5. A topic sentence is like a . . .
A ship without its rudder.
An army without its general.
A vacation trip without a map.
6. 3 IMPORTANTS POINTS
TS is a complete sentence
TS contains both a topic and controlling idea
TS is the most general statement in the
paragraph
7. What’s missing?
He collects books that were written over a
hundred years ago. But he is also interested in
the best sellers of today. If I ever need to get him
a present, I know I can always please him by
buying him a book.
8. What’s missing?
The most beautiful flower is the rose because it
comes in so many different colors. Another
beautiful flower is the daisy which sometimes
grows wild. Spring flowers like tulips, daffodils,
and crocuses are also very pretty.
9. What’s missing?
First, Canada has an excellent health care
system. All Canadians have access to medical
services at a reasonable price. Second, Canada
has a high standard of education. Finally,
Canada’s cities are clean and efficiently
managed.
10. He collects books that were written over a hundred
years ago. But he is also interested in the best
sellers of today. If I ever need to get him a present, I
know I can always please him by buying him a book.
Which of the following topic sentences is the
best one for the above paragraph?
A. Reading is fun.
B. Books are my father’s hobby.
C. My father was a main influence in my life.
11. The most beautiful flower is the rose because it
comes in so many different colors. Another beautiful
flower is the daisy which sometimes grows wild.
Spring flowers like tulips, daffodils, and crocuses are
also very pretty.
Which of the following topic sentences is the
best one for the above paragraph?
A. Don’t you just love spring?
B. The rose is the most loved flower the world
over.
C. There are many lovely flowers to consider for
12. First, Canada has an excellent health care system.
All Canadians have access to medical services at a
reasonable price. Second, Canada has a high
standard of education. Finally, Canada’s cities are
clean and efficiently managed
A. Canada is our friendly neighbor to the north.
B. There are three reasons why Canada is one
of the best countries of the world.
C. Choose Canada as a great place to vacation.
14. Examples
The easiest kind of supporting detail to use
Make your writing lively and interesting
Make your reader remember well
15. Concluding Sentence
It signals the end of the paragraph
It leaves the reader with the most important
ideas to remember
16. How to make concluding
sentence?
Summarizing the main points of the paragraph
Repeating the topic sentence in the different
words
Topic Sentence:
eBook readers are excellent devices for students.
Concluding Sentence:
It is clear that eBook readers have made students’
lives much easier.
17. My Evaluation of Dining at Fresh Market The menu at Fresh Market,
one of the newest restaurants in downtown Springfield, consists of only
five main dishes that are simple but very delicious. My number one
dish there is pasta with fresh vegetables. The pasta is cooked just
right, and the vegetables include broccoli, onions, tomatoes, and corn.
My second favorite main dish is the spicy chicken and brown rice soup.
The chicken is a little hot for some people’s tastes, but many people
really like the fact that you get brown rice instead of the usual bland
white rice. The other main dishes are fried chicken with curry potatoes,
Greek salad with grilled shrimp, and fried fish with vinegar chips. All
three of these use the freshest of ingredients and taste great. This
paragraph will not include any information about the beverages at this
restaurant. If you eat a meal at Fresh Market, I am sure you will enjoy it
tremendously.
18. If you eat a meal at Fresh Market, I am sure you
will enjoy it tremendously
The menu at Fresh Market has only five dishes
and they are very delicious. The concluding
sentence makes a prediction that you will enjoy
this place very much if you eat there.
19. Rewriting Topic Sentences
Topic sentence:
There are many ways to save money when you
shop.
Properly washing your hands can benefit your
health and the health of others.