closeup shot of Interior, coridor Debbie as / Pyjamas feet ruuning sophie 22 Midshot of girl ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ getting to door 23 Low angle of ‘’ ‘’ Letters ‘’ bunch of letters on floor 24 Closeup shot of ‘’ ‘’ NHS letter ‘’ NHS hospital name on letter 25 Mid shot of girl ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ kneeeling 26 Mid shot of rain Exterior / / / falling on puddle 27 Midshot of girl Interior / / / having flashback
- 6. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 28 Two shot of girl Interior, living Debbie as Revision book Sophie : and friend room sophie and pyjamas, robe Milka as Lola Lola: black jacket, black leggings and boots 29 Mid shot of ‘’ Milka as Handbag Black jacket friend Lola black leggings and boots 30 Mid shot of girl ‘’ Debbie as Revision book Pyajamas, robe sophie 31 Closeup shot of ‘’ Milka as Handbag Black jacket , friend Lola black leggings and boots 32 Closeup of girl ‘’ Debbie as Revision book Pyjamas, robe sophie 33 Point of view ‘’ Milka as Handbag Black jacket, shot of friend Lola black leggings and boots 34 Mid shot of girl Interior, coridor Debbie as / Pyjamas back to reality sophie
- 7. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 35 Two shot of girl Interior, Debbie as / Sophie : black with boy restaurant sophie and top, black lether jean as jacket and danny orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket 36 Mid shot of ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ couple but focusing on girl 37 Mid shot of boy ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ trying to seduce girl (drunk) 38 Point of view Exterior ‘’ / ‘’ shot guy smiling while walking home 39 Point of view Exterior ‘’ / ‘’ shot of street 40 Point of view Exterior ‘’ / ‘’ shot of guy sending a kiss
- 8. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 41 Long shot of Exterior Debbie as / Sophie : black couple from sophie and top, black behind walking jean as lether jacket home danny and orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket 42 Mid shot of girl Interior, Debbie as / Pyjamas back to reality corridor sophie 43 Mid shot of Interior , Debbie as / Sophie : black couple arriving walking to sophie and top, black home bedroom jean as lether jacket danny and orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket
- 9. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 43 Girl’s Point of Interior , Debbie as / Sophie : black view shot of bedroom sophie and top, black lether bedroom jean as jacket and danny orange skinnies Danny : checkered shirt, grey jumper, jeans, blue jacket 44 Girl’s point of ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ view shot of boy coming towards her 45 Mid shot of ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ couple in bed kissing 46 Long shot of ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ couple in bed and door shuts 47 Mid shot of girl Interior, corridor Debbie as / Pyjamas back to reality sophie 48 Closeup of girl’s ‘’ ‘’ / ‘’ hand movements on legs
- 10. Scene Shot Location Characters Art dept./props Costume description 49 Long shot of Interior , Debbie as Letters Pyjamas girl with corridor Sophie hand on wall 50 High angle of ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ girl crying and hand on wall 51 Closeup shot ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ of girl’s hand sliding down the wall 52 Closeup shot ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘’ of letter focused on ’HIV positive ‘