Exemplar script
- 1. AQA Education (AQA) is a registered charity (number 1073334) and a company limited by guarantee registered in England and Wales (number 3644723). Our registered address is AQA, Devas Street, Manchester M15 6EX. Teacher Resource Bank Exemplar Script GCSE Media Studies Television Crime Drama June 2012 Candidate 1 – Grade A* Version 1.0
- 10. Television Crime Drama Unit 1 TRB script commentaries Candidate 1 - A* Grade Task 1 This is an excellent example of an in role response which is succinct and uses side headings to good effect to shape and organise the answer. All three bullet points are addressed and the student works successfully with a range of well chosen examples to illustrate and develop argument. There is focus on the demands of the task and a confident understanding of the appeal of television crime drama. Throughout, there is evidence of specialist vocabulary and demonstrable understanding of key media concepts. The reference to Todorov in itself adds little to the response, more important is the secure understanding of narrative conventions and their appeal. AO1: 9 AO3: 5 Total: 14 Task 2 The in role response continues in this task which works very closely with the demands of the brief. It is clear that this student has worked very hard with the pre release material and has made good use of the four weeks research and planning time. This is a creative and workable idea which appropriately addresses the demands of all four bullet points and is generally in line with the requirements of the brief. The response demonstrates good work with the genre, is persuasive and skilfully shaped with further evidence of a confident use of specialist vocabulary. AO1:4 AO3: 5 AO4: 4 Total: 13 Task 3 The web page offered demonstrates a good knowledge of the conventions of web page design which are appropriate for television crime drama and audience. A key strength of this response is its close work with the pilot episode and there are some very creative ideas for audience interactivity. The student has worked successfully on design but the effect of this is impeded slightly by explanation of ideas which is not a requirement of the task. Instead, the student would have been better advised to use the time to pay attention to detail e.g the Crime Channel is the institution named in the pre-release, not the BBC. However, this remains a confident response.
- 11. AO1: 4 AO4: 9 Total: 13 Task 4 The in role response is sustained and suggestions offered are totally appropriate and creative. The student shows confidence is working with the potential of a variety of media forms, including e-media and in doing so is fulfilling the requirements of the task. One of the strengths of this response is that suggestions offered are rooted in the new crime drama which serves as further evidence of clear understanding of the advantages of each. Once again, this is a fluent and clear response with appropriate use of specialist vocabulary. AO1: 10 AO3: 5 Total: 15 Overall total: 55/60 Grade awarded: A*