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Key coursework feedback points year 11
 Starter: Please grab your NEW purple
  folders and read through your feedback
  on the coursework you handed in
 Based on this set your target for today on
  the target sheet.
 If you STILL don’t have one, please ger a
  new copy from me.
   Based on the work that I have looked at, most
    people are moving on.
   You should now be working towards your
    magazine pitch and target audience, ready to
    prepare for your focus group.
   You each have individual areas to work which
    are on your feedback sheet.
   I have graded you for where you are so please
    make sure you have your mark scheme when
    you see me. If you have lost it, it is on student
    shared. Please reprint
   I have roughly grouped you as to where you
    are.
Level 5 (good)                                               Level 6 (outstanding)

Raf       Pitch reflects clear and detailed evidence of codes          Focus group and pitch are finalised.
Amy W     and conventions of magazines.                                Focus group is clearly planned
Olivia
Megan     There is evidence that your pitch show clear                 Questionnaires are completed ready for focus group.
Rosie     evidence of your target audience and that their              Target audience profile is created and clear.
Amy I     needs are taken into account. The pitch is ready to
Beth      present to TXC as a test run.


Katie     Target audience member has been identified in                Pitch reflects clear and detailed evidence of codes
Liane     detail focusing on key areas of lifestyle and interest.      and conventions of magazines.
Chloe ?    Pitch is being worked on with clear links to target
          audience. The pitch will reflect understanding of the        There is evidence that your pitch show clear evidence
          genre.                                                       of your target audience and that their needs are taken
                                                                       into account. The pitch is ready to present to TXC as a
                                                                       test run.


Henry     Clear evidence of research into front covers, contents       Target audience member has been identified in detail
Jack      page and double pages spread. Focus on a contents            focusing on key areas of lifestyle and interest.
          break down of what is available in the magazine with          Pitch is being worked on with clear links to target
          reference to the target audience needs. A clear link in      audience. The pitch will reflect understanding of the
          research and planning to awareness of target                 genre.
          audience


Steven    There will be an analysis of the double page spread          Clear evidence of research into front covers, contents
 Ellie    and how it appeals to the target audience through            page and double pages spread. Focus on a contents
Martin    conventions.                                                 break down of what is available in the magazine with
          There will be evidence of analysis of what is available to   reference to the target audience needs. A clear link in
          the audience throughout the rest of the magazine and         research and planning to awareness of target audience
 You must be creating a target for each
  hour on your sheet. At the end i want
  you to assess your progress.
 Please make sure that they link in with
  your feedback on next steps
 I will be taking them in at the end of the
  double lesson to check that your targets
  are helping you make progress.
 I will meet with you all over the two hours
  to discuss where you are.
 Please remember you can only have 12
  pages of research and planning- this
  means cutting down the five pages of
  existing audience stuff that you have
  found.
 Bullet point the key areas.
 Your research and planning needs to be
  concise!
   At the end of the lesson I will be taking in
    your folders and marking what you have
    achieved in the last two hours.

   Lets get as much done as possible

   Plenary- Analysis of your targets and
    what you have achieved today.

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Key coursework feedback points year 11

  • 2.  Starter: Please grab your NEW purple folders and read through your feedback on the coursework you handed in  Based on this set your target for today on the target sheet.  If you STILL don’t have one, please ger a new copy from me.
  • 3. Based on the work that I have looked at, most people are moving on.  You should now be working towards your magazine pitch and target audience, ready to prepare for your focus group.  You each have individual areas to work which are on your feedback sheet.  I have graded you for where you are so please make sure you have your mark scheme when you see me. If you have lost it, it is on student shared. Please reprint  I have roughly grouped you as to where you are.
  • 4. Level 5 (good) Level 6 (outstanding) Raf Pitch reflects clear and detailed evidence of codes Focus group and pitch are finalised. Amy W and conventions of magazines. Focus group is clearly planned Olivia Megan There is evidence that your pitch show clear Questionnaires are completed ready for focus group. Rosie evidence of your target audience and that their Target audience profile is created and clear. Amy I needs are taken into account. The pitch is ready to Beth present to TXC as a test run. Katie Target audience member has been identified in Pitch reflects clear and detailed evidence of codes Liane detail focusing on key areas of lifestyle and interest. and conventions of magazines. Chloe ? Pitch is being worked on with clear links to target audience. The pitch will reflect understanding of the There is evidence that your pitch show clear evidence genre. of your target audience and that their needs are taken into account. The pitch is ready to present to TXC as a test run. Henry Clear evidence of research into front covers, contents Target audience member has been identified in detail Jack page and double pages spread. Focus on a contents focusing on key areas of lifestyle and interest. break down of what is available in the magazine with Pitch is being worked on with clear links to target reference to the target audience needs. A clear link in audience. The pitch will reflect understanding of the research and planning to awareness of target genre. audience Steven There will be an analysis of the double page spread Clear evidence of research into front covers, contents Ellie and how it appeals to the target audience through page and double pages spread. Focus on a contents Martin conventions. break down of what is available in the magazine with There will be evidence of analysis of what is available to reference to the target audience needs. A clear link in the audience throughout the rest of the magazine and research and planning to awareness of target audience
  • 5.  You must be creating a target for each hour on your sheet. At the end i want you to assess your progress.  Please make sure that they link in with your feedback on next steps  I will be taking them in at the end of the double lesson to check that your targets are helping you make progress.  I will meet with you all over the two hours to discuss where you are.
  • 6.  Please remember you can only have 12 pages of research and planning- this means cutting down the five pages of existing audience stuff that you have found.  Bullet point the key areas.  Your research and planning needs to be concise!
  • 7. At the end of the lesson I will be taking in your folders and marking what you have achieved in the last two hours.  Lets get as much done as possible  Plenary- Analysis of your targets and what you have achieved today.