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- 1. But when the moment arrives to choose one, my vote is for Miguel de Cervantes But if I had to choose one, my vote would go to Miguel de Cervantes I mean his writing style, so clear (let’s say) as mountain water… I mean, his writing style is as clear, say, as a mountain stream… According with the current researchers in the world, there are at least, two lines which seem be very successful at the present. According to current researchers in the world, there are at least, two lines which seem to be very successful at present. If you’re wondering how developed is Spain at this point, it’s at the same level of some countries such as US or France, not as Japan in fact! If you’re wondering how developed Spain is at this point, it’s at the same level as some
- 2. countries such as the US or France, but not as Japan though! These high-tech phenomena go further the material spaces and shared activities that we do with our relatives and friends. These high-tech phenomena go beyond the material spaces and shared activities that we do with our relatives and friends. On the other hand it’s almost natural the way how technology has conquered our private life On the other hand, the way technology has conquered our private life is almost natural These improves are trying to make this plant meat as realistic as possible with texture, flavor, sizzle etc. These improvements aim to make this plant meat as appealing as possible with texture, flavor, sizzle etc. All this alternatives are a great opportunity to change the world’s vision of meat but we also
- 3. have to take care of the consecuences of eating artificial meat such as illnesses like cancer. All these alternatives are a great opportunity to change the world’s vision of meat but we also have to take into account the likely consequences of eating artificial meat such as an increased probability of developing cancer. They have a beforehand knowledge about this problem what makes easier to catch their interest. They have a previous / prior knowledge of this problem which makes it easier to catch their interest / attention. The reason of writing this letter remains on the need of students who have a contact with real- life media before they finish their degrees. The reason for writing this letter lies in the need for students to have a contact with real- life media before they finish their degrees.
- 4. This project would help students as they would work on deadlines etc… This project would help students as they would work to strict / tight deadlines etc… I can record my own voice to describe a film for a person who can’t see or do appropriate subtitles for people who can’t hear I can record my own voice to describe a film for a person who can’t see or write appropriate subtitles for people who can’t hear First of all, you have to realize that since you wake up to going to sleep, you are connected… First of all, you have to realize that from the moment you wake up until you go to sleep (From dawn to dusk), you are connected… Thinking about a good idea to get to know each other better, we realized that it would be useful to improve our collaboration and communication skills.
- 5. While / as we were thinking about a good idea to get to know each other better, we realized that it would be useful to improve our collaboration and communication skills. First we suggest to promote a crowdfunding campaign to start our magazine First we suggest organizing a crowdfunding campaign to finance our magazine / a crowdfunding campaign be organized Later all that we need is an url to upload the contents Later all that we need is a url to upload the contents A research says that this could help us in a lot of situations… A recent research study states that this could help us in a lot of situations… Apart of this, to perform this idea we need a teamwork that looking for information about different interesting issues
- 6. Apart from this, to carry out this idea we need teamwork in order to look for information about different interesting issues We rather spend our free time selecting among several series and films than deciding which channel is broadcasting the less boring stuff. We’d rather spend our free time selecting among several series and films than decide which channel is broadcasting the less boring stuff. He created his most popular work: The Black Paintings, where one can feel the loniless and the scariness Goya was living on that time of his life. He created his most popular work, The Black Paintings, where one can feel the loneliness and the fear Goya was experiencing at that time of/in his life. She elogiated her opponent saying she deserved to win
- 7. She praised her opponent saying (that) she deserved to win Making work groups to write about all the different things related with our college is such a good way to learn and educate as the conventional exams. Having work groups write about all the different things related to our college is as good a way to learn and educate as the conventional exams.