![Part B
Final Idea Draft 2
Our new idea from making our opening sequence better.
Girlfriend and Boyfriend Relationship
• [Showing the day and time] Meeting up in a park (Roundwood Park), he
(John) will say that he have a surprise for her
• He takes out the ring and proposed to her (Lily) and she accepted his
proposal.
• [Next day, showing the day and time] John and another girl
(Nevaeh/close friend) are in the same park, talking and playing around.
• Lily saw John and Nevaeh and was shocked, thinking why he would do this.](https://image.slidesharecdn.com/openingsequencedraft2part1-120428091754-phpapp01/85/Opening-sequence-draft-2-part-1-7-320.jpg)
Opening sequence draft 2 part 1
- 1. Part A Draft 2 of the Opening Sequence Opening Sequence Genre: Drama Quizzical Ina Bayson- Blue Ramina Arlauskaite- Red Carolle Mafuta-Nkalu- Green Everyone- White
- 2. Part B Ramina’s Brainstorm • A young girl + boyfriend • Go to the same school • Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the boy’s girlfriend • The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend • In the end, girlfriend just lying down with blood on her mouth. WWW EBI Its all in short bullet points To put more description Easy to understand
- 3. Part B Carolle’s Brainstorms • The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying • *flashback* • Girl and boy kissing while watching TV • Her phone rings and boy takes it off her • Tries to hit her • *flash forward* • Shows her trying to cut herself again WWW EBI There’s flashbacks and flash-forwards Not unique- make it more Showing what happened before unique The start and the finish is the same (making Showing too much- only pieces audience know it about the girl) of puzzle
- 4. Part B Ina’s Brainstorm • Girlfriend+Boyfriend • Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe) • She accepts • Then, flash-forward: • of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding hands) • Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl WWW EBI Explains what will happen in it To add more details It have flash forward
- 5. Part B Strongest Idea Ramina’s Idea Ina’s Idea • It have conflict • It have suspicions – Most drama films have – Drama films can have conflict suspicions between – It have violence characters • Have transitions – Flash-forward to show what happened afterwards
- 6. Part B Final Idea Draft 1 • Used Ramina and Ina’s Idea together: • Girlfriend + Boyfriend • Having a date, then he proposes to her • Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily • He putting the ring in her finger *Flash forward* • The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl talking and play fighting • She calls him, he look at his phone and put it on silent
- 7. Part B Final Idea Draft 2 Our new idea from making our opening sequence better. Girlfriend and Boyfriend Relationship • [Showing the day and time] Meeting up in a park (Roundwood Park), he (John) will say that he have a surprise for her • He takes out the ring and proposed to her (Lily) and she accepted his proposal. • [Next day, showing the day and time] John and another girl (Nevaeh/close friend) are in the same park, talking and playing around. • Lily saw John and Nevaeh and was shocked, thinking why he would do this.
- 8. Part C Genre: Drama Fictional Stories Dealing with Consists of conflict in emotional themes some scenes between characters Drama Real life situations Themes Addiction Poverty Sub genre Violence Romance etc Tragedy Crime Docudrama (when a character act an event and exaggerates it a bit)
- 9. Part C Why did we chose this genre, example • Happens in real life – Shows that not all situations are perfect • Affects young married couples (not all) – Showing that they are still too young
- 10. Part C Conventions of Drama Moral Lessons Arguments Can have violence Love Audiences can/might relate to it Conventions Struggling (pain) Emotional scenes Deep emotions Conflict between Can be based in characters real life Misunderstanding
- 11. Part D Inspirational films My Amnesia Girl • Director: Genre: Drama, Romance, and Comedy – Cathy Garcia-Molina • Casts: – John Lloyd Cruz – Tony Gonzaga – Carlos Agassi – Etc. • Distributed by: – Star Cinema Magic • Released Date: – 24th November 2010 • Language: – Tagalog http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRUmkYM – English 1gFI
- 12. Part D Inspirational Scene When she’s recalling her memory when her Fiancée didn’t come to their wedding day She acts like she don't know him (lost her memory) Shocked that Long shot of her she doesn't Mid shot of her waiting for her heartbroken remember him Groom She told him that she didn’t lost her memory at all She told him the He is shocked that she truth lied to her
- 13. Part D Why is this film inspiring? • This film is inspiring for me, because… – Involves a relationship – Some scenes are very dramatic • When he found out that she was lying to him that she lost her memories. • She gets heartbroken when he runaway from their wedding day. • Leaving her at the altar. – Involves love, but she don’t want to get hurt by the same guy.
- 14. I Love You To Death Part D • Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to extremes when she finds he has been cheating. Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheating Long shot of Rosalee enter Mid shot of her with Two shot of Rosalee and the library books the librarian Time- 7:51/8:55 Mid shot of Rosalee point of view shot http://www.youtube.com/watch Mid shot of her looking at books as she see’s her husband kissing ?v=4Vp- to borrow from the library another women Z0u4Rhs&feature=related
- 15. Part D Character Representation Good/happy wife Mid shot of her smiling and Two shot, Serving her Two shot, they are having she seems very happy husband a drink conversation http://www.youtube.com/watc h?v=4Vp- Z0u4Rhs&feature=related Two shot, she loves being Two shot, kissing her husband next to her husband (protection)
- 16. Part D Character Representation Angry housewife Time- 00:00/00:53 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=related Rosalee hatred towards her husband because he cheated on her, she and her mother planning to kill her husband by over dose the food with sleeping pills, and different ingredient.
- 17. Part D Why is this film inspiring? • Its inspiring because… – At first everything was lovely – There are deep emotions • When she found out that he’s cheating – Very dramatic, revenge • Revenge to her husband
- 18. Part D Uslovia Kontrakta This film is a Russian film about two married couple, she lies to her husband she cant afford having babies because she has problems ( the truth is she lies to him because she doesn't wants to ruin her body.) A girl who gets married her sister accidently falls down on the glass table and has problems with her brainstorm. She Wants to get money to get the oppression done by her fiancé does not help her so she dumps him. Goes to another city to get a job she finds a job where she gives birth a gives away her baby to another people who cant afford them. So she decided to do it and get the money from the people who wants the baby. Afterwards the man gets into relationship with the girl and gets divorced with his wife finding out she was lying.
- 19. Part D The Part’s Inspired me... Talks to her best friend; decides to movie into a another country to find a job. When her sister falls down on the glass table. The fiancée talks to the girl showing the place she will be living in. She dumps her boyfriend for being selfish.
- 20. Part D When she decides to He finds out the truth that give away her baby. his fiancée was lying and ends the relationship. The end of them staying When she gives birth together. to a baby girl.
- 21. Part D Why is this film inspiring? • It’s inspiring because… – There are conflict between characters – Jealousy • Jealous about the other woman as she thinks that the woman is going to take her fiancée away – Moral Lesson • Losing her virginity
- 22. Part E Chosen theme, brainstorm for opening • Theme: Young Couples Close up Misunderstanding Flash forwards Showing emotions of Clips of after he a character/s proposed to her Mid-shot Brainstorm He took his phone out Boyfriend + Girlfriend to see who called him POV Other girl seeing them together Young and became + proposing engaged Cheating in a relationship
- 23. Research about our theme: Young couples Draft 1 • There are almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with their partner. • So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when it comes to relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may marry prematurely because the need for connection wins out. • Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity. • In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically. It is best to wait to marry until after about age 27 or so to ensure that this growth curve has begun to slow down. This reduces the chance that people will later come to realize that they didn’t really know themselves yet when they got married, as well as feel that they have grown apart from their partner. Part F
- 24. Part F Research about our theme: Young couples Draft 2 • Adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which almost are either married or living with their partner. • Many young couples rush to marry because they believe they're ready for the long- term commitment, Later on they face many difficulties like; Verbal Miscommunication Incompatible • Usually one partner will interrupt • teenagers realize they the other to find fault, debate the just want different truth or side-track to a new topic things during the argument. Nonverbal Communication • Women are often more adept at reading nonverbal communication • jump to conclusions about what their partner is thinking about before the partner has a chance to speak.
- 25. Research about our theme: young Part F couple Draft 2 Some may marry prematurely because the need for connection and to feel loved by someone. Family problems • Favouring or disfavouring family members • Divorce • Communication problems In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically Sleepover with friends First love/ relationship School/education and sharing secrets Future careers Playing ball with friends